Born into an ordinary family, Shi Lei has no mastery of profound magic. But with the grit he forged in the mountains and his knack for unconventional thinking, he rises step by step from a firewood-chopping servant. He uses the clever technique he learned chopping wood to solve mechanisms, draws on his kiln-firing experience to improve the heat control in alchemy, and even applies his skill at counting firewood to understand numerological formations. He must face threats from village bullies and wicked cultivators, uncover the secrets of the Shi family bloodline and its ancestral medicine cauldron, and hold fast to his original purpose of protecting both people and their hearts amid the grudges of immortal sects and the clash between good and evil.
There is no born hero’s aura in this story, only down-to-earth growth: from mistaking a jade pendant for an ordinary stone to using the power of his bloodline to cleanse evil; from scheming to “sell someone” in exchange for food to facing the Spirit-Devouring King to protect all living beings. The martial world is about more than fighting and killing. There is also the bustle of the weapon forge, the vitality of the herb garden, and laughter in the schoolhouse. Through the simplest of truths, Shi Lei shows the world that what makes you peerless is not strength, but the courage to help those around you live each day in peace.
Your writing style is okay, but the plot is confusing and the character changes are too abrupt. What about the plain-speaking maid? I didn't even give an explanation. What's going on in Chapters 7 to 8? It feels like a big chunk of the plot has been cut in half.
I can't understand it at all, the plot is confusing and the characters change abruptly
Chaotic, weird and unclear settings