The Hidden Demon Immortal in Tokyo

I'll give it a 4 out of 5 for now. Honestly, the beginning was quite well-written, and the plot development was appropriate, flowing naturally step by step. However, later on, it felt like the author might have taken suggestions from the comments and made changes, which resulted in losing some of the earlier elements, making it feel a bit empty and rushed.

Merging with a person's soul is a dangerous practice.

Dear readers, this is my first novel, and I'm asking for your reviews. Every word, whether it's praise or criticism, is like a gentle spring breeze, a guiding light, and my strongest motivation to keep updating. I sincerely invite you to supervise the rest of the story. The road ahead is long, and I hope to borrow your discerning eyes to appreciate the scenery together. Looking forward to your reply, with deepest respect.

It's pretty good; the plot doesn't have any major flaws, and it suits my taste. I just hope there will be more interaction with the female characters, since it's labeled as having multiple female leads, right?

Three stars for the writing style, but the plot feels too familiar.

It's not bad. It explains the spiritual energy revival from the perspective of cultivators as the masterminds behind it all. It's just a pity that this limits the story to Tokyo. There are pros and cons. Hopefully, we'll see various forces develop and compete, with the protagonist as a pawn. However, the author somewhat downplayed the protagonist's own cultivation progress. Hopefully, we'll see some story advancements driven by the protagonist's own goals.

You're wearing a Japanese facade, but the content is all based on domestic practices. Why don't you just set it to domestic standards directly?

After finishing the Tokyo Naruto novel on Qidian, I've been looking for something similar. I've read several similar books on different platforms, but none of them were very good. This book has that same feel, and what's better about it is that the protagonist's personality is more to my liking.

After reading a dozen or so chapters, I feel like I've been bombarded with AL (Alien) content. The beginning is weird; how can someone who has become an immortal be fused with a mortal soul? You could drown ants with a single spit. What kind of female-oriented fantasy novel is this? The main plot is also strange. Why bother popularizing the supernatural and creating an organization?

This is exactly the kind of behind-the-scenes novel I imagined! It doesn't need a protagonist's perspective at all; the protagonist's creations stir up the era. The multi-perspective narrative ultimately converges on a pre-set major event. Plus, the writing style is quite good.