The Legend of Luo Xiaohei: How to Win Over a Stray Kitten

It's good to watch, but the protagonist grows up too slowly. This is basically the biggest problem. Then, there is a section that is so frustrating that I almost didn't watch it, but overall it's pretty good. Whether it's the relationship with Xiao Hei or daily life, the writing is a bit childish. There are basically no major problems elsewhere. I'm quite optimistic about it.

The writing is very good. When the protagonist approaches Xiao Hei, the writing is very realistic. After all, although the kitten is young, he is still very vigilant. The behavior of the protagonist is also very real. I hope you will work hard and update it [please update]

I beg the author to keep working on it, it's really well written and beautiful. I hope the author will not stop, don't stop, don't stop! (Final question, which one of them is one?) [Laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

Look, finally there is a book that is still alive and has not been updated as a CP with Xiao Hei.

The strategy for attacking Xiao Hei is very simple. Buy him a lot of delicious materialized Xiao Hei, and then pretend to be pitiful. Slowly test the contact to make Xiao Hei slowly let down his guard. After letting down his guard, hey `(*∩_∩*)′ Cute little kitten, so spicy.

Overall, it looks pretty good, but I want to ask if there is a knife in this one. If there is a knife, is it a big knife or a small knife? Will it hurt the protagonist and Xiao Hei? Personally, I prefer Xiao Tian's novel. When I was watching the movie, I felt sorry for Xiao Hei's suffering so much [I almost cried], so I still hope that there won't be any knives, so that the protagonist and Xiao Hei can grow up happily [sending my heart], don't have these knives anymore @ Finally, I would like to ask if Xiao Hei's domain will be taken away. I hope the author can reply after seeing it [sending my heart] Also, this book is very interesting. Come on! (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤

[Laughing] It's really good-looking. It can basically be said to follow the route of the original work. To me, there are almost no surprises. I don't think the characters are OOC. I highly recommend [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

The plot is very interesting. The only fanfic I have found so far that has a setting that perfectly clicks with me. It's really interesting to have Abai in the plot.

The writing is good. A few of the CPs are Xiao Hei's novels about two men. There are very few typos and the plot is compact [Like]

I feel that Xiao Hei and A Bai were captured by Feng Xi and the others for some reason. After they knew that Feng Xi and Xu Huai were powerful Long You and found the enhanced puppets, they did not take corresponding countermeasures and just waited for the arrival of Infinite who was performing the task. Didn't the other executors or elders participate in this incident? There is a feeling of doing nothing. Of course, this is just my idea. The guild hall was originally a goblin guild hall. Maybe before Feng Xi exposed his robbery and Xiao Hei didn't show his domain, they wouldn't have thought that there would be such a big fuss.