The Hidden Demon Immortal in Tokyo

I'll give it a four-star rating for the time being. To be honest, the writing is quite good, the plot development is also appropriate, and it's a smooth process step by step. However, in the later period, I felt that the author may have made changes after listening to the suggestions in the comment area, and instead lost some of the things in the early stage, making it seem a bit hollow and eager. In the new chapter, I even felt that I didn't know how to develop so I just gave it a try. I hope the author will not listen too much to comments and suggestions and just write according to his own ideas. After all, books written based on readers' suggestions will not do well... Looking forward to the author's follow-up content [Note]

Fusion with human souls is a poisonous point.

It's pretty good to watch, the plot has no obvious flaws, and it's quite to my liking. I just hope that I can write more interactions with female characters. After all, there are multiple female protagonists, right?

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Three stars for the writing, but the plot is too familiar

It's not bad. It explains the recovery of spiritual energy from the perspective of the immortal cultivator as the mastermind behind the scenes. It's just a pity that the story can only develop in Tokyo. There are pros and cons. I hope to see all the forces develop and compete in the future, and the protagonist is a chess player. Of course, the author has somewhat weakened the protagonist's own cultivation progress. I hope to see some story advancement because of the protagonist's development.

You are applying for Japanese leather, but the content is all based on domestic. Why not just set it to domestic?

After reading the Tokyo Naruto book at Qidian, I have been looking for a similar book. There are several similar books on several platforms, but they are not good. This book has that flavor, and one thing that's better than that one is that the character of the protagonist is more to my liking.

After reading more than a dozen pictures, I felt like I was being raped. The beginning is quite weird. How can you become an immortal and be fused with the soul of a mortal? You can drown ants with your spit. What a female fairy. The main plot is also quite strange. Why do you want to popularize the extraordinary and create an organization? There is no emotional value system. If you have this time, it is better to refine the world's top leaders. The world's leeks.

This is the behind-the-scenes novel I imagined. There is no need for the protagonist's perspective at all. The protagonist's creation stirs up this era. The multi-perspective narrative finally converges into the preset major event. Moreover, the writing of this article is excellent.