Western Fantasy: My Ice-Cold Wife, the Knight Commander

It's a very interesting novel. Not many people have read it. To be honest, not many people read Western novels. I have read similar ones like Zichuan, but I haven't seen anything like it since. Zichuan is very interesting. Reading this novel has the same feeling as when I first read Zichuan. I hope there will be more descriptions of the protagonist and Zichuan. The battle between orcs, like Shikawa Hide, leads thousands of troops and conquers the orcs in the North (Far East) [laughs][laughs][laughs] Come on, author, this setting is that the protagonist can become stronger only after being tortured. This setting is not pleasing. Let the protagonist become stronger earlier. Overall, it is interesting.

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The writing is very comfortable because of its broadness, but the setting of Iceberg Wife is not necessarily pleasing to the eye.

The writing is more detailed but not detailed enough. First of all, the division of strength is not clear enough, and the difference between different realms is not obvious. In the middle, you can gradually see the unreasonable parts. Leah's hiding ability and escape ability are so outrageous that even the Sky Knights cannot find her. She can also run away from the Sky Knights many times, especially in the hinterland of the elves. But aside from these flaws, the author's writing is indeed very good.

Personally, I think it's quite good. Maybe it's because I haven't read a Western fantasy novel in a long time, but this one gave me a pretty good feeling. I hope the author sticks to it until the end

It looks good, I hope you don't stop updating it. It fits my impression of the Western magical world very well. The plot is also very compact. Hope it can continue.

The emotional writing is very good, better than some high-scoring and high-scoring online writing, but I don't know why there is no traffic [face covering], keep writing, maybe the number of words is less, keep up the good work [send heartfelt]

Finally struck gold [Adoration] Not bad [like]

This is a novel with great potential. I give it 5 points for the first 70 chapters. I hope you can stick to it. Based on my many years of experience, if you stick to it, it will definitely become popular. [Top post] I hope there will be more emotional scenes in the future

The writing, logic, and plot are all very delicate.