
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Correction Plan, EVA Big Sword
新世纪福音修正计划EVA大宝剑
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 590k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 9mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
Other names
- EVA之修正这个离谱的世界Alternate title on Fanqie
In booklists 12
Neon Genesis Evangelion with Asuka as the Female Lead
I’m 80,000 Words In and Only 9 People Have Read It. Anyone Doing Worse?
I want to read something similar to A Martial World Big Shot Falls in Love with Me. I have been writing for a long time. Maybe it is just my own passionate effort, because absolutely no one is continuing to read it.
Underrated Novels That Are Surprisingly Perfect
Recommend some underrated novels that you personally think are great. Perfect plots, prose, and logic; no dumbed-down characters and nothing frustrating. Please choose carefully.
How Long Does It Take for a New Writer to Make It? I’ve Been Writing for 54 Days
54 days. I finished my first book on day 45: 320,000 words, writing for 8–12 hours a day. I’m now planning my second book, but nobody’s reading the first one anymore. Is it really that bad? Am I just someone with no talent? (sobbing)
Are There Really So Few Books About Eva?
Looking for books like Transmigrating into EVA and Changing the Plot.
Any Good Books Based on Neon Genesis Evangelion?
Urban Fantasy Novels Worth Reading
Warcraft Fanfiction
I've already read old Warcraft fanfics like "Shadowlands" and "Light's Trace". Of the fanfics I've found on Fanqie, only a few are any good. Any recommendations, guys?
Anyone Have Books About Neon Genesis Evangelion?
Looking for Novels About Evangelion Mecha
Feel-Good Anime Fanfiction
Thank you, everyone.
Looking for Books About Zenless Zone Zero, Genshin Impact, Honkai: Star Rail, Honkai Impact 3rd, or EVA (Neon Genesis Evangelion)!
Please recommend novels featuring MiHoYo games. EVA is welcome too. I’m begging you, my dears!!!
Reader comments 54
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Although I don't know much about World of Warcraft, I can combine EVA with it just right, and the characters and plot are EVA-y enough. There are even exciting original plots (the commander is treated as a Japanese, Shinji who is one and two minds, and the strange church). I hope the author will continue his efforts and complete the New Century Gospel Correction Plan!
This is the first EVA fanfic that completely fascinated me. It integrates the original settings and foreign settings very well, without any sudden and forced feeling, and does not break the original rhythm of the story. It allows people to truly understand that the author has thoroughly read the entire world view of EVA. As someone who has read the old and new times several times, I understand more details and the opposite characters. The analysis of the color made me immersed in it. The protagonist's handling of the relationship with Rei Ayanami and Asuka is how I hope Shinji can grow. I just hope that I can write more, continue the story completely, and see a different happy ending for everyone 😘 😘. The interaction with Rei Ayanami is so loving. Woohoo, Reitan cried to death.
It's a rare EVA fan with good writing, and the character's personality is well grasped. Although it's not completely divorced from the script of Dead Sea Documents, it doesn't completely follow the original plot, and has its own understanding and ideas. The writing is also good, overall it scores above 9 points.
Seeing it now, the writing is very good 😄 Some of the magic settings are easy to understand even if you don't know about them or haven't read them. But most of the combat descriptions and magic aspects are superficial. I mainly read the literary dramas, and the author has something. I've also been taking EVA supplements recently, and some people find it really hard to stretch themselves. Apart from Shinji's personality, which is a bit unpleasant, there's really nothing to say 👍 Misato counts as half, Kaoru counts as one, Makiha counts as one (mainly because I like her too), and the rest are just individuals 🤦 Of course I understand their psychology, but I can't accept it
In the past, when I looked at it as an animation, I felt something was wrong. It was twisted, perverted, and irrelevant. But now, when I look at it from Lao A's perspective, I can understand part of the core. EVA was created during the most prosperous period in the United States. The Japanese were very accurate about Western culture, religion, and politics. The Western religion, political correctness, extreme elitism, and personal heroism throughout the anime also highlighted the weak culture of the Western story background. The EVA written by the author seems to be looking down on metaphors, and there is no very straightforward criticism. Are you afraid of attracting those who criticize you? When the protagonist's power level reaches the showdown, he already occupies an absolute weight on one end of the scale. He can already do whatever he wants and still wants to use his mouth to escape and return to the plot trajectory. In the final analysis, EVA's plot is too thin, and it will be broken by just two casual pokes.
I recently rewatched the entire theatrical version of the novel by the author, and it was a very special feeling. I was less than six years old when I first watched EVA around 2000~2002. Liaoyi translated it as Sky Eagle Warrior. Although I couldn't understand it, it was really shocking. Especially when Unit 2 appeared, and Unit 1 was controlled by the puppet system to tear Unit 3 apart, I was deeply impressed. Later, I re-read it in the order in middle school! I couldn't understand it even more, but I still had a special feeling, similar to the feeling of mental pollution, which was very uncomfortable. Later, I went to college to learn more and read it for the third time to expand and expand it. Now that I have read this book, I have made up for many regrets and got rid of the uncomfortable and awkward feeling.
As you read along the way, the author has his own thoughts, rather than other running accounts that follow the plot. In comparison, the characters are more delicate. There are no EVA themes in Persimmon itself, and even fewer are willing to write about them well. If you like EVA, feel free to watch it🥳
The writing in 🍅 should be top-notch, the writing style is novel, and the protagonist does have the demeanor of four lives and three deaths. He did not exclude Shinji (original) from his psychological problems, but still took him through the plot.
This book is great, although I have very few fans of EVA (because there aren't many), and even if they do, they either push it all the way, or it is still covered in clouds, or in Zhu Tianwen, after more than ten chapters, the apostle takes the girl away and ends the matter hastily. (The Ultra Soldier looked back feeling embarrassed) At least this book explains clearly a lot of things that I didn't understand before. I am a human being in three generations, and many events are handled with humor, and the intensity is just right, neither too strong nor too weak. As for the shortcomings, at least I don't feel any shortcomings so far. Don't get hung up on girls, the two heroines are still junior high school students and underage. If you want the author to get in, just be louder. 😂
The writing style is good, it is rare to see such delicate writing in male videos, and the sense of nerdiness is just right, making the viewing experience very interesting. This Asuka is written in a way that makes people dislike her. The male protagonist can completely tolerate her temper, but as a reader, I only have six points to say... The overall level is very good, and the plot is also very interesting. The author explains the various complicated and awkward settings in the original work clearly and clearly. Those who have never seen EVA can also jump into the game vertically.