A Glimmer on the Page: Book 10

The background introduction and growth curve of the heroine are introduced before Chapter 50, and the heroine group is followed after Chapter 50. From the looks of it, there should be a male protagonist (I haven't finished reading The Divine Seal Throne, I'm not very clear about whether there is OOC or not) I see that there are no poisonous points now, but in some places I feel that the pace is too fast, which leads to a sense of disconnection. For example, I wrote about the plot of Sima Xian and his acquaintance before. I ran back and read it again before I saw that The description of a few paragraphs really feels quite sudden. Apart from some minor flaws, it is generally fine. The writing is okay and the writing style is also good. I hope the author will continue to work hard [laughing evilly] (Don't stop, I beg you [crying] It's hard to find a book that can be read) It's tasteless, but it's not a pity to discard it. There are too many deletions and changes to the original work. I still don't understand where Long Haochen's mount went? There is also the Holy Furnace and a series of equipment information. You have touched his Light Punishment from beginning to end, right? I can see that it is true that there is no fighting plot, but what did you write before 50 pictures and after 50 pictures? Are they two books? If you want to do this, you might as well delete all the previous 50 pictures. I thought I read it wrong. I found you reading from the beginning to the end. What I felt was that all the characters were serving the male and female protagonists, including the protagonist group. And just to integrate into the protagonist group, the settings were greatly modified. The preface did not match the postscript, and no matter what the fight was, Well, I insist on concave the setting of the protagonist's pure spirit body. It is true that the description of the protagonist of the fanfiction should be more, but we cannot delete all the skills and number of the original protagonist group. The Holy Furnace of Light that I want to see, as well as the protagonist's reaction after meeting Long Haochen's mount, are completely gone. They have been deleted. So what kind of fanfic is this?

The author's writing style is very delicate, and he portrays a little girl who has low self-esteem because of her special abilities. She will be a little happy because of her progress, but she will also become low self-esteem because she is worried about her future. She will also be afraid that the power she accidentally released will usher in monsters. These seem to be her She was born with it, but she didn't give up. She waved the sword in her hand over and over again, just to become a real knight like Long Haochen, instead of a bait or a hidden danger. The author's writing is very good. I hope to see more progress from the author. Come on, the author is great.

Oops, author, please update it quickly! ! ! This book is really good, just score it and don't take it off the shelf again [laughs]

The content is very exciting and very beautiful.

I like the article very much. The teacher wrote it very well. I am really looking forward to the follow-up.