Surviving the Apocalypse with a System

I am a new writer. I have read apocalyptic books for many years, so I decided to write one myself. I hope everyone will like it and give me some suggestions. Too many people have written about the rebirth of a male protagonist in the apocalypse, so I positioned the male protagonist as a story about an ordinary person who travels to the apocalyptic world. So he may have many shortcomings like ordinary people at the beginning, but in the end he becomes decisive and decisive, unlike many male protagonists who are still virgins despite being reborn once. Arrange two powerful female protagonists of the rebirth style, one of Mu Xinyi's mechanical style and one of Xia Zhiqing's cultivating immortal style. These two people are decisive in killing and their enemies will not stay overnight. It's a harem flow, but each girl will have her own characteristics and style, and they will all be helpful to the plot, and they won't fall in love with the male protagonist for no reason. The world before the end of the world was a world where descendants of the once wealthy families, gods, gods of war, miracle doctors, and killer kings lived. The Huaxia Kingdom is the strongest country, but the internal aristocratic families have their own agendas, so the overall strength is strong, but it is divided into several major aristocratic families. The Ye family, the godly tycoon in the east, the Xiao family, the miracle doctor in the west, the Shura Chu family in the south, the Ning family, the god of war in the north, plus the strongest Qin family in the capital and the Su family in the magic city. The opponents are all kinds of strange mutated zombies, those families with evil intentions, various biochemical weapons modified by the American Empire, the Holy See of Light and the Dark Parliament in the West, as well as marine life, and there are constantly invading monsters from other worlds. However, the hero will not be written to continue to upgrade in other galaxies, and all the stories will end on Blue Star. I hope you all like it and give me more feedback.

The main character is too bad and abusing the main character. The plot is also very old. In this book, the heroine Su Qianyu was forcibly taken away by her family, and the protagonist was seriously injured. Although I didn't read the rest of the book, there is a high probability that Su Qianyu was married into the family, and the protagonist went to save her.

I have read many apocalyptic novels that are similar to this one. I just can't figure out whether the protagonist has an antisocial personality in peacetime or something? An ordinary person can kill zombies with a knife on the first day of the apocalypse without feeling anything. There is no need for a little mental construction or any changes to make the protagonist change. Anyway, as an ordinary person, I can't kill people or force women to do anything in the apocalypse. The most I can do is stay away. After all, the apocalypse only lasts one day, and I have lived in peacetime for more than 20 years. How can I change immediately?

Let's take a look at Chapter 57. People with a system can't compete with others. There will be awakening agents in the last days, but the system is useless. Also, the male protagonist can't protect a woman who sleeps with him and likes him. He doesn't protect a woman who hates him. This kind of person is called a bitch.

He's pretty good, he's decisive in killing, he's willing to take revenge and he's willing to complain, and he doesn't like him when he likes him. He can't stand the boss who already has a system. He's powerful, and there's no shortage of food. He still says that he can't find women in the last days. I despise him. The only drawback is that it is too short and ends hastily.

The plot is good, the harem is well received, the anti-bone system has many pitfalls. It's not a cool novel. The protagonist has defensive skills except for his strong physical fitness. He retreated when he saw the trouble.

It's okay, and it's a good review when driving.

Others are better than the protagonist, and others are the protagonist?

Why is the plot boring if there are so many perspectives from supporting characters?

What was written in such a mess?