After a Thousand Years of Gathering Immortal Fortunes for My Clan, I Became an Immortal Daoist

It's a cool novel among the immortal cultivating novels. The protagonist encounters various opportunities, and then he is on the way to accept the chance people. So far, I feel that it is very well written, especially the family atmosphere is very good. I like this very much.

Finally caught up with the large army in Chapter 614 in one go! I couldn't stop watching the whole thing, and I really want to urge the author to update it quickly! The whole novel is an excellent reading experience, and there is no poisonous point in the whole process. Different from the cool novels on the market that are filled with mindless plots, the protagonist of this book has an online IQ, thoughtful thinking, full of talents and opportunities, and a very lovable character. As a family story on the Internet, the whole family works together, without any embarrassing internal conflicts or forced conflicts. The process of the family's rise is smooth, real and natural. Moreover, the author has a strong skill in shaping group portraits. Although the narrative perspective mostly focuses on the protagonist, each supporting character has a distinct personality and flesh and blood. Their respective love-hate entanglements and life choices are all described in detail and lifelike. There has never been a book that I have followed more than 600 chapters, and I still feel that the updates are not enough! I sincerely hope that the author will make more updates and continue to update, and I wish that the popularity of the work will skyrocket and the results will be great!

It's not bad. It seems that there aren't many plots that are too toxic so far. The emotional scenes are relatively unfamiliar, and the protagonist is quite decisive in killing. Although the writing is a bit verbose in some places, it doesn't matter. Although there are traces of other novels, it's okay. Originally, many online articles about cultivating immortals are the same, as long as they are written to be readable.

Overall it's okay, the writing is a bit immature, it can barely be considered an above-average Blood Food, Jie Jie Jie [sneaky laugh]

The battle is so well written that it can be said to be a god! I beg you to expand the realm more than three times and the map more than five times in the future! [Laughs] The complete realm system: Golden elixir → Nascent Soul → Transformation → Refining the Void → Fusion → Mahayana → Tribulation → Earth Immortal → Celestial Immortal → Golden Immortal → Xuan Immortal → Immortal King → Immortal Emperor → Immortal Emperor → Holy Lord → Holy King → Holy Lord → Holy Ancestor → Divine Disciple → Divine General → Divine King → Divine Honor → Creation God → Eternal Realm, 🤔 🤔 Test] 🤔 Complete big world map: Family territory → Sect territory → Prefectures → Dynasty → Zhongzhou → Southern Wilderness → East China Sea → Northern Icefield → Western Region → Nine Heavens Immortal Realm → Ten Thousand Demon Realm → Demon Realm → Underworld → Buddha Realm → Extraterritorial Void → Sea of Chaos → Ancient God Realm → Continent of Origin → Endless Plane → Hongmeng Realm

He was rescued by a mortal woman due to a big disaster - he had a secret love for no reason - the whole village was killed when the protagonist left, which is very good

The writing is pretty good, the family is harmonious, and you can feel the warmth while reading it. Smooth narrative and rigorous logic (But the author's popularity doesn't seem to be very good. There are always people who haven't even finished reading the sentences jumping out to comment. This is really disrespectful to others.)

The family atmosphere is quite good, I prefer the role of the younger brother who controls the younger brother, and Goldfinger is also okay. The writing style is light and humorous, not very depressing. It's just that the protagonist is not cautious enough, and he is very nervous when he goes out to get the opportunity of the sky fire. I am worried for him. It would be better if he can be more stable. One incident happened one after another, and my little heart couldn't bear it anymore. I haven't finished reading it yet, but I came across Secret Realm Apprenticeship here. It's very well written.

The writing is good so far, and the relationship within the family is also very good, but I feel that the hook is a bit too big. It is better to arrange opportunities according to the realm of the protagonist. Opportunities at a higher realm will be good, and opportunities should not be too frequent, otherwise they will rise too fast and it will be difficult to deal with later.

The writing is very good, there is nothing poisonous, and it has a potential of more than 9 points. I have read 214 chapters so far, and it has not collapsed. The protagonist is stable, and he does what he needs to do, and he does what he needs to do. The family development is good, there is no intrigue, and it is not the kind of poverty alleviation story where one person supports the family. There is a heroine but it is not obtrusive. It is a cool article 👍