Wish System: How Could I Possibly Be Kyubey?

It's very beautiful, and it's my favorite style, but the author needs to pay more attention. This book is actually quite sharp, and it's easy to touch sensitive points and remove it from the shelves. Sometimes you have to think carefully about it, but this book really poked me. Whether it's the wish setting or the cruel reality ending, I was very touched.

It's a very good villain novel at the moment. Don't worry about the three-dimensional issue. The content is the same as that of a typical monster creation novel. The protagonist doesn't have a high sense of existence, but that's good. In previous monster creation novels, the protagonists all appeared in person. Basically, they stayed elegant and acted as the Riddler before becoming a god. Later, he became the mastermind behind the scenes. It was okay at first, but later on, it was weird. The protagonist of this book came out and asked if he wanted to make a wish to me. He would not care about them after that. It didn't matter what happened after that. There was an inexplicable feeling of fear. The author just kept it when he wrote it, so as not to be blocked by then.

Very good. Finally, he is not the owner of a coffee shop or teahouse, nor is he a man or a boy who fell to the ground in an alley on a rainy day at the beginning. This protagonist is the real behind-the-scenes person. He has no personal preferences and everything is left to chance [you taste carefully] [you taste carefully] [you taste carefully] Um, what the hell is Qin Wu? It's a big failure. The official just recruited someone and they were killed without even a little confrontation.

Very cool^ω^ Come on, author! The characters in it are also very well done, highly recommended! Especially after knowing that all those who make a wish are destined to perish (๑> <๑)

It's good-looking, and the characters who are approached by the protagonist are all very miserable. The world background is dark. Although it seems that they have been given extraordinary and costly abilities, which have changed the current situation, they have stepped into a darker abyss. I always feel that the protagonist can't go back home, and even if he can go back, it won't be his original home.

The writing is very good. It is the best book about the magic circle setting that I have read so far. Although the protagonist's rescue is a little slow, a good setting needs to be conceived. I still hope that the author can slowly polish the setting. However, there is no need to write too many linkages of abilities. After all, wishes are still wishes of desperation. Can the author consider what I'm thinking about? Alienation In the first stage, simply alienate items and let the alienated items fight for them. Of course, at the beginning, we should start with tiny human body tissues such as broken hair, dander, etc. In the second stage, just mutate some shaped objects, such as trees, houses, land, cars, and of course high-rise buildings. Stage 3 is the final stage of my conception. Through continuous use of alienation, oneself has been completely alienated. Every cell in the body has been alienated. Every cell has the ability to alienate, and can continue to spread the alienation. And because the cells have been alienated, they are no longer bound to the body. As long as there is one cell left, the alienation can continue to spread and rebuild the body. This alienation can be specifically shown as changing the shape and state of objects, turning animals into still life, and still life into animals. Of course, if you can't keep up with the version, you can also add some concepts, such as alienated cognition, alienated reality, alienated time, alienated space, and even alienated world. I don't know if this can be the author's inspiration. It would be great if it can be chosen. I hope it can be chosen. Oh my god.

The beginning is good, the plot is realistic, and the characters are well developed (first 50 chapters) It was very messy at the end. Not only was the plot bland and boring, but as the characters increased, it started to look more like a facial expression. In the end, it was obvious that the data was no longer good, so I cut it [face covering]

It's a pretty good behind-the-scenes boss story. At least it doesn't involve romance. He's not a moral role model, but the setting makes the structure of the novel relatively simple. It would be boring to just write one kind of plot. After all, it is a novel, and you have to consider the fun. Of course, if it is the kind of story that generates electricity for love, then I didn't say that.

Personally, I rarely comment on novels, but this novel made me angry. Advantages: The writing is smooth and the plot is compact, very magical girl Disadvantages: Too Magic Circle, too depressing. Even Magic Circle can sometimes soothe the mood. The author is like blowing up a balloon without letting him pop or deflating. There is no highlight of humanity (it is very easy to make him pop. In such a big world, I don't believe there are no people who despair of the human species. As long as one wishes to destroy the whole world, all mankind will be better) A person may have a wish with negative emotions, but among the eight billion people, none of them wish to be a righteous partner of the Light Armor Warrior Kamen Rider. This world is unreasonable, capital (exploitative), negative, and too realistic. And I feel that the protagonist's final ending may be like Allen's As long as someone tries hard and then fails, it's fine. I have never seen anyone try hard to save this shabby world. Even Qin Wuwei feels that he wants to be like Ye Shenyue. The combat power is extremely unbalanced and there is no competitive battle. At the beginning, he wanted to see if there is a witch. There are so many pictures. There is no witch appearing. I have been watching some people suffer various blows, then make wishes, and then take revenge on society. This pattern has always been there. The author has three modes of making wishes. The mode of not wishing others to suffer, or the mode of helping others, gaining strength, and then taking revenge. The wishes made are not abstract enough, not fantasy enough, and not weird enough.

In this world where luxury covers up ugliness, light hides darkness, and people think their daily lives are filled with injustice, your novel is so unique. It satirizes the world in a way that is not unjust, but unfulfilled. Excellent, but you can be born out of Puella Magi Madoka Magica, and there is no need to become someone else's shadow fan.