A Heartbeat Off Track
错轨心动
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 223k Words
- Genre
- Two Male Leads
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
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I Really Want to Read Shangmei Lotus Root and Bean Fanfiction. Any Recommendations?
Lighthearted version, lighthearted version, lighthearted version.
Please Recommend Stories About the Great Deity of the Three Altars and Seas: Two Male Leads, No CP, or Neither, Thanks
Looking for books similar to "When the Great Deity of the Three Altars Enters the World of the Demon Baby". The protagonist should be the character themselves, not someone roleplaying, transmigrating, or a self-insert romance. No lotus-root pairings or lotus-root-and-red-lotus ships either. Something like "When Nezha from Fei Ren Zai Transmigrates into the World of Nezha: Birth of the Demon Child" or "Monkey, Let's Turn Around and Beat Yang Jian!"
Looking for Lotus and Bing CP Stories, No Other Pairings, It Has to Be Lotus and Bing
Looking for books similar to "Pulling Out the Dragon Tendon? Just Pull Off a Belt and Call It a Day!"
Looking for Shangmei Lotus Cakes, No Nezha!!!!!!
Looking for books like "Shangmei Lotus Couple: Bingbing Always Wants to Leave Me". Any Shangmei Lotus Couple story is fine, but no Ne Zha! If you're going to recommend Ne Zha, go somewhere else. Don't shove it in my face!
Help, I Just Finished Ne Zha 2 Yesterday and I'm Obsessed! Looking for Lotus/Bing Ship Fics
Please recommend Lotus and Nezha pairing stories! It's so good. If you don't know the full story, don't judge. As soon as Ao Guang and Ao Run showed up, I knew it was all Heaven's fault. And then there's Shen Gongbao: I thought he was the villain at first, but it turned out he was actually a decent guy. Little Leopard is so cute, too. Please recommend some stories!!
I Need American-Style Lotus-and-Ubing Fanfic! I'm Starving!
Looking for books like "Lotus and Nezha: Forced to Be with the Person I Hate Most". Are there any fanfics about the Shanghai Animation Film Studio version of Lotus and Nezha?
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It's nice to look at, but why is that court made like a brothel? Does Nezha seem to have a split personality, with his left and right brains fighting each other? It's kind of interesting. And does Ao Bing dare to be more coaxing? Didn't Nezha say such hurtful words and be immediately coaxed? I admire this temperament. And is Siqi also part of the lotus root cake play? I feel that the shape of the lotus root cake is not as good as the other two pairs of cps (the above are all my very popular comments, don't criticize if you don't like it ( •̀∀•́ )) However, the author's writing style is still good *^o^* The author will do his best to update ( ´▽` ) I've finished reading it. Overall, it's good to watch. I'm looking forward to the author's other works.
Everything posted is my personal opinion. The author's writing style is very delicate, and the description of the scenery is very visual. The only shortcoming is that I think the author can put more effort into Ao Bing. This article is not a two-strong series. In the fighting scenes, can there be more scenes of Nezha and Ao Bing teaming up? Otherwise, Nezha would be beaten with blood all over his body every time, and Ao Bing would not be able to help. Well, it is a bit like a vase, which only provides spiritual comfort but no fighting strength. Although Shangmei's Ao Bing is cynical, I personally still hope that he can fight side by side with Nezha, so that Nezha can be less injured. That's all I want to express. The other two pairs of cps are also very easy to fight. It can be seen that the author has worked hard. I am looking forward to the future plot. Come on, author! 👍👍👍
The author is so authoritative, I am here to support you.
I like it. I don't know how to write a review for a book I saw accidentally. Anyway, it is good-looking.
Nice looking, a little bit sad😋
I haven't finished watching it, but I think it's very interesting. The author's writing is also very good
I can't do it anymore, it's so beautiful 😳😳
Haokan is cooking right after the game starts [licking the screen]
Okay, the writing is very delicate. I wish there were more sweet scenes between Nezha and Ao Bing 🤭
Good-looking, love to see lots of hair