The Outcast: Lu Jin, Do I Look Like Your Master?

All I can say is it's rare! There are too many colleagues under one person, but there are very few seekers like this. Unlike those cookie-cutter cool articles, there is no logic in the writing. There is nothing wrong with this book and it is worth reading. It became very watery at the end, which was a bit disappointing😞

There are flaws and there are also unreasonable places. But I really like the character of the protagonist😍 and he is not a nanny, nor does he overwhelm his fighting power. I hope the author can keep it up and don't change the setting day and night like some authors do.

I read 44 chapters in one go and thought it was good. I gave it a four-star rating. It doesn't have any bad points, but it does have flaws, but not many. Yes, it's worth a try. I saw that the writing of the next 60 chapters was very slow and not coherent enough. The description of Mr. Lu is very deliberate and OOC. Lu Jin has a generous and righteous character, loves her great-grandchildren, feels guilty for her friends, and has a bottom line in hating evil. However, she also has obvious flaws. She is emotional, "loves her to live, hates her to die", and sometimes shows double standards, and is easily irrational when driven by emotions.

Generally speaking, it's a bit self-explanatory, but the fanfics below Tomato's are all larger, so I can give it four stars. The first thirty or so chapters are okay, pretty standard low-to-intermediate level writing. It will be a big portion later

Compared with other fan authors, the author's level is not low. Other authors cannot even portray the most basic perspective of a practitioner, but the author of this book has unexpectedly been honest. Although there are many shortcomings, this sincerity is already commendable 🤭

The whole thing is that the protagonist traveled through time, and the omnisexual old man who raised him was crazy. When he left, he left an ordinary skill for the protagonist. Then the protagonist's system awakened and obtained the third level of the Trinity Sect's skills. It took several years to perfect the skills, and he immediately completed the three levels. I feel I needed to repair my life, so I went to find Barron, but because Barron was hard to find, I first went to Granny Jinfeng, and then to Xia Liuqing from her, and then I contacted her. Finally, I decided to have a chat at Luotian Dajiao. On the way there, I got the horse charm from the system, so I used the horse charm to stop by. After saving Chen Duo, he met Xia He again and was beaten away with a slap. He then had a fight with the old Celestial Master and then cured Mr. Tian. Later, in order to repay the favor, the protagonist asked for the Calm Mind Spell, and then chatted with Barron for a few words, and Barron gave him the Immortal Thief of Liuku. After three slaps, only Xia He was beaten up by the four Zhangs. Because Xia He ran fast, he escaped. Later, he went to Biyou Village for further study. Later, the author said that he would go to other worlds in the end. Now the protagonist can be said to have few opponents. It is just an ordinary time-travel novel.

With the mentality of a pure seeker, I do not completely rely on the system, but regard the system as a place of wealth and dharma in the monastic process. The rules of conduct are also very consistent with the philosophical thoughts of the original work, rather than being purely refreshing. The only shortcoming is that the characteristics of the exercises are somewhat different from the descriptions in the original work. It can be said that this is the most ideal fan novel about one person. I really shouldn't take the Tomato novel's score too seriously. Such a good novel only scores 6. What's the mentality of those who give it low scores?

It's okay, it's pretty good written by one person, but then it changes to a world like Demon Slayer. For a novel about the world of heavens, if the world is not selected before writing the book, it will really have a big impact. My recommendation for the author's book is that in the following world, one should choose martial arts, fairy tales, fantasy, and the like. For example, under one person, you can choose Qing Yu Nian → Snow → Zhu Xian → Legend of Sword and Fairy, or The Sun and the Moon, and finally come to a high-end big world, such as the three-in-one world of the Zhe Tian Trilogy. This increase in combat power is more reasonable, and they are all domestic.

I'll give it five stars first. The meaning of comprehensive comics is that it won't have CP, right? The quality and quantity are guaranteed, otherwise I will come back and leave a negative review. Let's end this book here. I really didn't expect it to be Demon Slayer. There are so many national comics in our country, why does it have to be Japanese comics? Forget Japanese comics, why does it have to be Demon Slayer?

Although I have only read a few books, the writing in this one is okay [sneaky laugh] In my opinion, it still looks very good, but the author has updated too little, or maybe the author is too fake, let alone not come out [sneaky laugh] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] @ The style of painting is not right