Game Descends: Reborn as the Mother of Monsters

There is nothing else to say. It is a good thing to have more works that tend to focus on the female protagonist's narrative. There are some commendable things, so I leave a comment. However, the article is too packed with words and contains long paragraphs. It gives the impression that it is not focused on the protagonist and plot development. It has a strong feeling that the words and actions of the main and supporting characters are included in order to add depth to describe this pile of jealousy. Good sublimation does not always need to be output in large pages. A paragraph or even a sentence at a key point is far more effective than this. Secondly, what needs to be portrayed in a clear human-system story is the characters and plot. The core of the protagonist is very hollow, the tension is very limited, and the interweaving and advancement of the plot are very flat and sluggish. In summary, it is recommended that the author learn how to deal with writing descriptions and plot endings in works that have a long-term reputation. This is just my personal opinion. If you don't agree, you don't need to reply to me.

Personally, I feel very good. I like the character of the heroine very much, and the direction of the story is also very good. The only drawback is that in full-text search, the author used the word jealousy in two places, but most of them used jealousy. I hope the author can change the other two places to jealousy soon. I just When I started pursuing this book, I was almost dissuaded from reading it because I was jealous of the full-text search. I believe some people may be like this too, so they didn't read it. After the changes, it should be able to increase the number of readers. I can only say that it still needs encouragement. Come on, author, I will keep reading [Sending Hearts] I was attracted to fans mainly because the concept of the first copy was very good. The part about the homophonic word for "rat" was revealed to be a woman. I was shocked again. I hope the author can write more copies with concepts related to women.

It's quite good to watch, the writing is obviously improving, the plot doesn't have any flaws, and there should be no swear words or naughty words. The past and present life of the heroine is also less abusive and more enjoyable, which is a good impression. [Full] deserves four stars, five stars to encourage the author! At present, it seems that the plot is in the early stage, and I will follow up on it in the middle and later stages.

The setting and creativity of the novel are very good. I like the setting of the mother of monsters and the cute little shadow. The inhumanity of the little monster is also very good (I like this feeling that my mother loves me, and my mother must love me). The only drawback is that the novel is written like a prose hahahahaha, which makes it a bit tiring to read. There are too few dialogues and it looks more like a memoir. Then those interspersed stories before rebirth, with a lot of self-monologues and emotional catharsis, will make the characters un-three-dimensional and overly subjective. There can be more attractive three-dimensional characters, characters with good and bad qualities. After all, human nature is very complex, and describing the world from multiple perspectives should also make the world more grand. But that doesn't mean you shouldn't take the lone wolf route! ! ! It means meeting more charming characters, who can be collaborators or opponents. But all in all, the plot of the novel is very well designed, and I really like the ability of the Mother of Monsters. Recently, I have been loving some novels with keywords such as "non-human", "monster/mother of bugs", and "nest". Moreover, the little monsters described are so cute, I want to raise them too! Come on, author! [Blessed soon]

Overall, it passed the test, but there are some issues that I think are not good. The first one is that the author often writes a long list, which makes me blind and a bit incomprehensible, like a literary youth disease. The second problem is the first dungeon. When Li Feiyang was confronting the heroine, the heroine thought about what she said in her previous life, which probably meant that this society often buries women's talents. But instead, it was the woman who took the lead in committing the crime, and then I felt separated. The third one actually doesn't have any problem, it's the word about loving women. This word about loving women will definitely appear in a few chapters. And if you don't like this word about loving women, don't read it. It's quite high in content. The fourth thing is that I hope the author can explain these concepts more grandly. This subject matter is quite good. If the subsequent writing is better, I will follow up and review it.

Although I didn't understand it when I first watched it, I became impressed by the charm of the protagonist as I read on. Woof woof woof. [Top post]. Hey, don't worry about these details. When I read Chapter 20, I was conquered by the author's great and exquisite writing style. It's a feeling that makes your whole body tremble when you watch it. How can you write so well? [Love]ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧Super awesome. The author's description of human nature is very powerful! It reminds me of many images. Well, I feel the same way. While I may not have experienced any of these things, well, don't worry about the details. Okay, that's all. I am going to continue to appreciate this perfect article that cannot be more perfect. ^⎚˕⎚^(I am ruthless) This is really well written! (｀•ω•´)ゞSaluteっ(Salute)ʚ •͈˽•͈ ིྀɞ No, why am I back? Don't worry about these details. Why do you think there is such a perfect article? When I was short of books, she came to my bookshelf like a god. What to do? After I finished chasing it, I was starving for books again. But I want to see it again. What should we do? It's so difficult! (Dark and twisted version of crawling in bed in the early morning)ε(´｡•᎑•`)っ♡(Let's add a cute kaomoji.)

Incredibly beautiful. Totally mommy. . The strictest mother. The most gentle mother. The gentlest mother. The most loving mother. The most cold-blooded mother.

In summary, it's pretty good, but sometimes the previous reading was a bit "tiring". I personally think it's because Pu Qing has more emotional thoughts (of course, I also understand that he was just reborn, and I didn't say that the author's writing was not good [sending my heart]) And I want to look forward to it a little bit later, because I came in after reading the introduction and it was very exciting. It was the first time I saw the "Mom" article. Ah, Puqing continues to conquer the world like this. However, I feel that there are still too few attack methods for Puqing. Basically, they are An'an's defense + attack, Puqing grass + fire. The color children's attack power is not very high, but they can deal unexpected damage. The eagle's shared vision has no attack power. Victoria has not taken action yet, so I hope Puqing will become stronger. An'an's left hand is holding the fox with the right, and behind him are all the subdued Boosψ(｀∇´)ψ And when will Chihayatori Yumekawa meet Lin-sama [eating melon] Great support for the author and continue to update [Adoration]

Now that I see it, it looks great. I feel that the heroine has an inexplicable elegance. The writing is very good and the story is great. The author should not give up. This novel is great. It still looks good, can the author update it? [Shy][shy][shy]

Looking at the first review, the author's writing style is good. It feels very similar to a famous novel about me sweeping garbage in a wasteland world, but I can feel that the author's mentality is better and the characters written are healthier. Another book that gives you goosebumps after reading it. After reading the first world, I found it quite interesting. Some passages are quite scary, some storylines are quite reflective, and the writing style is quite sophisticated. I will comment further on what happens next.