I Transmigrated into Detective Conan and Became Xiao Ai’s Master, the Demon Lord

The idea is good, but too short and there are too many emotional scenes. I can't help but praise, the female channel Long Aotian in Conan's skin

Very interesting theme and plot Recently, the addition of emotional lines has been too slow. Too much writing and ink is cumbersome. The protagonist is like a young boy who has just traveled through time [palm face]. It is much better to return to collecting charms and following the main line of the plot. There can also be emotional scenes, but not so many. You can write specifically about daily life and details of mission actions.

Crows fly, ducks climb, black tigers strand lambs, elephants kick, tiger claws eat pudding, black tigers fly past vultures, angry-clawed foxes fly in flocks, gazelles leap, horse tail flicks goshawks, scythes clear grass, rats walk in ditches, whales wag their tails, and flying eagles pounce. Shadow, a giant ax chops down a tree, a kite spreads its wings, a lion worships the sky, a cheetah gallops, a kite lands, a mule kicks, a mouse walks a maze, a mouse steals cheese, an angry duck takes off, a mantis punch, a snake step, an oyster shell, a black tiger digs out the heart, two dragons play with beads, a scorpion Palm, Melon Punch, Floating Lotus, Tarzan Crush, Flamenco Dance Steps, Cat Turn, Flying Hammer, Cat Shaking Water, Flying Crane Catching Shrimp, Cat Landing, Bear Paw Attack, Orangutan Branch Breaking, Rabbit Punch, Tyrannosaurus Flying, Hurricane Kick, Earthquake Punch, Xiao Xing Star Belt, Meteor Continuous Hit Mountain, Thunder Fist, Tiger Falling on the Eagle's Back, Super Planet Burning, Kangaroo Jump, Sweeping Legs, Tiger Fighting Style, Double Wind Passing Through the Ears, Eagle Claw Kung Fu, Flying Dragon Returns to Heaven, Cobra, Lobster Claw, Hungry Wolf Advances, Black Tiger Crosses Goshawk, One Tiger Kills Two Sheeps

I stayed up late and read the updated content in one breath. To be honest, it gave me a really good feeling. The emotional transition was actually quite well designed. It would have been better to condense it more and stop explaining it so much and use one or two sentences. At least then no one would say it was awkward anymore. I think the best thing about this book is that the protagonist is a qualified "Holy Lord", there is no mercy, and the impression brought about by a simple bad mouth is also quite good. A Conan fanfic that doesn't follow the original plot in a cookie-cutter manner. This is the kind of fanfic I want to read. The red and black sides are really tired of solving the case. Five-star praise!

Very, very well written and very interesting

Brother, you are a devil, are you trying to make true love here? It's kind of interesting [laughs]

Monkey charms are ever-changing, and they can't only change people. Why haven't you tried changing animals, or turning other people into animals? If there are dead things that can turn into any dead thing, wouldn't it be equivalent to Green Lantern? [Think]

Not bad Either no heroine or multiple heroines. OK?

Five-star praise, five-star praise, this is a very exciting novel about Holy Lord wearing Conan and marrying Haibara Ai. It can be said to be a double surprise for Holy Lord fans and Haibara fans, but it is too short. The ending is very exciting and worth reading. Writing fan fiction is not easy, please cherish it

The plot is compact and not procrastinating. There is no irritation. It's just too fast. I finished it in just a few chapters. I haven't read enough. I only have so much sugar, right? I want to see the teacher's speech! ! !