Anime Crossover: A Life of Total Freedom

I have read Chapter 44 so far, and I think it's pretty good, 4 stars. The main character of Succubus is written in a classic variety comic, and some of the interactions are quite interesting. The innovation is that the protagonist is a teacher, not the usual student. The problem is also obvious. It blindly emphasizes the protagonist's laziness and extreme energy conservationism (self-report), but his behavior is contradictory. He will take the initiative to help women when he sees them. There are too many female characters. Chapter 44 has already appeared Kasugano Sora, Ayase Saki, Shiki Morito, Yukinoshita Yukino, Shinomiya Kaguya, Hayasaka Ai, and Yu. There are a total of 13 female characters, including Yui Ubihama, Mahiru Yamana, and Nakano, who have a lot of interactions. The subsequent development needs the support of the author's writing, otherwise it will easily collapse; there is also the damn chocolate, which is everywhere at home, at school, and even on the road. The protagonist's head is filled with chocolate, which appears too much as a character.

It looks good, but the heroine has more than 100 million points. I'm afraid someone will disappear later. When we were soaking in the hot springs later, a male passerby peeked into the women's bathhouse. Although he probably didn't succeed, it was very poisonous. These are people from Shujiin, and their quality must not be low. It can only be said that they are extremely poisonous.

It's a good-looking manga, with an indigenous protagonist (not a flaw, but better than other reincarnated low-intelligence protagonists), a succubus attribute (a must-have, a type that is better than other male protagonists and even chases after them), and almost omnipotent (probably a world without demons, but top geniuses are qualified to open a harem). There are no special suppressions or lack of characters for the time being. There are many characters, and I was originally worried that the author would write it down, but so far the viewing experience is good. The protagonist or a certain character is not invisible, and the protagonist has a great role. The attribute of the protagonist seeing a beautiful girl being wronged and unable to walk is not bad. At least the author said it in advance. It is enough to trigger the plot. It is much better than other lazy and ruthless protagonists who passively have a relationship with the female character (the protagonist written earlier is so calm, but he breaks the story when he meets the female character), and it is not so awkward. In fact, when it was first recommended to me, I looked at the synopsis and found that there were too many characters, so I didn't read it (because it's generally difficult to write). After it was recommended to me several times, I read it and found that the author did write it well. I feel that I may have forgotten the characters more than the author.

It's hard to imagine how long the author has been following me to write such an article.

I have read the best, most integrated, and clearest manga among all the comics. If it has shortcomings, it is not pure love. But if you want to see pure love, you can read the original work, so why come to the manga? The manga is about showing more possibilities, allowing those unrelated girls to be connected by the protagonist (don't think about it if you want to see a boy, I haven't seen it yet), and there will be more stories. As for multiple girls , love is the character's emotion, and one of the key conditions for being able to write a character alive (as well as independence, thinking, etc., Love is the simplest, but if you want to write something that is not inexplicable, it depends on the writing style and the amount of ink). If two people have been together for so long and have solved the "heart disease", there is no love.

It is definitely the best fanfic in the variety comics. There are many heroines in the comics, which is good, but it also tests the author's writing skills. The heroine does not have OOC (this is better than most fan fiction) and each heroine has a very good display of the psychological activities and personality of the protagonist. For example, in Monopoly and Trial of Courage, the psychology and characteristics of each person are described. There are a few things to add here (in fact, when doing certain things in daily life, it can be stretched, don't transition to the next thing so quickly) Another problem is that the pace is a bit fast. When the protagonist is still in the first stage of his relationship with other heroines, he is directly eaten by Sha Ji, which is a bit abrupt. Moreover, there are many heroines, which means that some people do not have many appearances and scenes. For example, the five sisters only appear in every event. Then there's the protagonist. The female protagonists are actually a little blind to the protagonist's emotions. It's just that the protagonist gives verbal promises and comfort every time, pours some chicken soup, and talks some sense. Then the female protagonists like the male protagonist's feelings even more, but the actual actions are not well displayed. This may also be due to the protagonist's personality (and the protagonist's non-rejection of intimate behaviors, not taking the initiative [face covering]). They just write about how the female protagonist is, but the male protagonist's psychological changes are not much. That's all. I hope the author will listen to some suggestions. Also, the author's update speed is worthy of praise [Like] You must keep writing, author, I will give you small gifts and support you all the time [Please update]

Although there are some minor issues, I give it five stars because the author listens to readers' opinions. Also, if Violet Mai-senpai and those band girls (Light Music Club, Lonely Rock, GBC, Mygo, Mujica, Yaoshu, Old Bangbang, etc.) Are brought up quickly, can Violet be set to receive some long-term cross-dimensional notebook mission or simply travel through time or something? The author must have a good balance. As for the girl in the band, the main character is interested in it anyway, so it's normal to be interested in rock and roll, so bring it up quickly. If one day all of these are really integrated, and the setting is not too broken, and it is not too fond of the new and dislikes the old, then I will judge this book to be the top comprehensive comic on foreign persimmons [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

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The author would like to comment on himself. Although there are many minor problems, the author also hopes to see a work that everyone likes. [Blowing kiss]

It's a very easy-to-read comic. I've read a lot of comics, but the plots are boring or the writing is terrible. This one is very comfortable to read [make faces][make faces][make faces]