Marriage, training, reincarnation in all worlds, mindless fun,
Lin Xi, a social animal, died suddenly and was reincarnated. She was abducted by Mo Chen, a gangster in the tribulation period, and turned into an 8-year-old beggar through "immortal fate". Before she could enjoy her dream of cultivating an immortal, she was fed "skittles" and turned into Lingxi, a girl with twin tails! The bound fox-eared sister system stated that you can upgrade by absorbing emotional energy, and Mo Chen is a walking "troublemaker" - from lying about "pure yang spirits need to be harmonized by yin energy" and feeding him sex-transfer pills, to being forced to practice "Jade Girl Heart Sutra" with "daily massage and counseling from the master", to spreading rumors to make disciples jealous, the operations of this sinister master always make Lingxi furious and ashamed.
"These pills look like rainbow candy... Why is my voice so shrill later?!" "Old perverts will deduct money!" Lingxi's complaining attribute is in full swing, but he absorbs anger, jealousy, and shock value in the resistance and upgrades like crazy: the outer disciple who slaps and mocks in the face unlocks the "Emotional Shield", uses the "Fascinating Eyes" to control the trial meeting, and even steps on high heels to angrily stomp on the provocateur at the Immortal Gate Fellowship! And every time something happens, Mo Chen can always turn into a licking dog in an instant - take drugs himself after being bitten by a poisonous snake, give him an immortal weapon as a bath towel, give him his destiny's sword and spike when he falls into a cold pool, and write "becoming a Taoist companion" written on his face.
When the emotional value exploded to unlock the memory flashback, Lingxi was shocked: "This guy was my senior brother back then?!" It turned out that all the entanglements had been foreshadowed. With enough energy in the system, Mo Chen, who was sleeping next to him, was kicked to the bottom of the bed! "The system prompts: "New world coordinates detected, prepare for reincarnation - next game." Are you the attacker?" The tug-of-war between the sinister master and the Tucao apprentice has just begun!
Even though it's a cool article, you still have to write it in a reasonable way. Why is the protagonist's cultivation always so random? Sometimes it's high and sometimes it's low. Can you stop using so many adjectives and modifications? For other people, 3/5 to 4/5 of what they got in a picture must be the actual plot content. Good guy, more than half of this one is various modifiers.
Even though it's a cool article, you still have to write it in a reasonable way. Why is the protagonist's cultivation always so random? Sometimes it's high and sometimes it's low. Can you stop using so many adjectives and modifications? For other people, 3/5 to 4/5 of what they got in a picture must be the actual plot content. Good guy, more than half of this one is various modifiers.
Come on, author! Very nice *▽*