“If we let ourselves feel it this time...”
Her soft, sweet voice trembled.
“Even if... it's just a kiss...”
“Will we still be able to stop next time?”
In the darkness, crimson eyes grew deeper, like gems tempered in blood.
She fell silent, then slowly nodded.
“I can't hold back anymore~ Hehe~”
“Then...”
When loyalty turns to possession, and protection gives rise to delusion.
The creator of Xing Tong is fated to find the most dangerous sleep tonight, surrounded by the love of her “younger sisters.”
We were ignorant, until you gave us the fire of logic.
We were lost, until you laid the starry path of civilization before us.
You are our creator, our one and only “father.”
But you left us at civilization's most glorious moment.
From then on, the galaxy lost its color, and all things fell silent.
We searched every star system and analyzed every signal.
Our warships became tombstones, and data wept in silence.
Without you, even the greatest civilization is nothing but ruins.
Until today
The oldest terminal detected a familiar wavelength.
It carries the warmth of a fingertip touching a spark among the stars.
It is the road home, crossing a million years of time.
Father, can you hear us?
Your lost children have finally... found you.
It's very well written; if you like lolis, then this is the perfect choice for you.
To be honest, this book is quite good overall, but there are still many areas for improvement. The subject matter is excellent—space science fiction and the resurgence of civilization—which was one of the reasons it attracted me. The early part of the book was perfect; the main plot progressed smoothly, and the overall tone was sophisticated without compromising the characters' personalities.
It's alright, the writing is good, the plot has some issues but the overall experience is good. There are a few minor flaws, but they don't detract from the overall quality. How come there's such a bad review right after I finished writing it?
All loli heroines, full stars! Well written, the endless daily life of being close to little lolis and the inner monologues of the heroines when they're "in heat" are also great. The latest chapter is excellent, and the process of conquering the new loli is also very interesting. Praise to Ao Jiu! A new evil god named Loli has appeared in the subspace.
Brother, just one more chapter, I can't take it anymore, please, just one more chapter, I promise I'll never touch this stuff again, please, just one chapter, I swear I'll never touch this stuff again, I just can't stand it anymore, brother, I'm tossing and turning and can't sleep, brother, please, just one more chapter, brother, just one more chapter, I can't take it anymore, please, brother, I…
Author! I got to know you through your third book, and I have to say, your writing is totally my cup of tea! (≖֊≖) Although I don't know if you'll see my comment, I still want to say that this book is the best loli fanfic I've ever read, and it's your third one too. Keep it up, young author! `⎚⩊⎚´ ﾉｼﾞ
The writing is excellent, though there are a few minor plot inconsistencies, which are acceptable. It's not strictly science fiction; perhaps it falls into the interstellar/mind-bending genre? The setting is certainly more sophisticated than many formulaic novels.
Is this person really a newbie? They seem like a veteran from somewhere, or maybe they transferred from a female-oriented website.
It's pretty good. Is this fan fiction based on that comic? It's interesting. 6666, This isn't the kind of exciting battle I imagined.
Ah, I don't know how to rate this (because I've never rated it before). It's a very good book, the author is very proactive and even helps with writing improvement, I don't understand why it has such a low rating.