Harry Potter: White Night Rose

The emotional line is quite sweet, the plot is novel and interesting, and the overall feeling is good, but some parts are quite OOC [laughing awkwardly]. For example, at the beginning, the heroine's mirror was confiscated and she didn't use the mirror to communicate. Draco was depressed and later went to Hogwarts. I didn't say goodbye to my family properly when I was there. I felt that I might be disappointed, but it was a bit too much. Draco still cared more about his family. Although they had been in contact for a long time, Draco would not be depressed because of this. It would have an impact, but it would not be like this. Later, Harry and the others accidentally broke the mirror, and Draco got angry and cast a curse. He was thinking about something else when he was scolded by SS. It feels like the author forcibly destroyed the character in order to set off Draco's love for the heroine. It's a bit OOC, but overall it's okay. The writing is very good and the plot is exciting [Sending Hearts]

Nice! Super pretty! The author's introduction describes the collision of the vastness of Russia and the arrogance of Britain, which is really special! Recommended to see it! An unexpected collision💥 A princess from the North Kingdom and an heir to an ancient British family, Decorah was so hooked that she willingly entered the princess's world and changed it. The setting of the princess heir is really awesome [love] I really like watching it! This book is different from some other fanfics in that it does not follow the story line of the original work, but creates the plot of the original work in its own unique way, such as the part about Dobby and the treatment of the basilisk, which is super interesting. My thesis is about the Russian Orthodox Church. The author's writing is super interesting and the author is also very active. When the author has something to say, he expresses some of his own views. It feels very attractive and it immediately tied the knot. All in all, it's good-looking 🤩 I'd love to see [admiration] for more updates! Come on, the author will write a lot! I will keep watching!

Highlights from the author 1. The heroine has a golden finger, which will purify the soul. The wizarding world has a religious setting. There will be words such as church, cross, Heavenly Father, etc. I apologize in advance if any beliefs are offended. 2. The heroine's stance is chaotic and neutral, and the family comes first. Voldemort's soul is useful to the family, so he will join the main line, but he will not become friends with the protagonist group. 3. Most of the plot is different from the original work, and the plot is adapted very strongly. 4. The heroine and Draco first met online and then went to Hogwarts to study Western magic. 5. The relationship with Draco is fast and accurate, with nurturing and pulling, and the heroine takes the initiative. 6. The author has a glass heart, generates electricity for love, and hopes to respect and tolerate each other. If you can't accept the settings, you can just delete it. You've all seen it here. If you're curious, just click on it and take a look. Welcome to Svetlana's world. Everything is for the family, for the family, for the family. It's not as fun as punching and kicking you right from the beginning. It has to be laid out for the family according to the development of the plot! !

So pretty, so pretty, so pretty! ! ! ! It comes from the author's last book. I rarely followed the series before but now I do it almost every day! The author's writing style has improved greatly compared to the previous book! At first, because the setting was novel, I wanted to support the author. As a result, I fell in love with the family, the plots are interlocking, and the writing is very good! The author also included pictures for some of the descriptions of jewelry and clothing, and it can be seen that he put great care into it. I originally wanted to wait until I read it all before reviewing the book, but I just couldn't help but praise it. The heroine is the Russian Grand Duchess, a real little princess. At first, he was locked up in a castle and lived a depressing life every day. Later, I accidentally met Xiaolong through a mirror, and became the first student to study in the UK. After they met, I was so sweet that I twisted and crawled, and Xiaolong and the heroine both have the demeanor of heirs. He didn't interfere with Xiaolong's behavior, but with excellent people around him, Xiaolong also became excellent. The heroine's family comes first throughout the whole story, and the second grade's battle of wits with Dumbledore strives for the interests of the family. To be honest, I didn't understand it the first time, but then I saw the author's explanation in the comment area, and I suddenly understood it! Teacher! I will always follow you! ! ! ! Promise me, more updates! OK! ! I want to protect the author! ! I really doubt what the reason is for such a good book to be criticized maliciously. Is it reasonable for Draco to kill everyone? A child with a unicorn wand cannot do such a thing, okay? The following is a bit of a spoiler, I hope everyone who clicks in can read it carefully and not be affected by the negative comments in the comment area. Except for necessary plot advancement, this article is almost entirely written around Draco and the heroine. Draco becomes better and better in the company of an excellent heroine. He has the heroine's preference, a strong family, and a broader vision... In short, he is far beyond his peers in all aspects, and he can really bear the pride of Malfoy. There are actually some negative comments in the comments saying that it always revolves around Harry Potter and Gryffindor, which is really speechless. The heroine is using the savior, to be precise, she is using everyone except Draco. I just prefer Draco. I really don't understand the mentality of not allowing Harry Potter to appear in Harry Potter fandom. Author! You must not be sad! I finally found a good author, and now I really come to see you every day. Big! Don't be offended by those people! ! Support! ! ! !

