Global Text Invasion? I Slay Gods on Paper!

The theme is generally good, but there are a few aspects that are about to become poisonous points. First, the protagonist's knowledge seems to be disconnected between the inside and outside of the parchment, but the skills are connected. It feels like the wizard has become a skill thrower for the real protagonist. In reality, knowledge is rarely pursued, and innovation is not strong. Suggestion: The author slowly transitions the protagonist's knowledge from early learning to later research and development. Second, the protagonist often appears to be overconfident. For example, after finding the sealed place of the local god in the first world, not knowing his attitude, strength, and whether the information is true, he would consider attacking the opponent. This feels contrary to the rational entry of "Wizard's Heart". Later, in reality, he is too arrogant at some moments, feeling that he can do anything. It may be possible to complete it sometimes, but it is often difficult to complete but with good luck, which is a bit... Um... Not good. Suggestions: The author can be more cautious when writing unknown situations, be more powerful in face-slapping plots, and be more tactful in communicating with unknown beings. After all, absolute rationality should ensure that one's own interests are maximized in known information. Still a little bit, but too lazy to type. Come on, author

It's quite interesting, but the protagonist is still pretending to be a pig after more than 100 chapters. At least let the heroine know some of your strength. Does the author think that this is more fun, the protagonist pretends to be a pig, and then those women will grab you despite the danger, and then you can naturally help them later? It was frustrating to watch, but the plot of the simulated world was very interesting.

Personal shortcomings ⒈Background. ⑴. The old-fashioned sweet love between childhood sweethearts, or the daughter of a rich family and a poor orphan①. ⑵. As a top student who can take the first place in the city in the college entrance examination②, the protagonist does not show the matching high IQ. So is his childhood sweetheart. ⑶. Under normal circumstances, top students should be in key classes, but the class in the article seems to be just a few top students and a bunch of transparent ones. There are still several rich guys and a bunch of handsome guys and beauties③. Not very realistic. Moreover, a bunch of top students just like this and that, lacking grace, thinking and temperament. ⒉Plot ⑴. The plot of the novice copy is too slow ④. ⑵. The stakes were too high at the beginning, and then they were forcibly weakened ⑤. ⑶. Omit 3. Characters ⑴. There are no particularly impressive characters. ⑵. The male-to-female ratio of the people around the protagonist is too large, and the author is particularly not good at portraying female characters. Various supporting female characters have their own shortcomings⑥. ⑶. The protagonist is a little ambitious. Personally considered advantages 1. The description of the copy is good and the world view is huge. 2. There are some foreshadowings and clues. 3. There are a lot of memes, and most of them can make people laugh. Explain ①: See Chapter 1 ②: See Chapter 7 ③: See Chapter 1, Chapter 22, 23, etc. ④: The latest chapter is still in the novice copy ⑤: There are plug-in assistance in Chapters 1, 10, 48 and the early stage, but less after that. ⑥: Chapter 24, 36, 37, 70 Mo Qinglan, Chapter 63 Long Yuehe, etc. Statement The above content only represents my personal views, and everyone will have a different reading experience. Everyone is encouraged to read it for themselves and respect your different opinions. Accept criticism, but please also comment rationally and kindly. Due to limited personal level, energy and time, the above content is not completely complete, please forgive me. The above content only refers to the work itself, and does not contain personal attacks, insults, slander, etc. On the author. I fully respect the author's work. If it causes discomfort or disgust to the author or readers, or if you think that the content I published is inconsistent with the facts, please contact me and I will delete the content and apologize to you. I have only read Chapter 108 and skipped a small amount, so my views may be one-sided and wrong. I welcome criticism and correction. Please abide by the law, abide by morality, be cautious in your words and deeds, and think deeply and diligently.

Good-looking is good-looking, that is Two pictures a day, enough for anyone to see [smile] It's so long-winded. How long has it been? I haven't pushed the main line yet [smile]

The plot is clear to the end at a glance, and the beginning is well written, so it's time to finish the book. Goodbye

The book is good to read. The introduction has been revised very slowly. Chapter 200 is still in Novice Village. I can't imagine how much time it will take to write the next copy [face covering]. If you like a slow pace, you can read it.

It's pretty good, and the theme is relatively new, like the combination of simulator + Microxulu + Weird Resurrection? There's nothing too sinister about it at the moment, it's just that the protagonist's temperament is... Too calm? I don't feel so decisive, I think at least in reality it's better to show off your edge [rolls eyes][rolls eyes]

The author's first copy is really superb, with foreshadowing one after another. It's really good to see the first main line later, but I don't know if it can be maintained later. I don't want to push the protagonist if it is too strong. It just needs ups and downs to make it interesting.

It's not too toxic and the main character has a clear mind, which is good. The most difficult thing to control in this kind of novel is the protagonist's own understanding of his own abilities. In many novels, he has acquired very strong power but always pretends to be a grandson, or in other words, after acquiring weak power, he is so confident that he is omnipotent and is labeled as a grandson. It's important to control your position in the food chain, and the protagonist is very careful in this regard, which is good.

As long as there are less than half of the current plot, the rating will definitely be 9 points, and if there is no female protagonist, it can reach 9.5 Points or above (some novels are all male, and some novels are all female, it would be better to have a mix of male and female protagonists, some need female protagonists, and some novels do not need them at all, and this is the case for you and my friends) [OK] Completely skipping the real-life plot will not affect the reading experience. I personally tested it.