The Three Little Ones Become Generals, and Garp Can’t Stop Grinning

It's so beautiful. I've long thought about this kind of theme. The three Luffy brothers are all together, and other potential characters are drawn to me. It's not stupid or embarrassing. Five stars is just the upper limit here, but it's not the limit I want to give.

I wonder if Garp pinched your neck and asked you to write it [Thinking]

I gave it four stars because the protagonist has grown too slowly. He is still ten years old in more than a hundred chapters, and the World Government lost the rubber fruit and turned around and Luffy became an esper. This is not suspected of being a bit confusing. Nothing else is wrong. Looking forward to the next plot, it would be best to have a red-haired pirate who is making trouble on the Justice Island, and the matching opponent is the confused expression of the protagonist when he is in the group, or the Supernova Gathering in Shampoo Land and the protagonist and them say something terrible [laughing] and let Ace capture Blackbeard, and then publicly execute him as the son of Rocks to trigger a war on top. Ace's blaster Whitebeard should be worth watching [laughing]

It looks good, I hope Uta will be the heroine

It's okay, but I can't tell the author's intention. There is no heroine or multiple heroines. The protagonist doesn't have this kind of performance. I'm afraid of feeding him later😯 (The main reason may be because he started writing when he was six years old, but I still remain skeptical of the author)

Can you be more specific? Are you going to comment on a certain book, a certain movie, a certain event, or something else? Can you give me some detailed information so that I can make a more accurate review?

One hundred million points of honor

Not bad, good cheers, author

Come on, your rating is fine, but it's just not great.

That's awesome, my brother, even Luffy accepted it