Pokemon: Ten Years After Ash Became Champion

The subject matter is very novel. I have basically never seen anything like this written before. You are the first one. The doctor in the middle should be resurrecting Sakaki. I don't understand why it is arranged like this. What you write is more daily. What if Sakaki is resurrected, unless you give me rainbow fire? Team Arrow's template, but actually based on what you wrote about Xiaozhi's strength in the early stage, it won't be a big problem. It just makes people feel that your writing is procrastinating. In daily life, there is no need to lengthen the plot of the entire villain and then write it in a frustrating way. To be honest, there are many places in it that make people feel uncomfortable. Finally, in fact, daily life can also be written with a lot of words. It all depends on the author's imagination, which is something that anime does not have. Also, since the Xiaozhi you write has invincible strength, you can write more liberally, which can also give readers more enthusiasm and passion in the dull plot. Come on author, I think this book has great potential

When everyone is writing about the past, it's nice that the author can find a new way to write about the future. Objectively speaking, the plot is a bit slow, but after all, it is more daily life, which is acceptable. I hope that the young author can write better and better. In fact, if you want to write a good book, you must first satisfy yourself, right?

A very good novel. The main plot is Xiaozhi's daily life. The side plot should be Amu. What kind of bond evolution do I want to do? Boy, Xiaozhi did this ten years ago [face covering] Amu in this branch line 666 is also a character. Do you imagine Chaomeng's revenge? That's still ideal [face covering] But your method of revenge doesn't look very good. A machine that drains all the potential of Pokémon, and a kid who doesn't know what to do, can you really defeat Mewtwo? [Sinister smile]

Not bad. It looks like an anime. It mainly focuses on daily life, and occasionally intersperses with some main plots and battles. It seems to be good food so far. Moreover, the author continues Xiaozhi's story based on the original one. The fan fiction is clear and the writing style and every little plot with a knowing smile are very comfortable to watch. I hope it can be updated all the time. Come on, millions of words. Except for the two villains in the early stage who are a little bit poisonous, the plot will be much better later on, so continue to look forward to it

I haven't read the back yet, but after reading everyone's comments, I thought that this novel could add a return to nature content. For example, ten years later, Xiaozhi gradually forgot his original intention, and then rediscovered his original intention due to a certain incident, retaining the maturity after ten years, regaining his original intention ten years ago, and becoming a truly well-deserved Pokémon master recognized by everyone and Pokémon. Isn't this a great direction?

Strong, strong, and good-looking. This book really has something to say, but I want to give a warning to those who want to read this book. This book does not focus on the battle aspect. It mainly focuses on the daily interactions and the interactions of the heroines of various eras. So if you want to read the wooden version of Xiaozhi and the battle aspect, please read it as a precaution.

It's okay, I hope it won't stop updating, and if I write better in the future, it will become a five-star

Come on, it's so pretty, I just like watching Xiaozhi's [blowing kiss]

Of course my book deserves five stars, brothers, light up the stars!

First of all, the mature version of Ash Ketchum and the daily text are unexpectedly to my liking. It is probably because the author's writing style and the routine of not swearing anytime and anywhere make me feel surprisingly comfortable. It may also be because this is the reason for the original Ash Ketchum, but in the final analysis, the author's method still accounts for a larger part of the reason. I like this novel very much, please go to the author.