The Idol Girl Can't Help Getting Closer

It's pretty good-looking, sweet and has a bit of a magical feel, but the world avatar is okay, but I personally feel that the supernatural insertion in the back is unnecessary, and there is also a body swap by the Internet. Although the final result is not bad, it feels a bit deliberate. Now that the plot is almost complete, I don't know how much more I can write. Finally, I hope the male protagonist can be more proactive. Come on finally

The chapter where Hoshino pretends to be Mutsumi is such a terrible battle of wits. I once thought Dora was blind, and every time I loudly told her where the troublemaker was, thinking that I would save her from danger. Until one time when she was eating cookies and forgot to shout, she resolved the crisis with ease and then turned to look at me. "We found the troublemaker." The smiley expression froze on her face, and her piercing eyes revealed a piercing coldness. It was a terrifying scene that I had never seen before. The cold air like being pierced by an icicle instantly invaded my whole body, and I lost all consciousness. I was as ignorant and powerless as a paramecium, and was being watched by a superior person under a microscope. It wasn't until a mocking and joking "Thank you" that I was brought out of my daze. I didn't even notice that my saliva and sweat were all over the floor. Even though I no longer watch TV, I have not come out of the shadows in the past twenty years, and I still dream about that day from time to time. What else is there to say? Happy Tomato Ending

The emotional description is very delicate, but I am not sure whether the influence of supernatural factors on the book is positive or negative. It always feels like superfluous, and there is a feeling that supernatural factors are added in order to continue writing but it cannot be finished so quickly. Personally, I feel that if the supernatural factors are put aside, this short love story will undoubtedly be a divine book, and it will be a perfect score among the full marks. I am looking forward to the author's next plot. I wonder when Miku and the male protagonist will be able to live happily together. I hope the author can write their own unique story based on what they have in mind. Please come on!

It's well written, and the settings for eating go and chicken are pretty good, but the main character is too immersive, and I don't know if the substitute will be a solution to a certain death situation later on, otherwise it's too useless, and it's a bit far-fetched to forcefully write some conflicts. Let's see the author's update. I suddenly got hooked on Daredevils halfway through watching it. I've never watched Daredevils, but it's not appropriate for such supernatural things to appear in a girl band. Although Bang Bang's world view is a bit supernatural, it's not to the point of being dangerous.

How shameless! At first, I didn't pay much attention to the character of Chu Hua, and I didn't watch the original series (mainly because I didn't want to eat Shi [face covering]). I mostly watched videos of complaints and summaries from Ah B. After reading a few second-generation novels, I slowly got to know the characters in it. After getting to know the role of Chu Hua, I felt more sad and pity for her, because such a good girl was so abstract. Fortunately, I can see this book here, which can sort out my inner injustice [laughs]. Come on, write well!

I have to say that this book is really well written, but there are a few points that I would like to point out. Let me start with a disclaimer. I am simply commenting from my perspective and do not represent the general public, nor do I want to teach people how to write a book (after all, writing novels is indeed difficult) The stand-in thing is a bit redundant, but it basically does not affect daily life. It is very good as a golden finger, but the inclusion of many supernatural plots is a bit outrageous. It feels like a dream. To put it bluntly, I write what I dream about. Then there is the matter of plot advancement, which is very abstract. First of all, I know that writing Mygo must involve contact, but is it a bit OOC for Chuhua to recommend the protagonist to help in this situation? Also, the whole soul swap of Mortis is too outrageous... Then, it is normal for the protagonist's personality to change a little after the big teacher, but the change is a bit too big. Next, the part I just saw is the ability transfer. Apart from these authors, their writing skills are also quite high, and their psychological descriptions are also very expressive...

This book is above average Let's talk about the problem first: there are too many branch lines compared to the main line. This is a common problem in variety comics. After all, characters from other anime are written, and it is obviously a waste not to let the protagonists take part in their stories. But don't hold back, and don't overdo it. Non-essential branch lines feel like watering down. When reading this book, you basically rush to see Chu Hua and the protagonist. Some things should be skipped, otherwise it will affect the viewing experience. In terms of advantages, the characters of this book are online; the interaction between the protagonist and Chu Hua is very sweet and not awkward; the connection between the text is very smooth and it is very comfortable to read. Then there is the issue of the protagonist's superpower (stand-in). I feel that there is no need to add a superpower character to the protagonist, and there is no need to add a superpower background to the world. This feels very abrupt. And just speaking personally, avatars, armors, Ultraman, etc. Are only suitable to appear in my own world view. If they appear in other world views, it will feel very strange.

It's a very good work. Although I personally read mostly harem comics in the variety genre, the single heroine Chu Hua in this book is very well-written and delicate. Although the human-machine protagonist in the previous novel is a bit human-machine in some parts (I was playing with AI before reading this book, and I always felt that some of the descriptions were like AI assistance), but if you can understand what the human-machine protagonist does and experiences, it must be very human-machine (laughs). What's commendable is that the places where Chuhua sprinkles sugar are very sweet, and it breaks the image of a loser aunt that has almost entered my mind (I thought you should die, I almost forgot that Mr. Chuhua actually has such a great face). By the way, because I know this is a comprehensive comic, but I still preconceived the tag of daily life. Although the setting of the protagonist having a double has been memorized for a long time, whether it is the soul exchange or the several supernatural clips of The Daring Party, I feel a little uncomfortable and disconnected. I think it will be better if it can be handled properly [Sending Hearts]

After reading the previous dozens of chapters, I came here to comment first. The characters are great. At this time, it is rare to have such a pure iceberg of indifference. The transformation of the character and the dialogue, character, and multi-faceted description are unique and unparalleled [Love] I stayed up all night to finish reading it, it was a miracle and I was so dizzy 😋 So what will happen next? There will be no plot after Mujica comes out. I don't know if there will be another season yet. Is it going to be supernatural? [Think]

The writing style is still a little green, and it seems to be a little cramped or immature. There are many, many colorful characters, many many sudden bonds, and many many weird adventures. It makes people feel chaotic but a little bit acceptable. Even so, everyone is a good person. Maybe there are some shortcomings, but I am very happy to watch it. It is enough to prove that this is a good book and one worth reading. A good book to keep going with Chuhua firmly