I Get Stronger by Checking In and Rewrite the Great Pirate Era

So far it's pretty good and quite interesting. What I've always liked to watch is Follow the Boat. After all, I came here for the story of One Piece, and the subjective perspective of One Piece is of course Wang Luffy's. As for the protagonist receiving the battle experience from Monkey King, what I want to say is that although the Monkey King chose the golden cudgel as a weapon just because of his skill, he is not only good at playing with the cudgel, he has learned the weapons of Class 18 in Fangcun Mountain!

Well, overall it's good. You can take a look. It mainly contains Empress Hancock, Nami, and Robin. This is a good review, hahaha. It just lacks some details when working and some pictures are missing in the comments.

I can see it, but... Chapter 3 Everyone in the Straw Hats will act based on Nami's face. And Nami wants to act based on the treasure. I have treasure! So in the end everyone on the boat had to look at my face. Chapter 34 The coffin is gone After a while, Nami stared at the pile of treasures in front of her with shining eyes, while Xia Chen on the other side showed an expression of despair. Just watch it if you want, I don't like this kind of plot

If it's a single heroine, please reply to me, thank you. Give me five stars first

First of all, let me make a comment. As a sea fan, I personally think that the author is very careful, but there are still some flaws. It is not a guide, but an opinion at most. If someone disagrees, then what do you think? 1. The narrative of the story doesn't feel like a novel, it feels like a composition or a conversation. This may be due to the new author, and I hope to improve it. 2. Using the ability to defeat the Buddha in battle is very novel, but there is a bounty of more than 800 million in the early stage. According to the plot of the story, it will inevitably collapse in the later stage, unless the protagonist is involved in cheating! 3. The emotion writing is a bit stiff, so I personally feel like skipping the emotion first! 4. According to this kind of story, if the plot direction will take a long time to write, I personally think that the plot can be changed (don't be ridiculous! It's just my personal opinion). There are some unimportant characters. In fact, it is enough to get some ordinary props or small functions, and there is no need to increase the intensity every time [laughing] 5. If nothing else, this should be considered a system. It would be better if there are numerical values. Of course, everyone has different opinions (don't argue, if you argue, you are right. I'm really afraid of those brainless people, please don't take your seat) 6. Why I gave it four stars? I originally wanted to give it three stars. You may say that I don't have enough reading time. It's because I feel that some things are written a little slowly and not as refreshingly. The reason why I gave it four stars is that the author is very attentive, and it can be seen that the structure and ideas of this novel are quite novel, so please continue to work hard and improve the writing style😄 Finally, someone may say that you are so good at talking, why don't you write it yourself? Then I love money, so I can't rob a bank, right? I'm just giving my opinion, don't comment if you don't like it, you win if you argue! Finally, I hope the author will work hard! If you don't like my little opinions, you can ignore them [laughing] @Banana is not fragrant

I just read Golden Chapter 3. It's okay. It's a very traditional opening story and there's nothing wrong with it. In terms of plot, in fact, many people in fan fiction have objections to the original work, so you don't need to care too much about other people's opinions. In terms of details, there are still a lot of problems. My suggestion is that you can use this book to practice your writing, then finish it quickly and write a non-fanfiction novel with novel themes and in line with your personal writing style.

It's pretty good, but it's best if the protagonist's strength improves slowly, otherwise if the strength span is too big, he will always feel out of place with the ship. As for the heroine, it's okay to have more heroines, as long as they are not stallions [laughing and crying] The author will keep up the good work, and please update more [laughing]

It's quite a good boat ride, you can take a look at [Eating Melon]

(I have seen about 400 pictures in total, but I haven't finished them all. Let me tell you my personal evaluation) He belongs to the Monkey King system. The female protagonists are Nami, Robin, and the Empress. He mainly signs in to the islands. You can sign in on each island, but I feel that the writing behind him is not so careful. His genre also belongs to following the ship, from the beginning to the end, following the protagonist and them to sign in. In fact, this is a cool article, and the strength is quite strong, but I think it is okay. I hope it can be a short article, because It was too long, but maybe I felt a little tired after reading about 400 chapters. In the end, I just read the last two chapters, and then I broke through the world. If you are interested, you can take a look. After all, I have read more than 400 chapters. If it is not good, I will not read so many, but my personal opinion is that it is okay. After all, everyone is different. If you want to take a look, you can try it. Oh, yes, I forgot to mention that there was an invisible man in Moria. The protagonist who saw Nami was killed directly, and Momonosuke was also killed directly.

It's pretty good, but a little short [laughs awkwardly]