Seeking the Dao at a Hundred

Is this written by AI? The settings were changed after writing 248. It turned out that he had entered the Immortal Sect since he was a child.

It's just a hard rock. Look at this, it's just your own fault.

I'm talking a lot of nonsense. What you, an old man, described is too much. . . . Do you plan to write 500 chapters during his Qi training period? I guess your novel won't be finished without five thousand chapters. It's too frequent and too detailed, which makes people feel long-winded. Do you understand that what we are reading is a novel? What is a novel? But overall it feels good

I don't know anything The protagonist is a hundred years old, does he have any great-grandchildren? Is Cuihua the daughter-in-law or the granddaughter-in-law? Is Goudan a great-grandson or a grandson? Are Cuihua and Goudan mother and son or grandson? If Goudan is the great-grandson of the protagonist and Cuihua calls the protagonist's father, then Cuihua and Goudan are grandsons? Still? So who are the grandsons and granddaughters-in-law? Why not?

Nonsense accounts for most of it, is it necessary that emotional close-ups account for half of it? It's not necessary, girls are chirping.

The preface does not match the afterword, and the timeline is messed up. The protagonist clearly entered the sect when he was a hundred years old, but later it was written that he joined the sect a hundred years ago, and the living granddaughter-in-law and great-grandson were written as if they were dead.

Why did you change the setting in Chapter 178? I got started at 100 years old. I got started at 100 years old. Absolutely unbelievable

I originally thought the idea was pretty good and a bit novel, but the more I read it, the more I realized the writing was confusing and inconsistent. But having said that, AI is really powerful now👍🏻

There are contradictions. At the beginning, it is written that after the earth spirit root was detected, he went to practice immortality after he was a hundred years old. Later, he said that he entered the sect since he was a child and practiced immortality for a hundred years. Has the author's memory been split?

The story is good, the language is concise, the writing is unique, and it is very innovative. It has the feeling of a long drizzle, or the mellow aroma of old wine, which suits my taste ❤️ ❤️