Surviving Under a Witch, Who Bore Me a Whole Litter

Not the author. I really like the plot, the novelty, and the emotional experiences. But the failings are also obvious. The first is that the issue of combat power is unclear. The second issue is the relationship and treatment of the male and female protagonists. The heroine was too bad in the early stage and there was no good transition in the middle. So the attitude of the heroine who saved the heroine was a bit bland. And now that there is a child and the grace of saving her life, the heroine will change her attitude towards the hero later on. But what about the male protagonist? Even if he doesn't treat the heroine badly, he won't treat her too well either. It's just because of the child and the heroine's use, but it can be considered as helping him to practice. So how can the hero fall in love with the heroine and let the heroine die once? Because there is still a layer of hatred before the relationship is over, skip the relationship and go straight to the relationship. On this basis, I can't think of anything else except how to die for the male protagonist after the female protagonist falls in love with the male protagonist.

Bad Virgin Mary

The pace is too fast, and although the plot is a bit hard to follow, I'll give it a try.

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