I’m Slaying Gods, So Why Is the System Making Me a Magical Girl?

I really like the heroine's character. I haven't read the original work. I heard it's too bad. As expected, it's my fate not to read the original work but only to read the fanfic. The heroine is a very abstract girl. Her abstraction often makes me forget that she is a very good-looking girl, and the heroine really has a personality. And the first time I saw a spoiler about the mysterious incident in Cangnan No. 2 Middle School, it was based on the excuse that they were "pregnant". It was so creative! Ye Luoli and Zhanshen are also integrated very well. I feel that the setting is very reasonable. The ability to extract the fairies separately can prevent the fairies from conflicting. The emotional lines are also written very naturally. The heroine has not yet figured it out, but I am more in the cb direction. So far it is good. And I feel that the characters of fairies are not OOC at all. In Ye Luoli's case, some fairies do not like humans naturally. This is normal. The author's setting is very reasonable.

Damn, some of them are very well written, but they are very unfriendly to people who listen to books. The emoticons are really funny! I can't immerse myself in it for half a day before I can hear the drama, and Dada, well, if the author has something to say, please say it at the end, okay? Some of the psychological descriptions are really inconsistent. I listened to them three times intermittently. (I was really annoyed when I heard them.) [Cover your face] [Cover your face] [Cover your face] [Cover your face] [Send your heart] [Send your heart] [Send your heart] [Send your heart] [Send your heart] This is great, I hope this book will become popular [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] Also, isn't it written about al-direction? Baili Pangpang likes Jasmine?

It's very interesting. In addition to the system, when I was threatened by the system in the past, I felt a little aggrieved. I also had to be cheated by the system and my body was gone. Originally there was no compensation or anything like that, but there was also a way to restore my body? But the author changed it, and there are no other problems However, it hasn't improved much after the change, because I don't know when the promised compensation will be paid.

The writing is great, and the plot fits the settings of both sides very well. Here I will praise what I think is better. First of all, not all relationships between fairies in Wonderland are so good. Therefore, I hate writing the protagonist as an advanced group favorite, because it is simply impossible. Forcibly writing it out is equivalent to selling it on someone else's head. I just borrowed Ye Luoli's spell settings. Why bother? Each fairy in this book is written separately, so these problems are avoided, which is pretty good. The second point is the most important point. Many fairies actually don't like humans at all, or they don't like humans that much. The kind of fairy that writes the protagonist as the group's favorite, and still helps humans. If I hadn't actually read Ye Luoli's original work, I would have almost been fooled. The protagonist handles it better here. If you have to ask a fairy who doesn't like humans to help, it feels very awkward. Moreover, it is the protagonist who casts the spell, and he only borrows the spells from Ye Luoli's fairyland, which is good, as it can avoid the influence of fairies on human attitudes. In fact, the most troublesome point of combining Zhanshen and Ye Luoli to write this type of article is to integrate the settings of both sides. At the same time, it must comply with the settings on both sides. First of all, in terms of combat power, if it is not adjusted according to actual conditions, it will easily collapse. When the protagonist is weak, some spell effects in Wonderland will be restricted. At the same time, the advanced settings are more balanced. Therefore, some fairy spells must take this aspect into consideration and cannot be cast without any scruples. Secondly, there are many fairies who have no good impressions of humans. It is more in line with the setting for these fairies to choose not to help. Moreover, not all relationships between fairies in Wonderland are so good, so try not to portray group pets. It is unrealistic that everyone in Wonderland dotes on the protagonist. They themselves are dissatisfied, but they all come to help you. How can the protagonist be so dignified? Anyone who has carefully studied Ye Luoli's original work will feel awkward when reading this.

The critical attack at the beginning is quite good, but then the plot is described in detail step by step. It just seems a bit bloated in a long story, but overall it is still good. This kind of fanfic should focus on the charm of the protagonist. Even if I want to write it, For group portraits, the protagonist should be slightly longer. After all, it is considered a fanfic. One experience card for seven days is quite a novel setting. You can skip Duoduo and add oc in appropriate places. There are too many assembly lines and the overlap with the original text is too high, so there is no flow of tweets.

Well, actually I think it's okay. Then there are some small details that may not be particularly rigorous. If you are reading a book to kill time, you can read it. If you are that kind of rigorous person, forget it. Come on! The writing is pretty good, give me five stars to encourage you.

It's a very interesting plot. It's fun to watch and the progress is fast. I like it.

Beautiful, highly recommended, very detailed description

Good-looking, I recommend it. It's a pity that it makes up for everything.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking