Controlled by Tang San from the Start, Elder Yao Steps In to Save Yuhao
开局被唐三控制，药老出手救雨浩
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 288k Words
- Updated
- 11mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
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It's okay, it just feels a bit messy, I can't say it's messy, it's just that the plot connection is not smooth enough. It feels like the author writes whatever comes to mind, just like the article says that the protagonist absorbed the gold of living things, but does not say where he got it from, as if the reader will know by default. Some people also appear suddenly, and some people disappear as soon as they are written. Moreover, the overall writing is very different from the original work. There are some parts that are completely different from the original work. It is because he does not describe why this situation occurs, and some parts are based on the original work. But he didn't write the plot of the original work at all. Causes it to look incoherent. It will be completely different from the original book later on. If you want to read it, you can read it as a new book. I feel like this book could be written more coherently and logically. It will look good