【Reader advisory: This book has a slow pace and may include, but is not limited to, mind control, possession, gender transformation, mutation into another species, CCB, human transmutation, graphic violence, characters becoming less than human, godlike protagonists, and everyone dying. If you don't like that, don't read it.
If you insist on reading it, that's fine too. Just please don't leave a bad review, okay? QAQ】
That night, after a long period of deep thought, Mo Qiu wondered: Was this really all he would get after huffing until he ran out of breath?
No! Absolutely not! Hajimi can't huff forever, but there will always be an age when he can huff until he's eighty!
Today, at long last, he understood: He had come to this world to put an end to all fighting!
So how could he possibly accept an ending like this?
If that's the case, then let me huff until the very end!
Huff! Huff! Huff!
Huff!!! I can feel your resolve! I can sense your ambition!
In the name of love and peace, unto Heaven and Hell, the four elements, and all things that exist!
With the power of all strength, smash through every obstacle!
Then, with my alchemy and my world-shaking wisdom, I shall blast away all the ugliness in this world!
Hmph!
Hmph! Hmph, aaaaaaaaaaaaaah!
I can feel it!
I've arrived at the right place!
At this very moment, the winds of victory are blowing at my back!
『Enlightenment』 will blow away all 『despair』!
And humanity will be transformed because of it!
Invincible Savior Exploding Fist!!!!!!
It's not bad, it's not bad. The opening is quite interesting. The cover and name of this god make people want to be angry.
For the time being, it is a good book. The characters are very detailed and there is a lot of setting. It feels like there is something missing, probably because there is no fireworks, and there is too little communication with people. But again, it is difficult to communicate due to the language barrier and the whole village being slaughtered. I hope it will develop better in the future.
However, one very important thing is that if the setting is too complex, it will easily lead to difficulties in later conception. You can refer to real-life cases.
Good idea, five stars for encouragement.
Please note that this is not a fanfic of Steel Refining
The characters are well developed.
Yes, the writing is a little immature but the creativity is ten or even nine points good. I am actually a Wei Lei inhuman protagonist, transformation, gender change and other elements, but I am willing to read this book even if it is ridiculous. I like to be able to change back as soon as possible or switch between fire demon and human.
Ah! It scares me to death. From the beginning of the transformation, the thunder started after the last two chapters. I think it's embarrassing for everyone watching. A bunch of stew + roasted pig and red wine are not as good as a banquet in the countryside. The biggest dish for a banquet in the countryside is an elbow and a meatball. Roast duck and goose in the south. For very few banquets, such as a southern wedding, a roast suckling pig is good. One or more pigs are divided among the whole audience. And the aristocratic clothes are not as good as modern work clothes.
The writing is okay, but there are too many AI parts. The author can try to polish it more by himself.
Don't use AI, the logic is too far-fetched.
The introduction is misleading, it is definitely a good book.
I'm not sure whether the author has played noita or is referring to Finnish mythology. I was really surprised to see the Alchemist's Secret Words section.
This book pleased me both in terms of its rhythm and the rigor of its alchemy. Just two words, "comfortable".
Highly recommended for everyone to take a look
A bit slow to warm up, but really nice.
Author, you were born to write otherworld novels, come on.
Update soon 😡
The writing is not bad. Is the heroine Reina? I don't hate gender reassignment. I hope the author will continue to work hard. To be honest, the alchemy shown now can actually do a lot of things. I hope the protagonist can show more shocks of modern technology.
After seeing the latest 56 chapters, I feel like I have just begun to advance the plot. There are too many words describing the alchemy theory, and there is little content about the main characters and world view. This book seriously teaches us alchemy. If we could travel to the world in the novel, we could become an alchemist!
It's not bad, it's not bad. The opening is quite interesting. The cover and name of this god make people want to be angry.
For the time being, it is a good book. The characters are very detailed and there is a lot of setting. It feels like there is something missing, probably because there is no fireworks, and there is too little communication with people. But again, it is difficult to communicate due to the language barrier and the whole village being slaughtered. I hope it will develop better in the future. However, one very important thing is that if the setting is too complex, it will easily lead to difficulties in later conception. You can refer to real-life cases.
Good idea, five stars for encouragement. Please note that this is not a fanfic of Steel Refining The characters are well developed.
Yes, the writing is a little immature but the creativity is ten or even nine points good. I am actually a Wei Lei inhuman protagonist, transformation, gender change and other elements, but I am willing to read this book even if it is ridiculous. I like to be able to change back as soon as possible or switch between fire demon and human. Ah! It scares me to death. From the beginning of the transformation, the thunder started after the last two chapters. I think it's embarrassing for everyone watching. A bunch of stew + roasted pig and red wine are not as good as a banquet in the countryside. The biggest dish for a banquet in the countryside is an elbow and a meatball. Roast duck and goose in the south. For very few banquets, such as a southern wedding, a roast suckling pig is good. One or more pigs are divided among the whole audience. And the aristocratic clothes are not as good as modern work clothes.
The writing is okay, but there are too many AI parts. The author can try to polish it more by himself. Don't use AI, the logic is too far-fetched.
The introduction is misleading, it is definitely a good book.
I'm not sure whether the author has played noita or is referring to Finnish mythology. I was really surprised to see the Alchemist's Secret Words section. This book pleased me both in terms of its rhythm and the rigor of its alchemy. Just two words, "comfortable". Highly recommended for everyone to take a look A bit slow to warm up, but really nice. Author, you were born to write otherworld novels, come on. Update soon 😡
The writing is not bad. Is the heroine Reina? I don't hate gender reassignment. I hope the author will continue to work hard. To be honest, the alchemy shown now can actually do a lot of things. I hope the protagonist can show more shocks of modern technology.
After seeing the latest 56 chapters, I feel like I have just begun to advance the plot. There are too many words describing the alchemy theory, and there is little content about the main characters and world view. This book seriously teaches us alchemy. If we could travel to the world in the novel, we could become an alchemist!
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