Online Gaming: The Deathly Rivers and Lakes

Overall, it is a good article. The story line is clear and the conflicts are very gripping. It makes people want to follow up. It's just that the author's monologue at the end of each chapter slightly affects the viewing experience. It feels familiar once or twice, and it's inevitable that there will be a bit of a drama if the chapters are included. If these words can be moved elsewhere, or condensed into occasional update reminders, the reading experience will be much better. I hope the author can listen to readers' suggestions and write better! I'm convinced, the author has to say a few words at the end of each chapter! Seriously ruins your reading mood

The story has a good setting and looks good, and I have the desire to follow it. I have dozens of books on my bookshelf and I don't want to read them anymore. I hope the author will continue his efforts, dominate the novice village as soon as possible, and get out of the novice village as soon as possible. Masters must develop in an all-round way. They cannot be limited to one martial arts, just see if they can master more martial arts. Come on for more!

The writing is very good. It is one of the few Tomato articles that I can read. Some of the things I dislike about it are just my personal preference. Generally speaking, it is better than other Tomato articles.

It's super good-looking. The protagonist likes to make trouble, has nothing to do with Gou Dao, and also likes to leave life and death to others, especially in more than 200 chapters. He obviously can ignore it, but he still wants to leave life and death to the county magistrate. He is very smart, as smart as the author. The author explained that flattering the county magistrate will result in leaving life and death to the county magistrate. I gave up first.

The overall story is quite good. The plot of Xinghua Village is also very exciting. I suggest you separate the specific levels of strength. How does a martial arts expert reach the level of skin training and flesh training? Is it martial arts practice plus drug bath polishing or something else? The protagonist The Jiuyou White Bone Claw has two levels, as well as the Tai Chi Sword. Is it already at the Skin Training Realm, or is it just a simple attribute that has reached the level of strength but is not yet at the Skin Training Realm? The specific conditions of the realm can be expressed progressively, as well as internal skills and the like.

The setting is well written and the protagonist is strong, but the shortcoming is that there are too many conspiracies. Now that I have finished watching it, there are a lot of conspiracies that have not even been released in the county. I am guessing this and that and the person behind it. Let's just say that the theme is Jianghu, not suspense. You don't need so much brain power and so many secret targets to promote it. Thinking more about how to become stronger and practicing kungfu is the way to go, even if you just do it.

This is a work that can easily draw readers into the texture of the story. There is no ostentatious rhetoric or deliberately created dramatic conflicts. It just uses gentle but weighty brushwork to unfold the struggles, perseverance and relief of ordinary people in the torrent of time. The characters in the book are never floating symbols. They have tangled weaknesses, reckless bravery, and the resilience to move forward even after tossing and turning. Every detail is like reflecting a certain figure that you and I have seen before. It will not forcefully affect your mood with strong emotional stimulation, but it will suddenly remind you of a certain plot in a daily moment after a long time of closing, and you will suddenly understand the tenderness and thickness hidden behind the words. This kind of long-lasting reading experience is exactly the precious experience that most fast-paced works cannot give.

The writing is good, the plot is a little slow, but the content is substantial, the words are meaningful, and the characters are well drawn. However, compared to other cool articles, it lacks decisiveness in killing in some places, but it is quite consistent with the actual situation. However, some people may find it poisonous, but there are not many poisonous points. The whole story is still very interesting. If you continue reading, you can't bear to skip chapters! Besides, the author should be a very interesting person [laughs]

After seeing Chapter 94, the overall impression is very stable. The suspense is very intriguing. There is obviously a big hand behind the game controlling the field, but there is no trace of it. The more I watch, the more I want to know who it is. But the protagonist is a true Buddhist. He knew clearly that there was a culprit, but he didn't investigate, pursue, or act resolutely. He just kept doing his own thing the whole time, which makes people anxious. He obviously has clues, but he insists on being a "timeless and peaceful player", which makes me feel worried for him. The rhythm is comfortable and the atmosphere is on point; the disadvantage is that the protagonist's initiative is too weak and the feeling of breaking the situation is missing. Keep chasing, and wait for the day when the mastermind shows up and the protagonist becomes enlightened.

Yes, the first few chapters made me want to continue reading. I give it five stars, so go for the author. When listening to a book, you can hear the author's words at the end of each chapter. If the book you wrote is good, you don't need to talk about it in every chapter. If the book is not well written, it will be useless and will only annoy the listener.