The Nine-Story Sumeru Pagoda and the Light-Chasing Ring

I have read more than 500,000 words, and overall it seems to be a very stable derivative of Zhe Tian. The settings of protagonist Wang Zimo's light-tracing ring and Xumi nine-story tower at the beginning are not obtrusive, and integrate well with the worldview of the original Zhetian work, without forcibly changing the plot. He does not steal Ye Fan's core opportunity, but becomes a comrade-in-arms with Ye Fan. This independent growth line that is not dependent on the protagonist looks very comfortable, but the description of the practice in Lingxu Cave in the early stage is a little slow.

The writing style is above average, without fancy rhetoric, but the descriptions of battles and scenes are very graphic. For example, the plot of people aging in the ancient forbidden land and picking fruits on the sacred mountain can remind people of the atmosphere of the original work. The passage where the protagonist and Ye Fan discuss their spiritual practice experience is also very natural. It is not a forced CP, but a mutual inspiration between real comrades. This is very realistically written.

The overall reading experience is very smooth, there are no particularly big flaws, and there is nothing particularly surprising. It is a long-lasting read. The protagonist's cultivation speed is not a cheat. From opening up the sea of ​​suffering to steadily approaching the realm of the life spring, every step is foreshadowed. The help of the holy fruit and the divine spring is also in line with the logic of the original work. I just occasionally felt that the description of the protagonist's psychological activities was a bit too much, and it would be more compact if it was streamlined.

The growth line of the protagonist is very clear. From the beginning of suffering to the steady cultivation, every breakthrough is reasonable and reasonable. The comradeship with Ye Fan is not deliberate. It does not steal the spotlight from the original protagonist. Instead, it writes a new story in the original world view. The logic is online and the characters are vivid. It is not a brainless novel at all.

The protagonist's character is very likable, decisive in killing and low-key and calm. His unassuming personality is different from the protagonists of many cool novels. The main goal of finding the Nine Secrets and opening the Xumi Pagoda is clear, interspersed with plots of fighting ferocious beasts and questioning one's mind, which is relaxed and relaxed. The only drawback is that the supporting characters are slightly weak. The elders of Lingxu Cave and the disciples of Taixuan Sect have no memorable points. Most of the writing is focused on the protagonist.

There is no tool man role. The logic is clear and not confusing, the settings of the Nine Secrets and Magic Weapons are reasonably developed, the writing is smooth and not stiff, and the reading is very smooth, without any awkward feeling of being forced to be happy.

My evaluation of this novel is: it is a masterpiece worth reading again and again. I recommend that friends who love reading give this novel a try. I believe you will also be attracted by its charm.

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It's quite interesting, but why are there so few people? Something's wrong [what]

Not bad, this kind of writing is not new.