After I Broke Up with Zhang Qiling, He Threatened to Blow Up the Bronze Gate

Immortal is simply amazing. When the heroine appears, the story line is here in the sand sea, so it means that the little brother has completed most of the plot and is no longer controlled by the line of fate. The tombs written by the author are all outside the plot. Wow, wow, I love it so much. The imagination and creativity are really amazing, and the writing style is really amazing. The younger brother is still talkative and cold-hearted. Although he is a centenarian who has lost his memory, he is kind and sharp, and he has plans and calculations in his heart. There is no other derivative novel that is so unscrupulous and overly kind. In other words: How can a person who survived the invasion of a big family and became the patriarch, even if he lost his memory many times in the middle, and experienced life and death and calculations many times, still be so stupid and sweet? His body and intuition will give warnings, so I really like the character of the little brother written by the author, and it is more in line with the Zhang Qiling I imagined.

It is a completely new adventure story, unfolding based on the events that happened to the heroine. The characters of the protagonist group are all very full and non-ooc. The writing by Da Zhang is so charming, full of details, and very graphic. Why is it that no one is watching it?

She is very beautiful. The heroine is the kind of soft but courageous and calm girl that normal girls would have. She is the kind of female tomb robber that I feel like. She seems to be inexplicably well matched with the younger brother. She is sweet and also very funny.

I like this kind of weedy heroine. The author is very good at describing the atmosphere. It's scary to watch it alone at night. I want to watch it even if I'm afraid [cry][cry]

It's the only fanfic I've seen on Tomato that I can read and find interesting, with a stolen original female lead. The guy who wrote it is not very OOC. The heroine is also a very good baby, quiet and cunning. She is the kind of look that I think the guy will like. Anyway, it is very comfortable to watch. Other articles seem awkward to me, but not this one.

The plots are all original by the author and are very exciting, but the timeline seems a bit blurry? The heroine is injured in more than half of the plots that I have read so far, which makes me a little exhausted. Coupled with various conspiracies and personnel hidden behind the scenes, the heroine has been pushed away, and she is a little exhausted, but the plot is very exciting. The introduction said that the heroine is a descendant of the Gu Immortal. I thought it was a trap for her. The heroine has been miserable in the beginning. I was waiting for the hook, but it turned out to be miserable. I feel sad.

One of the best fanfics I've ever read on Tomato! The heroine is really, really strong and I look forward to her continued growth! ! None of the characters are OOC, so I'm really looking forward to the follow-up development! It's really unfolded from a very novel perspective, very interesting!

Let's talk about the conclusion first. It's a fanfic that praises the original plot. There are no logical bugs in the plot. The timeline is after the main plot. Li Cu has grown up. The suspenseful atmosphere of the plot is full. Watching it at night really gave me a chill on my back. From the current point of view, each of the protagonists is not a good image. From the point of view of the CP, first of all, I personally like the blind man. If the CP had not been decided early, I would definitely be a big fan of the blind man. It is so exciting to fight and fight. Li Cu is an adult here. You have become a reliable adult, Yali~ The boss's writing is very good, I wish I could all have it! In this book, the mute is a super food protector, Wu Xie is a super Riddler, Wu Xie is in Evil Emperor mode now online, wait for the plot to unfold, and re-write the book review after it is finished.

Very well written! It's not a cookie-cutter plot. The original plot is very interesting. The dank and scary style sometimes gives me the feeling of watching a horror movie. The heroine is cautious, decisive and sincere. She never gives up on her companions and seizes the opportunity to strengthen herself. She is super reliable and has a very charming personality. Zhang Qiling's black blind man Wu Xie has no ooc. Moreover, the author's writing skills are very good, and the various horror descriptions make people immersed in the situation. Occasionally, he will tell a cold joke and be serious and funny, making it very readable.

This is my first time to write a review, because the author writes very well, and the atmosphere of suspense and horror is very good. The fear caused by the unknown feeling from the perspective of the heroine is particularly well written. Seeing that there is no tour group, extra points [blowing kiss]