My Senior Brother Is a Jinx: How Did I Become a Demonic Cultivator?!

It's so exciting, especially the quiet room section. I just like this exciting feeling, the dark and dark feeling of madness. As soon as I write about control, imprisonment and so on, I become wise. You are like young corn🌽

I want to see more of the plot between the protagonist and Dongfang Wuqiong. I like this kind of relationship from complex to really fragrant. The interaction between the protagonist and Dongfang Xianyun and Yin Feixing is also very interesting, especially Xianyun. Their interaction is funny and innocent.

It's okay, but Dongfang Wuqiong seems to have been strongly recommended by Gong Changsheng, and the protagonist may be "where does the little goblin seduce Sheng'er". Later, it may be more fragrant, but the author writes it very well, and there are too few fanfics.

Very pretty! The writing is smooth, the ideas are unconventional, and the protagonist's character is very cute, always making people laugh at the right places. They basically followed the original work very well. The occasional physical contact and ambiguous words made me scream in surprise. I just wanted to ask when can I eat meat? (Blushing) I don't choose. I wonder who I will give the first kiss to. Big cheers for the author! I finished reading it in half a day. I hope I can update ten chapters in one day. It's rare for a well-written brother to be so charming~(˶╹ꇴ╹˶)~

I have read the author's three books, and the writing is really getting better and better, a huge improvement, and it is super beautiful! The setting of this book is very novel. It is very interesting to read now. The emotional aspect is getting better and better. Come on, author!

Nice! Very nice! [Sending Hearts] It's just that I'm thinking that there are many male protagonists, but Gu Liqi is not included [Thinking]

Okay, the plot rhythm, writing style, and characterization are all very good. I hope I accidentally update chapter 300.

Come on, author, update it, it's very novel, but... I feel like there's too little plot, it's not satisfying and not very attractive. I can't do it anymore. The author, Yang, was a little forced and sublimated, but it had the opposite effect... While selling the protagonist regardless of the protagonist's feelings (the protagonist is really miserable and feels that he has no human rights at all.), He also said to give him freedom.

👉🏻👈🏻The author has always written that Lin Yu needs to calm down when he is hit. When he is hit, he needs to calm down. No matter what he encounters, he needs to calm down for a while. It looks tired to me. And it's also very awkward when I need to complain about it while watching the barrage. The content of the barrage and the protagonist's complaints is also very awkward, as if it's just for the sake of being funny. Apart from these two shortcomings, everything else is okay. The emotions are very delicate, and I also like watching it. Oh, by the way, I still haven't seen the significance of the sheep's appearance. Apart from saying a few heartfelt words to impress the protagonist, there's no use for it.

Overall it's very good, I haven't finished it yet, but currently I feel a bit sad covered in comedy () The descriptions of the characters are very vivid, especially the descriptions of their handsome and beautiful appearance (the head of the family!). I feel like the characters in the text are more handsome than in the comics ( The story focuses on daily life, and tasks such as "sleeping clothes" make people feel interesting at first glance. The fun and comedy are quite good. However, because there has been no new stage, there is no external pressure, and the internal character creation is a bit too slow (name the head of the family, it is too ridiculous to remember the name after more than ten years!). In the end, what drives the development of the story is the protagonist's "involuntary control" (every time he collapses, he sits on the ground with a bang, which is too miserable) and Gu's pressure. It makes people feel tired after watching it for a long time. I still hope to see a deeper connection and understanding between the characters, and I also want Xu Fei to be able to do things as he pleasesww He has always been unable to control himself, and his interactions with several male protagonists are always treacherous (I will mention the head of the family again, it feels like the male protagonist The protagonist is like a quail in front of him, trembling with fear. He has been like this for more than ten years. Is it really not a neurasthenia? ), This kind of emotional line seems a bit tired, the reader's nerves are as tense as the protagonist, and it is not ordinary at all! In fact, I haven't read Brother's Trap for a long time, but this book brought back the feeling I had at that time. I hope the author will write better and better!