Anime Crossover: After I Let Go, the Husband-Chasing Crematorium Begins

To be honest, you are the only one in this track. At least this is the first time I have seen it, but there are still some poisonous points. It is the second personality, which is equivalent to the second personality. The front is like the second personality, and the male protagonist wakes up and directly receives all the memories. It feels weird. If you don't mind this, this book is still quite good (ps: Oteacher and Aika are CPs) The writing is pretty good, but the only bad thing I've seen so far is the second personality I mentioned earlier.

Has the author seen Blue Sea? How could the seniors of the diving club forcefully pull people in: Iori is a relative of the boss, a 50-year-old man. The seniors of the diving club thought that Iori would come to seek refuge. Iori was not used to living in the dormitory, had not adapted to independent life, was lonely and homesick, and needed the care of acquaintances. Iori needs to take care of the store's business and care for the elderly. He must live in their home, and people from the community can also take care of Iori. This is why the seniors think he joined the club. Kohei was simply tricked by Iori. The seniors thought he was a friend of Iori and agreed to join the club in advance. However, he regretted it after joining the club. The seniors did not want to lose this opportunity, so they forced Kohei to join the club. Seniors will not randomly pull people in and make them drink to make them feel depressed. This is really messed up. Otherwise, why would only two people join the club when school starts? Five-star anti-sinking

First of all, the subject matter is good, the subject matter is great, and the writing at the beginning is okay. Then I advise the author to have an outline and the character of the protagonist. If you actually stand firm, you must hold firm. Since you have written that the protagonist has already become defensive, or alienated, from the heroines, you must stand firm. Don't talk about it. Small favors are blushing again. And the diving club is not a poisonous point in my opinion, but it is a very clever design, because the diving club is very abstract in nature. If you regret chasing your husband later, there must be an end. The abstract environment of your diving club also abstracts the male protagonist, so that he has a process of transformation. This is good. You will let him not want those girls later. The diving club is also OK, and it is not that there are not good-looking girls in it. In particular, I want to see how abstract the male protagonist can become compared to the image of the diving club. And the author, I didn't see the heroine. I can't say that your writing is not good. I can only say that it is too bland. The ones I read earlier were all about Diving Club. Your writing about Diving Club is really good. I even have the urge to let you just think, forget it, how abstract and beautiful it is. It's so fun to trick each other. Let yourself go and take off the mask. It feels like this diving club is like an ice breaker. It can break the protagonist out of the ice.

The subject matter is very good, I really like this subject matter... I can give high ratings for this subject matter~ From the background explained in the first chapter, it seems that there is probably a harem in the back, so I should have succeeded in chasing my husband in the end. What I look forward to in a subject like the crematorium is for latecomers to reopen the protagonist's heart, let go of the past and move towards the future.

Okay, this is the nth time I've read a husband-chasing novel. Although I feel like this kind of novel never has a conclusion that fits the theme or it deviates from the theme in the middle of the novel. How can I put it, I feel quite uncomfortable when I think of the Shura field opening a harem in the middle of this genre, emmmmm, and there is already a trend of Shura field. The blood is flowing like a river Chapter 36 is inconsistent with a river of blood.

This is the first time I've seen a variety show about chasing a husband. The protagonist must be tough. By the way, can Megumi Sage appear earlier? [Blow kiss]

Finally a good book on the subject of comprehensive comics. I wanted to read comprehensive comics before, but there were not many good ones. Either the front was good, but the back was very poisonous, or the whole thing was poisonous. Although there were only two per day, it was enough to read, and I became more and more curious about what else there was in the back. I searched for this book for a long time, and subconsciously clicked on it. When I read the back, I felt very good, and there was no poison in it (if the back was poisonous, I would call it bullshit)

Looking at the current situation, I feel that the protagonist is a time-traveler who was transported by the time-traveler and the system into a second personality. After the task is completed, the system takes the second personality and runs away, leaving the love debt and reward to the protagonist.

That's good, but I would like to make a small suggestion, that is, whether the heroines' feelings for the protagonist come from the secondary personality or the current main personality, they need to make a clear distinction. What I currently understand is that the secondary personality establishes a bond for an obsession and a desire to survive (of course there are also feelings in it). Although they are one, they are not the same person after all. You can write something obvious to distinguish it or simply break it out and tell them that he is not completely him.

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