Pokemon: Ten Years After Ash Became Champion

The theme is very novel; I've basically never seen anything like it before. You're the first to write something like this. The professor in the middle seems to be trying to revive Giovanni, but I don't understand why you arranged it that way. Your writing is primarily slice-of-life; even if Giovanni is revived, what difference does it make?

While everyone else is writing about the past, the author has taken a different approach by writing about the future, which is quite commendable. Objectively speaking, the plot is a little slow, but given its slice-of-life focus, it's acceptable. I hope the young author continues to improve; after all, to write a good book, you first have to be satisfied with your own work, right?

This is a very good novel. The main storyline is Ash's daily life, while the side story is about that guy, Amuk. I was wondering what he was trying to do with Bond Phenomenon? Kid, Ash already did that ten years ago! 🤦 Amuk, from the 666 side story, is also a character. Imagine Mewtwo getting revenge? That's a pipe dream! 🤦 But your method of revenge doesn't look very promising.

It's great, it has an anime feel to it, mainly focusing on slice-of-life scenes with occasional main plot and battles. So far, it seems to be top-notch content, and the author is continuing Ash's story based on the original work. It's a breath of fresh air in the world of fanfiction. The writing style and the little moments that bring a smile to your face are very enjoyable to read.

I haven't read the rest of the story yet, but after reading everyone's comments, I think it would be great to add a back-to-basics element to this novel. For example, ten years later, Ash might gradually forget his original aspirations, but then, due to some event, he rediscovers them, retaining the maturity of ten years later while finding his original aspirations from ten years ago, ultimately…

Wow, this is really good! This book is truly insightful, but I want to warn anyone considering reading it: it doesn't focus on battles. It primarily focuses on daily interactions and the relationships between the female protagonists from different eras. So, if you're looking for a wooden version of Ash Ketchum or anything like that, please proceed with caution.

It's alright. I hope there won't be any hiatus in updates. If the later chapters are even better, it will become a five-star rating.

Keep it up, it's so cool! I love watching Ash! 😘

My own book deserves five stars, brothers! Let's give it a star!

First of all, the mature portrayal of Ash and the slice-of-life style of the text surprisingly suited my taste. I guess it's because the author's writing style and the avoidance of excessive profanity made it surprisingly comfortable to read. It could also be because it's based on the original Ash, but ultimately, the author's technique played a larger role. I really enjoy this novel, and I wish the author continued success.