I Have a Seed of the World

I prefer this kind of small world development flow, that is, the author occasionally messes with the setting, and is still a little bit poisonous. I saw a lot of girls in the latest chapter. Maybe the protagonist is busy surviving. None of the girls moved, so I started to have some ideas in the dialogue and then I was busy escaping and stopped taking action. I read the comments about why there are no male talents. I just want to say that if men can do it, women can also do it. It is obvious that the small world is the harem of the protagonist. What should men do if they are self-disciplined? After all, beautiful girls who are capable and eye-catching may be taken into the harem later, so there is no need to let men in. After seeing the latest plot based on the environment, the girls should be new. Nowadays, beautiful girls are all in the small world. The author should be able to qcqs and observe with five stars first. Let's go, it is undeniable that the development of a small world requires a population. The small world may be larger than the world where the protagonist is in the later stage, but it is better not to enter the small world in the early stage, no matter how big or small. The protagonist hasn't eaten in more than a hundred chapters, maybe it's nourishing his stomach.

Why are all novels about fighting people? The world is so big, so people don't kill people every day. Do you feel uncomfortable if you don't kill people for a day? Good guy, this protagonist is a disaster star! If you walk on the front foot, the back foot will be destroyed

It's okay, it's pretty good-looking, but there are some minor flaws. What I can't accept the most is what other reviews have said. The protagonist is a "disaster star" and his family is destroyed wherever he goes. Although the current main tone is that before the disaster comes, their destruction also has its own reasons, but this way of writing gives people the feeling that the protagonist is a broom star. It affects people's sense of immersion.

It has been updated to Chapter 76. Generally speaking, there are quite a few flaws, but it is still watchable. For example, the protagonist takes in all women, and the energy for upgrading the small world can only be obtained from the outside world. Things are not stable enough, and everything feels like a sudden decision. Moreover, almost everyone died after the protagonist left. This is not good. Although it is said to have happened in the first place, the time is too tight, and it looks like a disaster star. In the follow-up, I suggest that the small world can produce energy by itself, even if it is a little slower, but it cannot be without it, otherwise the protagonist will only be stuck by the energy in the end, and no matter how small the small world is, it is a world and not a space. As for recruiting people, it is recommended to recruit some couples or men. If you are afraid of trouble or hidden dangers, just add a setting to the small world that will be stamped with thoughts to ensure loyalty. In terms of species and energy collection, it is recommended When the strength is about the same, you can take the trading route. Groups are always faster than individuals. In disasters, you can go slower and give the protagonist enough time. In addition, the protagonist upgrades faster and the space of the small world is larger. You also need to add settings to get supplementary laws from species. After all, the world is built with laws by default, otherwise it will give people the impression that yours is not a small world but an independent space. This You have to pay attention to it, and you can keep the level of the small world but the space can be enlarged. For example, new species are obtained, new laws are obtained, and the world becomes a little stronger. In this way, the space problem can be solved. After all, according to your settings, this world has harsh terrains. Without laws, this area always feels inadequate. Then, it is necessary to make good data and obtain new laws, which can lead to a major expansion. The follow-up will be similar. It can be supplemented but the expansion should be smaller, and then the data and combat power should be kept constant. Don't have confusing data or sudden highs and lows in combat power, which will affect reading. According to your world setting, when the protagonist becomes stronger, he can trade in different terrains. Although it is a matryoshka during this period, pay attention to the content you write. It is also very good writing content. Different customs, different species characteristics, etc., Can be written for a long time. @Most twisted curse

The author saw my comments. Now that I have a small world, I can save more blood, and then become the Lord of Creation, a Goblin, a dragon, a titan, a feathered human wing. Later, I will create an angel reincarnation pool to be the master of the world, and then connect the world I traveled through to create a world invasion career transition ceremony. That's not cool [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] and then create an abyss careless one. The main world is called Tiandao. That's not cool. Krass [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] Written like this, I guarantee that many people will read the author's reply after seeing my comment. I will share some new ideas later and let's discuss them together [thinking][thinking][laughing and crying]

Five-star praise, just because this setting is relatively novel, you use the wool of the main world to develop your own small world, the background is still the wasteland world (it should be the doomsday frozen world), the author's writing is not bad, except for the slow update, everything else is good!

As you continue reading, there are a lot of problems but they are acceptable. First, even if the Wanfei King encounters mostly men with certain abilities and bloodlines, it is understandable that I like to conquer women, because this is more realistic. The second is that the life span of the small world is calculated in days, which is also called a world.

The advantages are obvious, but there are also disadvantages. It is recommended to strengthen the authority of the Lord of the World. After all, the world needs to develop, and people's hearts will change. It is meaningless to rely solely on so-called loyalty screening. When the world becomes bigger, it will require countless lives to develop. Whether good or evil, they are all materials for the development of the world.

Three thousand harems do not involve pornography

Looking at the title, I thought it was just another piece of shit, but it looks like it has great potential and is capable of playing well. It's just that the fighting is a bit lacking

Amitabha, good, good, good

What suits my taste is the node (branch line?) Of the big tribe. I want it to be too fast. The current main line is to retrieve black, so I feel that it should be too fast (in terms of time) and not drag the rhythm all the time.

The author quickly updated me [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger]

It's a survival setting I've never seen before, but it's okay. Currently, more than 80 chapters are about to be released. Cheers, author [sending heartfelt wishes]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Good, good, good, good

The subject matter is novel and the content is solid.

Very good, you can take a look

Characterization can

Come on, give me more

It's okay, you can take a look at Shuhuang.

Good book, but too short

Please tell me what kind of person would sell himself for someone he has been with for two months [face covering]

I can live to see it, so I won't be depressed at all.

It's a rare good book, but it's a pity it's discontinued

From a professional point of view, although it cannot reach 9 points for a masterpiece, at least 7.5 Points are acceptable. The subject matter is good, the writing style is basic, and the handling of relationships is a bit poor.

Come on, don't stop updating, it's better to update more [laughing]

It's beautiful. This setting is quite interesting. Good luck to the author.

The imagination is very good and the world view setting is also good. It's a pity that it is hand-made by real people.

Very nice, good subject matter