Western Crossover: Hang the Capitalists from the Lampposts

It's really beautiful! The author's writing is very life-like, unlike many British and American articles, where the golden finger opens immediately after time travel, and then instantly enters the main plot. This article is very daily, like our life experience. The heroine is really cute when she exposes her lantern. Ordinary people [admire] like a heroine like this.

Staying up late to tie the game, it is true that the passerby is a small supporting character who passes by and the whole plot is similar to a doctor who discovers clues, but his participation is not high from the perspective of "plot". I don't know if the plot is heard or not, but he has a happy family life. The golden finger is not too big (the kind of air that is released every second). There is room for growth in the future, and his character is very clear. I really feel the charisma and fall in love with the heroine. She is very determined and she knows it very well. She will not sleep only three or four hours a day (this is still a conservative estimate) and will not become a martyr. She knows that she is not that righteous and refuses to become a superhero even if she has a golden finger. This does not mean that she will not save people when she has the ability. Her priority is herself and her home. She only performs kindness when she is safe and capable. She is more realistic but not that dark. She has written a lot of passers-by or background panels in the plot. This is not an old-fashioned redemption story. The author affirms his determination as a superhero. It is undeniable that the impression of the heroine in the Bat family is special. She has extraordinary strength and a heart to save people. She does not want to be a hero and just wants to be normal, but she is tolerant and likes vigilantes and is willing to provide some help. At present, it seems that it is a sweet article, although there is a hint of destiny plot theory, but the author is not the kind who likes knives, and he is very suitable for passers-by. He is not the kind of ordinary person who is ordinary, but the character background setting is extraordinary, the ability growth is not low, and he has the potential to become a boss. To be honest, I don't follow DC seriously, I just rely on fandom, so I won't comment on OOC issues, but it can be seen that the author is a textual researcher and has actually followed DC.

It's good-looking, and the heroine's portrayal is particularly good. She has a clear and independent self-awareness, and will not minimize or weaken her own status for the sake of love for others, or ignore her own discomfort. Under the love and care of her parents in this life, she is still a neutral and kind little sun in this British and American world where it is difficult for her parents to be healthy, which is very attractive. I also particularly like the author's daily life except for major events. It is very natural and relaxed and at the same time, it is convenient to shape the protagonists and different characters in the book!

I like the world described by the author. In other novels, the heroine is either very powerful or has no personality at all, but we can see Lu Deng along the way. She has her own ideas and walks on the path she wants. Although we talk about the previous life, there is only one setting added. In fact, this is the real beginning. What I actually want to see more is the magnificent world inside. I saw Deng Deng go out for more walks, meet more people and travel across the mountains, rivers and seas. I feel that the world of the United Kingdom and the United States is fixed on superheroes. In fact, it is not necessary. I feel that the world of small people is already very exciting. The main thing is that in comics, whether they are DC or Marvel, they are really awesome (｀Δ´)! My wife is able to write a completely innocent heroine in a crazy world, and then still write it so normal, which is already very impressive (＞＜). And we, Deng Deng, are only 15 years old now, so we have to be a little tolerant towards her. In fact, the most important thing I want to tell my wife is that you should never read the comment section, because the comment section is really meaningless. You have your own outline, so you should write according to your own outline. Don't let other people's thoughts and comments affect you. If this article didn't have 1 million hits, I would have cried. This is a rare variety show on Tomato. After reading other articles, I really, alas, don't want to say it anymore╰(‵□′)╯

Great! It's more daily, but not procrastinating or superficial, and the details are well controlled. The love line doesn't progress very fast, but I like [Love], and judging from the rhythm, it's not a short story (it shouldn't be a short story, right? The author is O. O [KISS]). I love long stories!!! It's so difficult to find a short story on Tomato that's not a short story, but it's a comprehensive British and American book. If you like to read long articles, you'll fall apart [crying] I hope the author doesn't cheat and end it abruptly!!! [Blowing kiss]

I have always been wary of the derivatives of fruits (I know everything I know), and when I was searching for articles, I carefully looked through the ratings and reviews. I was reassured when I saw that all the members were not OOC or stereotyped, and the protagonist was bright and not aggrieved. It was indeed true. The author's research is very serious and careful, the characters are not stereotyped, and everyone is lovable. The protagonist control can be played with confidence. Although it is a growth stream (seems to be constantly leapfrogging monsters), the reliable teamwork and self-breakthrough limit and then bking plot are well combined. The whole process is not wronged, and the timeline is also very complete. The long article is very filling (chew chew chew) and the wording is very particular. There are no rn words, so it is very comfortable to read [heartfelt] The creation of the love plot is also very surprising. It has the feeling of "we just met by chance, and then formed a team to explore the world together. We are not bound to each other, but the two of us together will definitely be more interesting and meaningful than when we are alone." It is a love relationship that I like very much.

A great article, warm and pleasant, easy to read. Moreover, the author loves the heroine very much. While remaining friendly to her own character in the original work, she never wrongs the heroine. There are many highlight scenes for the heroine, and the heroine can feel at ease.

Flaws do not cover up strengths. Advantages: The plot is smooth and bug-free, and the author has great imagination. I really like the main character, he is strong and determined. Female-friendly, basically non-degrading words for women. Disadvantages: The writing style has improved to the naked eye, but sometimes the sentence breaks are still strange. The emotional line is a bit abrupt.

I feel that the details are more detailed than 90% of the DC fan fiction I have read. The foreign background is very realistic, and the information density is not very dense when reading. I really like this kind of reading experience... It has a comic feel? Although I haven't read much, reading this article makes me want to catch up on comics.

It's very beautiful, the subject matter is novel, the heroine's outlook and character are very good, she has a happy family, the plot and emotional lines are well handled and not abrupt, the young feelings are very exciting to look forward to its future development [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]