Sun and Moon in Discord: Am I a Master of Causality Too?

A good fanfic, the combat performance is more in line with the original work. Looking at many Sun and Moon fandoms, this one respects the law of cause and effect quite a lot, and gives it to the protagonist at every turn. The law of cause and effect, good job, don't lose points, give these time-traveling protagonists a hard one. However, can the author write less about killing people? People don't have to die when writing about them (could it be that you are a fan of Ji Yueren?)😠😡🤬 The writing is only okay, and the plot design is relatively logical. There are so many pitfalls, have you figured out how to fill them in, author? Finally, I hope the author can update twenty or thirty chapters so that readers can enjoy reading it all at once.

There is no logic problem in this fanfic, and it is original. The "reincarnation" setting was a bit shocking when it came out. It is an innovation based on the original "The Same Fault in the Sun and the Moon". It is very good-looking. It is not as stiff as other "The Same Fault in the Sun and the Moon" fanfics. It is ranked among the best among the "The Same Flow in the Sun and the Moon" fanfics (I originally wanted to say it was number one, but it may be a bit of a rip-off). In short, it is very good-looking and the updates are guaranteed. I hope the author will not run away. It is really difficult to find a fanfic of "The Same Fault in the Sun and the Moon" of this quality.

Very good, please write more about the relationship between the lazy sister and the protagonist😋

Hello author, I have been quietly following your fan works. The sense of fate (or fate) between Shuizawa Jun and Gongsun Ling who "shared the same darkness of night, but breathed towards the two poles of dawn" deeply touched me. Their feelings (which I think are still there, including Gongsun Ling's relationship with the protagonist) are in this kind of epic (before and after the 11th Battle of Cause and Effect). They are the gaps in the hero's armor and the place where the light enters. In the grand chapter written in the war between Dharma seekers and Dharma corpses, those unfinished vows (we will still walk together on the road ahead, right?), The love that is too late, and the tenderness that must be betrayed, are like gold sinking into the epic riverbed. Totally immersing me in their world. As a reader, my heart beats for every interaction they have, and I worry about the possible separation. No matter which ending you choose, I want to thank you for creating such a touching story. If I can tell you a small wish: I secretly hope to see them find the light of each other. No matter what, I will cherish all the emotions of following this story All in all, can it be a happy ending? Please🥺[crying] I hope you can see it [almost crying]

Among Sun and Moon fans in Tomato, it is already a rare good book. The crossover between ancient and modern plots is quite good [shy][shy][shy]

There's nothing wrong with the logic, the combat power isn't overwhelming, and my senses look pretty good. The timeline is based on the protagonist's past (Gongsun Ling's era), and there are other timelines interspersed with it, so it doesn't look confusing.

It's a very good book among the fanfics about Sun and Moon.

Yes, it's just that the literary talent and emotional depiction are a bit lacking, but I respect the original work and the setting doesn't make the drama out of place. I'm a little afraid to read it. After waiting for so long, Yishui is not sure whether reincarnation is really useful or whether the people who come back are real. So can the author give an accurate answer? Is the ending going to be he? [Almost crying]

It's a relatively good-looking Sun and Moon fic. I hope there are more of them. After all, they are all fics. I hope they can change some things and make the ending better. It's really good-looking. I think Sun and Moon are number one at the moment. I have my own opinions. Unlike other fans, I feel a little awkward watching it. Although it has been revived recently, I am still afraid that it will be discontinued again, which is somewhat unsettling... In short, Super Invincible is good-looking (although the front is a bit messy due to multiple narratives). The only discomfort is that I feel that the plot development will be biased...

Just give yourself a brief review.