Unrivaled Daoist Arts: Cultivating Immortality as a Top-Tier Heir

The writing is very good. Although it is a genius flow, it is not awkward at all. Keep up the good work (by the way, be careful and try not to have a female protagonist. I am afraid that the protagonist will be OOC)

Not bad, not bad. It's my favorite type of genius. The plot is compact and refreshing. It's one of the few books that makes me want to read more. Please keep updating the author. Also, I hope it won't have cp. I always feel that having a female protagonist will be weird.

It's okay. I feel like it's a relatively rare type. The protagonist doesn't do much, and basically practices on his own, such as formations, swordsmanship, and daily practice. However, there are also more typical ones. The protagonist's friend almost became another villain similar to the protagonist of Destiny, and the same goes for that person's sister. It's too typical, but it has nothing to do with the protagonist. The protagonist should be the strongest among his batch now. It's okay. The main reason is that the protagonist doesn't like to be famous, so his cultivation is not exposed.

I think it's pretty good. Many things can be written more clearly, such as the specific operation of formations, and other aspects are very good. However, I think there is a big pacing problem. I don't think the sacred land has been arranged well, but it is still very beautiful and very good (I was halfway through it and then quit the background due to something. When I came back, there was no record of this book. I searched for half an hour. I couldn't remember the name of the protagonist. I searched for Luoshu and Wu Dingshan Lingshi, but I couldn't find it. I found it later through the AI, hahaha, it is really good) and the author will update soon.

Overall it's good. Grasp the big ones and let go the small ones. The overall direction of the story is smooth. The protagonist comes from a wealthy family and Goldfinger has the information. There is currently no ambiguous or particularly slap-in-the-face plot. But it does have some minor flaws, which are fine for my own viewing experience. Some of them will be explained later, so it won't affect the viewing experience. So the overall feeling is good. The protagonist is a relatively confident and cold type, and he also has the help of his family. The story also has foreshadowing. I hope the author will work hard and update QUQ

The plot is written without nonsense, and the characters are not stereotyped. The plot is also very good. I am looking forward to the map transition from the six major sects of Beiming Continent to several other continents. So far, the writing is quite good. It is a masterpiece of genius.

Well enough. But it feels like it's not very good to have the protagonist belatedly arrive many times. There is a feeling that the grasp of things is unstable. I hope that the rhythm of the plot can be better later.

Well written, a unique way of cultivating immortality, come on

This book is very innovative. It belongs to the genius family genre. 99 Of the 100 books on cultivating immortals are from the grassroots genre, the small family genre. I read the 8th novel and found it quite novel. At least it's not the same story. It's quite interesting. I read books on Tomato, and they are all cool novels written by novices with a score of 9 or above. The bad thing is that they don't abuse the protagonist but are like Long Aotian. Only 7/8 can be seen to read good ones. The style is similar to the starting point, and it won't be so exciting.

It looks good, I like the character of the protagonist