Back to the Republican Era with a System: My Teammates Are All Big Shots

The subject matter should be quite good, but the writing style may need to be improved. I listened to it. Sometimes I was fascinated by it, and the next second I immediately heard the drama. Some of the sentences felt a bit, uh, stiff and too repetitive. Sometimes it doesn't need to be too detailed. I feel like, for example, "She started to look at..." "She started to eat wontons." It's probably like this Speaking of words, I feel that these words are very naive, just like when I was writing essays when I was a child, hahaha, but I am listening and commenting now, and it sounds okay now. This kind of words is less like,,, I have read chapter 16 now, mainly because I really can't stand those "she just...", "She just...",,, So I am commenting. Uh, okay, I'm not talking about Daha, maybe it's my own habit. After reading it again, there were a lot of "just...", Otherwise I can put it another way. I have read so many novels, and this is the only one. I feel good at the moment, and I can continue reading, but sometimes I can't understand the small words and descriptions. It's too easy to get into trouble, like a machine for describing emotions... The above comments are only my own thoughts, not directed at anyone.

It looks good, except for some introductions that are a bit confusing, but fortunately, they will be introduced later, and I gradually get to know the heroine. The character is also very good, and she works so hard in the training space, which makes me admire her. Then maybe she is not very powerful and decisive at the beginning, but she grows slowly. I was a little disappointed at the beginning, especially The heroine wanted to take risks herself and did not want to hurt innocent people. When she saw such a righteous protagonist at first, she was a little stunned. After thinking about it, she must have such a person, so she accepted it. But I still want to say that you can say something like "thinking about mom modernity" once or twice, but don't appear too much, otherwise it will appear too pretentious. The heroine's system is very good, she lacks nothing. Anyway, she is a lightning protection, and she can't accept it. The heroine is a very righteous person, so it's best not to watch it. Otherwise, when the heroine cooperates with other people, she will give away a few bottles of medicine and feel that she is at a loss. Also, the things the heroine sells are quite cheap at the beginning, but the market price rises rapidly later, and they are no longer that cheap. And there will be a lot of girls in it. Except for Wang Manchun, no one else will target the heroine because of a man, and most of them will be friends with the heroine. The heroine's character itself also has shortcomings. I wanted to say that she was a virgin at first, but as I continue to read, I can only use the word justice to describe it, which may not be completely summarized, because the heroine will help the military commander, central commander, the Red Army, and even ordinary people, except for the little devils, and is even willing to take risks. She has the spirit of the previous era, as if she was raised by a military family. After all, if it were me, I would help my family if I had the ability, but the premise is always to ensure my own safety. I like this book, but the author's writing style still needs improvement

The author should improve his writing. The subject matter is good and you can read ten lines at a glance. Chinese is so powerful that even if your writing is not good, it will not affect your reading. But listening to the book is really embarrassing. I suggest you listen to the book yourself after finishing writing, so as to improve your writing skills. Tomato's sweet girly voice is very clear, highly recommended [laughing]

It's very interesting to write. The heroine is not very powerful from the beginning. She changes little by little with the help of the system. Her timidity at the beginning is very suitable for her identity as a time traveler. After all, a girl will be afraid of everyone from the peaceful age to the Anti-Japanese War era.

It's probably a newbie writing a book, and it feels like the heroine is playing a stand-alone game. Her writing skills still need some practice. Because it is easy for newcomers to write essays like those in current domestic dramas, with only two people talking in an empty scene. Giving four stars is an encouragement

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I've been following the update for so long and found that I haven't written a book review, so I'm going to write one. How can I put it, although the golden finger is a bit wide, but it is also trained by the heroine day after day. I just hope that the heroine will not be caught. The heroine just wants to complete her goal step by step. Except that the plot may be a little dull, but it is already good to catch up. I look forward to the heroine starting her next branch line.

Yes, the content is rich and colorful, covering several story lines, including Island Flying Eagle, The Pretender, Bright Sword, Agent Group 5, Seamless Clothes, etc. The content is well connected so far, and the author is encouraged.

This book has many interesting points, and readers can discover them on their own. Thoughts after viewing: The author is really talented and fun-loving, I give it five stars [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

It's so fun to read. Although it's huge, it's really cool. The front part feels a little cluttered, but the back part is much better. I feel like the author is making progress. Cheers for the author. [Blow a kiss]