Aotu World: Transmigrated as a Shadow, I Help My Master Cut Down the Whole World

Overall it looks pretty good. The heroine and Palos get along pretty well, but it's a bit uncomfortable that the heroine takes advantage of the first meeting between Palos and Paley. For Paley, the person with the best relationship has also changed from Palos to the heroine.

It's really beautiful. The heroine's portrayal is absolutely amazing. The teacher's writing style is amazing, not OOC at all. The writing is very fascinating and beautiful. The visuals are really strong [shy] [loving], I also fell in love with [send heart]

One day after reading it, I wanted to review it because it hasn't been updated yet, but then I suddenly remembered that I haven't rated it yet. It's very interesting to watch, and the setting is very interesting. The character of the heroine is actually quite attractive, but I still feel that the transition between Paros and the heroine is a bit awkward in the middle. In this case, just watching the rest of the movie will only make you feel that Paros's attitude towards the heroine changes quickly. This makes me wonder what happened and made the relationship between the two of them so good all of a sudden. After all, Palos and the three pirates have been together for three years and they all distrust each other (except Perry) Besides, Palos is actually a bit sensitive to a certain extent. I feel that Palos should add a little more questioning and vigilance scenes. For example, after discovering that he has been betrayed, he will definitely recall it when he calms down and think about various phenomena. Then he will definitely ask the heroine. The supporting character scolded Paros and didn't take away the Yuanli Stone. To a certain extent, it was a kind of abandonment. But looking at the previous situation, Paros didn't know what would happen next. Did he really not think that he was abandoned because of the heroine? Although the heroine allowed him to successfully see a person clearly and help him. . Think Maybe I'm a bit over the top. After all, I'm used to thinking about what a person will think when encountering these things, and analyzing the logic of that person's behavior. If the teacher suggests it, I can say () sorry. But teacher, what you make is really delicious. I chew

The world view is quite complete, and it's a good article on Tomato from what I've read so far. The protagonist setting is quite interesting. As well as the character of Palos, the fear of the strong, etc. As well as his selfishness and cowardly withdrawal. This is more real than the charm of characters in many dream girl novels. This is who he is.

Teacher, teacher, do you accept the commission? Just wear a white dress and say "I do" Goddess! ! ! Mouth after mouth, it feels so good. Men see their menstruation, women see their nerves. This is the nemesis of depression and an alarm clock for vegetative people. It is so beautiful that the five-guarantee households in the village miss and love the widow. It is so beautiful that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood the Qiantang River. It is so beautiful. It is God and it is my rose. It illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful. Urgent update! ! ! ! I am also a Papa fan, but I rarely find Pampei's articles, and when I do, they are not to my taste. Let's not talk about the plot of the glass shards for now. It's fine. As long as Pappa can do well, have a wonderful competition process, not have any conflicts with the pirate group, and survive in the end, I will be satisfied. If we can live a better life on this basis, it would be perfect. Goddess, please update two more chapters. I believe you must still have 100 chapters saved. I am waiting for you to update now. During the days in school, I have been waiting for this.

I think the introduction is very interesting and the plot is also very interesting. The author must work hard to make more!

It's good... It's basically funny, but I feel like I'm not too surprised when I insert a little knife from time to time. (I'm not sure. I saw a book I liked before, and I followed it for more than a hundred chapters from the original thirty-five chapters, but suddenly a big surprise came up, which didn't embarrass me to death. I gave up reading.) It's good! It's good... It's basically funny, but I feel like there's nothing interesting about inserting a little knife from time to time... (I'm not sure. I saw a book I liked before, and I followed more than a hundred chapters from the original thirty-five chapters, but suddenly a big surprise came up. I was embarrassed to death. I gave up reading)

Nice. The progress is going well so far, and every step of the way is stepping on my sweet spot... I am looking forward to the plot of the reunion in the future... Why is there only so much? Can it be suddenly updated to a hundred chapters to surprise readers?

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