I Slapped the Male Lead, and He Licked His Lips and Said I Smelled So Good

First of all, clean (it would be better if the original plot was also clean. It would be more reassuring to watch. You might consider this direction). The female protagonist also has a relatively high sense of deservingness. Originally, it was not very comfortable to conquer the male protagonist at the beginning (I was afraid that the female protagonist would be low-key and petty), but the male protagonist was just a show-off and rouge.

To sum up, this is a sweet story about a girl who loves her baby, there is male competition but no female competition, and there is a lot of meat. The male is all clean, a true NPC, so feel free to read it. First of all, I want to praise the author. He is good at cooking. XP has a wide range of interests (my sister is very good at eating). I personally love the character of the heroine. She is an innocent and greedy kitten. I can't blame my sister for being so greedy. I can only blame the author for being so good at writing (no). To take a step back, are the male protagonists right? They are all going after sister-in-law. Therefore, this article is very suitable for people who love sister-in-law without a bottom line. Secondly, let's talk about the slightly controversial issue of male purity. I personally prefer that the male protagonist be clean physically and mentally, but the author didn't express it well at the beginning. The impurity of the male protagonist in the original script can be understood as something that has not happened yet, not as a past life. In this case, all the male protagonists will be clean. It doesn't matter whether the younger sister is clean or unclean. The younger sister doesn't need to wear a chastity card. Let the male protagonists bring all the chastity cards. Finally, let's briefly talk about the rhythm of the plot. It can be seen that the author has forgotten everything while cooking. It is obvious that the dead hand is out of control. As a result, some of the male protagonist's emotional scenes are written in a hurry to catch up with the progress, and the transition is not natural enough. However, the author also writes more and more smoothly later on, and the problem is not big. The extra chapter is very stable at the beginning. I hope the author will work hard. For an author who knows how to cook, I will not allow you to stop cooking! ! ! What kind of author do I hope to see next? Literature, focusing on unhealthy relationships but delicious and exciting cars, I dare not mention other authors, for fear that the author is not perverted enough to write it, but the author of this article is different, the author is really good at writing.

The description of this heroine is very good! I thought it was like the female guide I had seen before, where the men and women were always humble to please the male protagonist? This is not it. But the heroine has always controlled the rhythm. Like a succubus! Sometimes I feel that the heroine is not addicted, she is just sober and addicted. There are no degrading words throughout. It's really beautiful. I can't wait to see the author write about the next world and other worlds. (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

This is my first time to write a book review. To be honest, for me, this book is not the most amazing or the best I have read, but I can see that the author has put a lot of effort into this book. And to my surprise, for the first time, I found that an author will seriously reply to every paragraph of the review, and the author of the AI ​​drawing that everyone posted will also seriously praise it. I really like to watch the kind of people who can quickly travel through the heart, this sutra and Shura Field. In fact, the emotional drama written by the author really has the right atmosphere and feels very good. In fact, this is the first time to write a novel of the same type, which is already very good. Although there are many places that have been deleted due to inability to publish, the author has also worked very hard to let us see that he is a very good baby. I hope you will continue to work hard! ! !

The heroine is very attractive. Falling in love with Yue is human. The men are all clean and have their own characteristics. Each one has contrasting cuteness. The emotions are full of tension and the rice is super fragrant. It is not a cliché love at first sight. Yue is scheming and strategic. He is bold and careful. He is at the master level. Taketori's writing has a poetic romance and a sense of healing. It is rare. Highly recommended. If you like to watch real heartthrobs, come watch Yue. Okay? This Taketori is really worthy of care and watering^^

It's really good to read. If you keep at it, it will get better and better. There are a lot of fragrant rice. Moreover, the author's writing style is very good and his attitude is very serious. I feel that the more I write, the better it gets. It's very smart and novel. It's really beautiful. The male protagonist is Quan Jie, and the little sister is super cute. Everyone loves her. There is no female rivalry. It's super cool and comforting to watch, and she's not stingy. The extras are so well written, I hope it will continue. Overall, she is a very good-looking and heartthrob! ! ! You must keep reading the first part, the later part will get better and better. Really, keep reading, it's super sweet! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Bao, the content is very good, but it is also a bit too detailed. It is okay to intersperse the daily love life in the love drama, but for the audience, there is really no need to describe the love drama from the first appearance. We can broadcast it live and do it in real time. One last time, baby, the content is very good, it would be better if it was more concise. I love you with all my heart.

I'm here to leave a book review. I rarely leave reviews on novels, but this NPC surprised me haha. It's so good to read, and the emotional drama is rich. They are all fighting for the heroine. Our sister is also a very beautiful little girl. I like it very much. I hope the author will continue to update. I also wish you good luck in the Year of the Horse and success [shy]

Personally, I think it's pretty good-looking. The female protagonist doesn't lick, and the male protagonist's emotional line is also very thin. The main text of the first world has been updated, and it's quite good-looking. The extra is being updated now. Looking forward to the second world. It's considered immersive, and the system appears occasionally.

Yes, it's all about the male protagonist catering to the female protagonist. I felt that the second world was a bit weak. I thought Haihou meant that all the guests were her ex-boyfriends, but I didn't expect it to be the case. It wouldn't be fun without a large Shura field.