You Accuse Me of Destroying the World? I’ll Just Destroy You for Real!

It looks okay, but the introduction is playing a word game. The career awakening and unlocking are not the first one. The first thing mentioned in the introduction is that the vest is S level, but currently it seems that it should be the second awakening S, now it is only A. The second vest is also A now, and you may get props to unlock the S level career.

A high-quality novel that can be read in one night. There is a bit of a deus ex machina in the Temple of Desire. If you add a few words, for example, there is an instinctive attraction somewhere, or the God of Desire attracts the protagonist to that hidden place, it will look better. Just because the exploratory behavior attracts attention is not enough explanation, even if the face pinching is particularly good-looking, it is not enough. It is mentioned later in the article that the God of Desire is already very weak and wants to suck desire, but there is no reason to seduce other people to become God's envoys. There is no way he would rather starve himself to death if he doesn't meet someone good-looking, right? Even if the God of Desire is really a faceless person and would rather starve if he couldn't find a good-looking God, at least mentioning a few words can make the impression a lot better. In summary, I would like to express that Temple of Desire is a bit more deus ex machina. Although it makes sense to think about it more, the author can add a few more sentences and more descriptions to make the impression much better. By the way, there is also your sister. Remember to mention more about the depth of your feelings for her in the following article, and intersperse some memories with her in the past. You are now writing about a deep relationship with your sister, but you have to describe why the relationship is deep. You cannot just throw away the setting of a sister who has a good relationship, but apart from this setting, it will be an empty shell with no memories. This will greatly affect the viewing experience. I think it is just right to intersperse memories with my sister when I was first brainwashed by the passerby hypnotist. People will recall beautiful things when they are in pain. At this time, you can let the protagonist think about some good memories with his sister. In this way, the protagonist can be worried about his sister. The sister and the protagonist have a good relationship with the character setting, which also makes people feel real, and will not feel like an empty shell. But it's troublesome to change the previous article now, and I can only patch it later. I suggest you shape it more every day, and occasionally have some deep memories. Once or twice is enough to have a real sense. Or arrange an event where the sister is willing to sacrifice for the protagonist to express her deep feelings. This allows the character to be developed. But I have a question. Author, you have set up a dreamer, so you can start the game without a sister, but after activating the system, you can just fantasize about a sister and insert it. This perfectly avoids the problem of needing to create a sister. I am worried about myself. Is there something wrong with me caring about myself? No problem at all. The author saw it and gave me a thumbs up. I spent most of the day typing in the middle of the night.

Come on, author, don't give up. The subject matter of this book is very novel, and the setting is not attractive. However, the plot setting is very interesting. It has the feeling of a lord novel that comes from scratch, and also simulates a unique and excellent novel. However, the name is a bit unattractive.

This book feels good. From what I've read so far, it feels like it has a lot of potential. Once it's written, it's considered a masterpiece. However, there are a lot of characters. There are only three chapters in more than forty years. The more people there are, the harder it is to write well. The opening and these characters reminded me of the Sorcerer's Manual inexplicably.

The new book is so to my liking. The previous book The Witch was also good, but I didn't expect to see it here [laughing]

There are many bugs, such as the white hair of No. 2 That turns black from time to time, and the talent level is also brushed aside. But I have to admit that this sister is very crucial. This can determine the attitude of the federation later, even if this sister has no substantial role.

The pace is fast and there is no sloppiness at all. The protagonist meets several clones soon after he creates them, and he doesn't waste too much time on insignificant supporting characters. Many other novels miss this point. Although this novel has flaws in the details, the overall look and feel is much better.

The subject matter is very novel and the writing is pretty good. Good luck to the author.

My sister is a bit poisonous, but the subject matter is good enough to cover up all the ugliness.

It looks good, support it.