The heroine is like a queen! This pure blood is very elegant. How can the heirs who have been carefully cultivated since childhood not be as good as a group of lions. Draco doesn't just show off his temper. He will work hard to keep up with the heroine. He will not complain and disturb the heroine when she is busy with things. Instead, he feels that he has to work harder to stand by the heroine's side. In the early stage, the whole process is full of sweet stories, in the middle stage, we start to spread the net, plan the route, and finally close the net. The growth route is arranged very reasonably, and the cultural differences are well displayed without any drama. It's true that many other HPs always write the kind of plain language with funny jokes, which is very dramatic. This one is very good.

I've been following the last book since my last one, and it's so good! I have been particularly looking forward to the update of Boss, which is not only good-looking but also gives me a blind box surprise, because Boss is one of the few writers who does not include many original plots! ! Although it's a bit off topic, I'm really fed up with the superficiality of fan fiction and the stuffing of the original plot, so why else should I read fan fiction! ! This one is completely different from the last one! I like it so much. Hey, His Majesty and the Prince. Hey, hey. This time, some Catholic elements were added to the plot of the secret room, which really surprised me! Looking forward to a different plot in the future! ! Boss, update soon!

The big rice is so delicious. It looks so good. I really like Her Royal Highness the Princess and the little dragon. It reminds me of that story, that story of the princess being carried away by the dragon.

It is indeed a very Mary Sue novel with a heroine. I can't help but raise my lips when I see some sweet content, but it is true that I read relatively few novels with a heroine. This world is too perfect and too unreal. In addition to having no parents since childhood, the heroine seems to have the world falling for her in her subsequent life. Her intelligence, status, ability, love, friendship... All the good things have come effortlessly. People around her said that she was under pressure to "bear the weight of the crown if she wanted to wear it", that she was a small person who shouldered the mission of the entire family, that she was lonely... All of these not-so-"perfect" things were too far away from the ordinary me. I was the one standing at the graduation intersection rushing to recommend myself to her, not even Pansy, who initially knew she was "unworthy" of the Grand Duchess because of a little "jealousy". The heroine is the chess player who keeps everyone on her chessboard, but I am faced with almost everything unresolved. Compared with a character in a book, it seems too sensitive, too narrow-minded, and too self-pitying... But this is the first book that made me feel like this, but I have basically finished reading it. Maybe it is because I am older. I have mixed feelings when I read such a refreshing article. Maybe I should focus more on real life. Even if I am a chess piece, I can be satisfied with the position I have worked hard to achieve every step of the way.

If this book continues to develop with the current level of enjoyment and writing style, it will be ranked among the top three HP fanfics I read. The heroine's identity as a Russian princess is quite rare in HP! (I dare not say that other books do not have this identity at all, at least among the dozens of books I have read personally, it is the only one). The author has a very plump female protagonist! Lanna is not just a happy little girl in love, but what the author describes is a rich man, an outstanding heir cultivated by the royal family with all their efforts. This may be what attracts me the most? (I also like the description of jewelry! It feels like the description is very detailed, and there are basically pictures!) The plot has been changed a lot but most of the characters don't feel OOC! Some changes also make people feel that they are reasonable and even satisfying (Xiaolong's destiny is really good hahahaha) Another thing is that the author is really hard-working and writes several chapters a day (I originally wanted to read it all before writing a review, but I couldn't help myself). I hope you can still see a lot of plots and magic in the future! [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] @Everyone calls me to listen

I just finished reading the last word, and my heart seemed to be warmly illuminated by a small cluster of sunshine. I couldn't help but want to write something to tell my wife. As a reader of Harry Potter, I have seen too many unhappiness over the years - people who were broken, missed, and had no time to say goodbye in the original books. I have been secretly hoping that someone can give them a different possibility. So I am really lucky to meet your story. Thank you for creating Lanna. This Grand Duchess from the land of ice and snow blew into Hogwarts like a gentle wind. She is not the kind of golden finger that falls from the sky, nor does she try to "reverse" anything. She is just there, believing and protecting in her own way. Because of her tiny existence, some trajectories that were supposed to lead to tragedy have quietly changed. It was you who made me see that with a little kindness and a little persistence, those characters we love can move towards another life. When reading, I often think, you must love them very much. Because someone who truly loves you will not be willing to let you suffer meaninglessly. The protagonists in your novel will experience wind and snow, but they will not be drowned by it; you give them hardships, but always keep a light and a door for them. This kind of just right tenderness is more difficult to write and more touching than simply "cool" or "torture". I can feel that when you write every word, you are blessing them seriously in your heart. Precisely because there are so many unchangeable regrets in HP, we need such a parallel time and space - where Sirius can live with Harry, Dumbledore survived and solved the regrets that lasted for fifty years, the dean does not have to die with guilt and regret, and Xiaolong can meet someone who is willing to understand him. Thank you for constructing this time and space, allowing me to continue walking back to reality with this peace of mind after I close the novel. It's enough to make me feel warm in my heart when I think of it. May you and the world you write be treated with gentleness forever.