There's No Springtime for an Older Magical Girl

The writing is quite touching. At first, the protagonist thought she was a cold and rational elder sister, but she turned out to be a little blockhead [face covering]. In fact, I quite like this one. From the current situation, I feel that there may be a possibility of a knife protagonist, and I can look forward to a plot that will explode the vest in the future. I hope I won't stop updating [laughing] Seeing now, let me make a complaint, author, how do you manage to update twice a day without breaking out? Do you know how heartbroken I am when I see it? ! Now that I'm done complaining, let's talk about my feelings after watching it so far. It's like the feeling of powerlessness you feel when you first thought you were eating ordinary Malatang, but found it was very delicious and started eating it every day, only to find out in the end that it was because of the added ice. It was so weird to watch when Jiang Cheng and Xiao Su were crazy about flga before the conflict broke out [facepalm]. In the middle, Jiang Cheng was bullied by the world and rejected by the people he liked. On the contrary, only Xia Ying, who hated the agency, believed in her (although it was also the fault of An Lu, a coward, for not clarifying her intentions). The feeling of powerlessness was so real, and it was so exciting for the wife chasing after her. Next is the meeting to criticize Anlu😡, fw Anlu, the Shunfeng game can be like this😡, what can you do with Xiao Su if you take the initiative? ! 😡How dare you teach Xiao Su how to chase Jiang Cheng? Can you reflect on what you have done? ! ! Fw Anlu😡

After reading it, I didn't know what to say. I haven't felt lost for a long time... This book is absolutely high-quality, and the characters are vividly imagined, which left a deep memory for me. The plot is sweet in the early stage, bitter in the middle stage, and bitter-sweet in the later stage. The emotions are Sydney, and there are not too many unreasonable elements. Although there are some cases where I don't open my mouth, it is basically reasonable and consistent with the character. It is convincing. The author's writing has improved a lot compared to the previous book. I still feel reluctant to leave after reading it. However, the ending is a bit rushed, and there are many things that can be explained. If you don't believe me, it is not a loss to invest in.

There are actually a lot of poisonous points, but most of them are bearable. It's a very interesting book. First, emotional arousal, this is a major problem. Even after watching the ending, I feel that Jiang Cheng's injustice is greater, not balanced enough, and some of the emotional changes are too abrupt. In addition, the related climaxes and exciting points can actually be more detailed and extreme, such as the collapse of the protagonist and Su's pain. Second, logic and rationality, to a large extent, give up some rationality for the sake of content. For example, a country's mobilization in the face of extreme threats is extremely terrifying, but it is not written out. The mental illness and mental illness of the protagonist in the article obviously cannot be cured by releasing it. Is there no clear transition from extreme to calm? Third, the world view. This may be a word count issue. This article focuses on describing the emotions of the protagonist, but the related world view is extremely vague, and the special features of this world are not reflected from different people. Generally speaking, the poisonous spots are not very painful, and most of them can be tolerated, which is actually relatively rare in Persimmon. Although the Wife Chasing Crematorium is not enough to relieve the anger, it can still bring a lot of attractions. Finally, I wish the author to write his most satisfying work. "Excellent work of inferior quality"

I am also a bookworm, and I highly recommend it to those who like to read magical girl themes. The tug-of-war and love-hate relationship between Yue Rin and Lao Cheng really impressed me! The supporting characters are also very vivid and vivid, and every character can be related to the plot, especially the plot where Yue Rin discovers that Lao Cheng is a magical girl. I cried to death and felt so distressed! Woohoo, but now Xiao Yue Rin has started chasing his wife. Xiao Chengcheng's arrogant look makes people laugh! Looking forward to the follow-up plot. The author's writing style and wild imagination are really too strong. I'm already twisting into maggots on the bed. I really want to lock the author in a small dark room day and night and train her into a code girl [Dark and Twisted Crawl]

This type is indeed rare within the framework of magical girls. There are some foreshadowings for the emergence of conflicts. And as the attitude of the heroine's rescue of Su is not explained in words but expressed in actions (such as the airplane scene), it is obvious that the character is more three-dimensional. On the one hand, the resentment of the heroine's loss of control and causing her sister's accident is also grateful for helping herself (a bit twisted). This kind of contradiction. So when does it fall off the horse's lips [crazy] [crazy] First of all, congratulations on finishing the book. The later stage was too bland, changing from a simple harmonic motion with ups and downs of emotions to a linear function (?). The ending was too rushed, but overall it was good. (Minor spoilers below) It feels like there are still many places that have not been told, including Meimei's family; the origin of lust; Jiang's past, that is, Xia Weiwan's stories. Lan Duo asked Su to ask Jiang about those stories, but they were not told at the end. The only dissatisfied part of the whole story is the ending. After successfully chasing my wife, I went straight to the main plot leading to the ending without much progress. The twists and turns are completely a straight line. There is no foreshadowing or ups and downs like at the beginning.

The emotional description is delicate, the two heroines are very easy to talk to each other, the main plot is interesting, and the plot is clever. The two are currently in the quarrel stage. I hope they will not forgive each other and let themselves go until the point of no return.

A superb novel, the full text has an online logic and IQ, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, the characters have their own characteristics, some are exciting and some are sadistic. The chapters of Black Kite's transformation into a witch really hit my taste and resonated with my emotions. My whole body and mind was involved in the emotional transformation of Black Kite's despair and laziness after being betrayed and abandoned. The subsequent plot in the crematorium was also completely refreshing. Each rejection of Yue was not a momentary insult from a superior, but a rejection after rational and careful consideration, which made people like Jiang Cheng's lazy character even more. The subsequent reconciliation was not a sudden and brainless emotional release, but the ice of emotion slowly melted under Yue's gentle impact again and again. The heart-wrenching feeling left me with endless aftertaste. It is an indisputable five-star praise.

Jiang Cheng and Su Linyue are very addicted, and the emotional descriptions in this novel are delicate. The pace is steady and the ending is happy. From sister to wife, she was almost imprisoned without a wife. Moreover, the supporting characters have distinct personalities, and there is no such thing as a tool person. The sinister book Xia x lustful Su Qingning, Shen Zhuo is not only edible, but also simple but revealing the truth. An Lu is the ex-wife's sister and the promoter of Su Linyue and Jiang Cheng's relationship. He is gentle and kind to Jiang Cheng, and luckily he has a good home. Gentle and arrogant sister Jiang Cheng x well-behaved and sinister Su Linyue The best choice to watch the double heroine (the comments below may contain spoilers, so read with caution) And it's really cool. The early stage mainly describes Jiang Cheng's psychology and the conflict between the two of them due to Su Qingning's coma. Lao Cheng has been wondering whether he should confess. A big one exploded in the mid-game, and Kongtang ripped off Jiang Cheng's vest. The conflict between Jiang Cheng and Su Linyue breaks out, and the psychological description of Jiang Cheng's darkening is very tense. In the later period, Su Linyue understood her own feelings and had the courage to admit her mistakes and pursue them bravely. Lovers will eventually get married, and only the love given to each other can best withstand the test. There were many regrets in the past, but Jiang Cheng completed the transformation with the expectations of his friends and had his own unique love.

Nice, no surprises. The main CPs are pretty complete, but I'm a bit confused. Also, I want to see Dongxue and the ranger fall in love. I really like Dongxue's character design. I also want to see the Shen sisters. Can the author publish two more extra chapters? Urgent.

The first part is barely readable, but it starts to get a bit interesting in the middle. The later parts get better and better. The distortion and sweetness are well controlled, and then there is a slight bitterness. The sweetness after tasting the plot is even more fascinating, and the flavor is very unique.