The System Thinks I'm Too Pathetic, So It Activates Itself!

The writing is very good, I have read all the chapters. Personally, I think it's very good. I've been a bookworm for decades. At present, I feel like I have the system. But it won't be too exaggerated and modern like others. If you don't know how to read it, it will feel fake and easy for people to read. Will be nervous and happy.

Overall it's very good and the writing is excellent. There are few plot elements, and treatment and hospitals cannot take up full space. People are flexible and three-dimensional, and mechanized shaping will make novels boring. So I want to add more good content outside of surgeries and hospitals. For example, it would be better if the interaction of family, friendship and love add color to make the plot full and rich.

I've watched it, and there are no major flaws, but quite a few minor flaws. The overall flow is smooth, and although it's a bit choppy, it's still acceptable. Just for the sake of the plot, there are a lot of unnecessary scenes that keep coming. Also, the police always go out with two people. The hero is forced to save the beauty, and the cleverness of the policewoman in the follow-up is also frowned upon. Although I don't dislike female characters, I think such coincidences are unnecessary. Girls can also be strong and brave. In fact, there is no need to have a very deliberate life-saving grace. Keep working hard.

Strictly speaking, this is already the top work in the web series. Because today's online writings are basically just compositions written by primary school students, and many are even kindergarten graffiti. If they can reach the level of compositions written by junior high school students, they are already relatively good online writings. This novel is at least a senior high school student's composition. If it can be revised carefully in the early stage and not be concerned about word count in the later stage, it may be a junior thesis for college students.

Psychological treatment is described in detail! The plot is compact

The writing is good and the descriptions are realistic and detailed.

When I first read this book, I felt it was not simple just after reading the first few chapters. The description of world affairs and people's hearts is indescribably wonderful, the author is a master.

It's quite fascinating and can be read in one sitting.

Ordinary life is written with style. There are also famous quotes that have been weathered. Reading the novel is actually very beneficial. Thank you to the author for his painstaking efforts.

It's like a personal writing, worth collecting and reading carefully