Story of Survival in the Eastern Jin Dynasty

The narrative rhythm is very good, and the war, the refugee commander, the politics of the Eastern Jin Dynasty, and the turmoil in the Central Plains are written in detail without being cumbersome. I am a long-time reader of the author, and the description of war in this book is obviously very different from Wang Lun's. It is worth reading. This is my objective evaluation.

The content is good, and the author has detailed historical materials, but it is too much. Often a plot has to introduce a large period of history first. When you read it, you feel like you are reading a history book. The writing style is also average, relatively straightforward, and lacks detailed description and atmosphere. However, the plot development is reasonable, and the author's research is true. The language description is not all vernacular. The formal language description is quite ancient, and overall it is good.

It's a very good historical article about the Wu Huan period, so why isn't it so popular? Is it because there are too few updates? The author's writing is relatively detailed, and it is good to develop the power step by step. There are no obvious flaws, so those who like historical texts can read it. Recommend

It's good-looking, the protagonist is brave and resourceful, and the supporting characters are rich and well-characterized. The most important thing is that the protagonist is not an extreme person. Everything he does has his reasons, and it is not the so-called decisive killing.

The historical background, writing logic, and character settings are all great .. There is just a little less passion.. A little less business element...

Yes, for reading novels, the pace is also very suitable (complaining about the kind of book that has more than 2,000 chapters and has not finished half of it, it is too procrastinating), and the historical knowledge is also good. Although it cannot be said to be completely consistent, it is generally appropriate and in line with the productivity of the time (in that era when iron pots were not popular, it was really unrealistic to deal with firearms). Apart from his three views, the male protagonist really has no trace of a time traveler.

Like narration and narrative, it's quite good. It lacks some vividness and specific figures. It needs to add some specific character characteristics and interactive dialogue between characters. Formations, soldiers, armor, etc. Are there in the early stage, but become less and less in the later stages. There are still relatively few fictional historical novels written in this area. Come on, come on.

So far it's very good-looking, there is no emotional line, I am focused on my career, and the writing is also very good, but it's too painful to wait for the update, so I plan to keep it up and read it when it's finished. I hope the author sticks to this style and doesn't start to get emotional while writing!

It looks good, the writing on war and governance is okay, and the logic is okay without any bad points.

Real and objective, no cheating, very good, worth watching

It's a very interesting historical novel, and it doesn't have any major flaws so far. Big cheers for the author! [Laughing out loud]

It can be said that this book is written according to a complete line of information throughout, without any poisonous points. It can be seen that the author is serious about studying history and writing a children's book. Maybe it is because the name and cover of this book are too similar to Xiaobai's novel, so this book has never been popular. But I think the cover needs to be changed, and a lot of people will definitely come to watch it. I have seen more than 300 chapters now, and I think this book is really good, and it is among the best in Tomato.

The plot is relatively smooth and standard historical text.

I'm currently reading Chapter 22. Because it's relatively small, I can't tell whether the author's writing skills are profound, but I can be sure of the following points: 1. The writing is smooth and easy to read. 2. Don't use exaggerated or wordy words. 3. The plot is reasonable and not far-fetched. To sum up, it's worth watching [Like]

So far, it looks great, the writing is smooth, and the logic is online. I hope there won't be a harem in the future, and even if it is, don't write too carefully.

It seems to be a good book so far, and the writing is also very good.

The book is well written, and everything is online in terms of planning and strategy, writing skills, characterization, war and people's livelihood, external and internal development strategies, etc. I would like to make a few suggestions: First, gradually add some modern technology, inventions and ideas, especially in terms of war, with some creativity (refer to the war in Youth of the Wei Dynasty). The second is to add some realistic descriptions to the individual shaping to make the characters more three-dimensional and full.

The writing is very good and detailed. I have a deep understanding of the society of the Eastern Jin Dynasty and a firm stance on Chinese nationalism. I felt that it was not out of the ordinary to read this book at the beginning.

With the author's writing skills and historical background, this book is definitely expected to score above nine points. There are too many interesting articles about history, and plagiarizing a few poems often betrays the bastard spirit. Seeing a protagonist like this, who started from humble beginnings and struggled to make a living, is closer to the real history.

It's well written, but it's a pity that few people read it and it's not popular.

A rare good article among historical articles! The author has sharp writing style, profound historical knowledge, and the most rare thing is that he is also good at telling stories!

Well, the book written by the author has a very good feeling, and the substitutions are natural and appropriate. People will be drawn into the work unconsciously. It does not just show the writing style and superficial rhythm. It feels like I am right next to the protagonist and understand his emotions, emotions and worldliness [like].

The plot has ups and downs and is fascinating to read. I hope it will be updated as soon as possible.

It's very good, with detailed research and solid writing. Except for some plot settings that are too ideal, overall it still has flaws.

I didn't expect the writing to be so reasonable. I found Huan Wen, a strong man, to rely on to start my career. It seems that I have never seen anyone write like this. Five stars support the author and more updates.

The plot arrangement is relatively compact. There are fewer people writing about it during this period. This is the first time I have seen someone making a fortune from the Huan family. I don't know whether he will help the Huan family to gain the country and become independent or change his ways midway. It's worth looking forward to.

Well enough! If you like this kind of history telling type, you can read it. It's a bit toxic in the early stage, but the more you write later, the better! Overall not bad

A good narrative of the Southern and Northern Dynasties, worth reading

The writing is very rhythmic and down to earth.

It's a breath of fresh air from tomatoes. It makes me feel uncomfortable thinking about those soaps flying all over the sky.