A Journey Across the Heavens, Beginning with the Pope

Well written. However, when the author later writes about Dongzhou, he has the same name as those historical celebrities, so you should pay attention. No matter what, they are all positive figures recognized by the country in current history. It's not that I don't want you to write, I just want you to pay attention to it and make it clear in one stroke. Don't use too many words to describe these characters. What's wrong? Looking forward to your next content.

It's well written, the early stage was fine, but in the later stages, the protagonist's character was all over the place.

Ps1: Before I read the changes, I thought the best plan for the first world was actually that Xiao Dongping fought with the protagonist with all his strength. The protagonist won, but at the same time, because of the departure of his subordinates and the first woman, his son's rebellion made him tired, his divinity weakened, and his humanity counterattacked. Although Xiao Dongping lost, the magical power he brought allowed the subsequent empire to prosper even without the protagonist's fighting spirit. The protagonist allowed Xiao Dongping to succeed, and left in the void with a cry of "loyalty". Ps2: After the change, it is still better than no change at all. When the ending of the first world is not released, it is a masterpiece. The posture of the masterpiece is 2-3 stars if the ending of the first world is not changed. The first world is changed but it can only be given 3-4 stars due to the fact that it has not been changed. This is a more objective evaluation. I actually think that both without changes and changes should be three stars, but after the change, is the three stars too decisive? But I suddenly felt that if I didn't change it, I should get 2 stars, so I changed it to 3 stars. Ps3: I think the author of the first world said that many people don't like it and want to skip it. I don't know what to say. The author must have his own judgment and his own audience, and he can conduct research when necessary. This is especially true for unlimited streaming. Some people like the first world, and there are also people who don't like the first world. Without their own direction, people in the first world and the second world will not like to watch it. What I am facing now is the first world, and the perception of the second world is not very good. I think there should be a lot of drop-outs after the end of the first world. Ps4: I think the three-star rating is generally pretty good, and the four-star rating is pretty good and worth thinking about. However, the four-star rating I think of is the erosion of time after the change. The highest rating in the first world is four stars, but it will be very few. If it is not changed to 2-3 stars, it is changed to 3-4 stars, which is three and a half stars. Ps5: There is no reference or opinion here, just a simple chat. When Gnar died, the protagonist thought of his previous appearance, and maybe thought about saving him, but the peak of power has been alienated, and Gnar must die too. When the protagonist heard that Irene died, or was broken by her son's rebellion, she thought about falling from the sky naked, but Irene was also going to die. The emergence of the world's will was unexpected, but not important. Magical power The amount is not important. The result is the same whether there is magic or not. It is just pushing and delaying the result. Even the empire has decayed and collapsed over hundreds of thousands of years, but it is still not important. Letting Xiao Dongping control magic and become emperor is also the protagonist's own selfishness. It can be prosperous for a while. Although it is guilty to rebel against his father, it is enough to show his ability. He is more capable than other children, but it is still unimportant to the protagonist. He will eventually leave.

In the interstellar era, I feel that the protagonist will be killed by the third son. Has he discovered something about cultivating immortals?

It's a very good book about Astrology. The protagonist is self-interested and decisive in killing. The first world is not too bright when it comes to establishing a unified world through religion, but it's not bad at the end. The will of the world makes trouble and the son betrays and changes. It's okay without the panic at the beginning. The second world is very well written so far. There are many highlights that are similar to counter-routines and are unexpected developments. The characteristic of Zhutianwen is the novelty brought about by different experiences and results in different worlds. This book perfectly reflects this. Unlike other Zhutianwen, the routine of harvesting resources in different worlds is almost unchanged. Of course, the author had better make it clear that one Qi transforms into three pure things, otherwise others will think it is a clone flow and will be easily scolded.

I just finished watching the first world, the logic is online, and the protagonist is very interesting. The protagonist founded a religion in the first world, proclaimed himself the Pope, was extremely self-interested, and was a very thorough political creature. He will marry a wife and have children, but if necessary, he will not hesitate to use them as tools. He has some feelings, but will never be hindered. This is exactly like the ambition of those tycoons in history. This is not much better than those virgin novels that fail to write emotional scenes, so they go to the other extreme and kill themselves with a knife. As for many comments saying that the protagonist was overthrown by his own son and kicked out of the world, I actually found it quite interesting. The protagonist is so anthropomorphic, with a loving father and a filial son, which is very reasonable (¯―¯٥).

It's well written, and it feels good to watch the political struggle between the protagonist's children. Also, will the protagonist's plug-in be taken away by then?

I didn't see it before it was changed, but it looks pretty good now. Make progress slowly 🍉

Five stars for encouragement

In the first world, there are three major races of beauties in the harem. The author is an old foodie [laughter][laughter][laughter]