Apocalypse Shelter: The More Beauties, the More Invincible

If it was really a person with spiritual powers, then Su Chen would admit it! Are your unallocated attribute points urging you on? ? ? . . . . . Is the protagonist PD SD? I just said that loyalty will never decrease, and later I said that I hope you will not have any thoughts of betrayal. He is the only person in the whole science and technology museum who does not want to be in any danger. If you die, everyone else will also die. Why are there resurrection items? I have a very straightforward question, why does the protagonist want the A-level healing power but not the other two S ones? Can you get anything better? I didn't give a reason. There were four places inexplicably, but I only used one. I also took a healing one, and I didn't use the other ones. This battle is too boring. Did the school doctor use his powers? There are also superpowers for everyone in the sanctuary. You can at least write a wind, a fire, a thunder and lightning, or a wall. Even if it is a little weaker, just rush forward and slash twice, breaking the wall. I don't feel like anyone else has done anything. This battle is not described at all. If you ask me to write, I will write these. Fenghuo Leiden just stood on the spot, and then wrote down the specific performance, including holding the crossbow all hard, then I asked the other party to use more force, then walked in slowly and strode, and then chopped the door with two swords, so that it would be shocking. Although it is a very simple battle that I casually imagined, it is still better than not writing at all. If it's a very white doomsday, cool article, you can read it, but you can't think at all, especially subconsciously. It's a classic plot. If you don't acquire powers in advance to adapt and train, you only acquire them temporarily during battle, which makes me think you have any limitations.

The writing is very good. There is nothing poisonous about the harem. The writing style is also good. The plot is quite reasonable. Why is it a big problem? It is an above-average level of doomsday novels. It is better than the 9 stars given by some so-called 5000-hour book reviews.

I personally think it's pretty good-looking, but some minor flaws are inevitable. It's a post-apocalyptic story, with a ruthless character and good reviews. It doesn't show any signs of accepting girls. I see that there is no licking plot. It's good to have your own power. You don't have to be bitter and do everything yourself.

The writing is very good, and the girl is also decisive. Why is the rating a bit low, and the number of viewers is not many. What is going on? Is it being controlled by the higher ups? Can the author himself buy traffic promotion? Readers who like cool stories about post-apocalyptic harems should not hesitate to come in.

Objectively speaking, this book is well written. The subject matter is very clear, and the context of the article is not confusing. It is very refreshing and makes people want to read it. Occasionally there are one or two small points that are not harmful. However, I hope the author can slightly reflect the role of super powers. I feel that this aspect is very weak. There is no sense of existence except for the protagonist. Come on.

Okay, really cool article. The only shortcoming is that you clearly wrote the word loyalty wrong, but you think you wrote it right [face covering]

No licking, no pressing, quick revenge, I think it's ok

Nice pot rice with harem story [laughter]

Nothing too poisonous, just take a look

It's okay, the logic and coherence are pretty good.