【Level-Up Progression】【Stat-Boosting Panel】【Thread-Based Martial Arts】
After transmigrating to a martial world where everyone forges astral fate weapons, Shen Yi awakens an A-rank fate weapon made of threads: 【Origin · End · Fate-Playing Thread】.
People say threads are only good for sewing clothes or putting on puppet shows?
Shen Yi just smiles, binds himself to the Heavenly Mandate System, and earns Heavenly Mandate Points by activating skills.
Talent 【Mastery Through Practice】: The more you learn and the higher your level, the greater your comprehension.
Talent 【Good Health】: Automatically expels harmful substances that affect your health.
Shen Yi takes the path of martial arts to attain the Dao. In one semester, he drains his teachers of everything they know and masters the eighteen kinds of weapons.
He keeps adding points, evolving until he is invincible. He proves the Dao through martial arts, creates 【Thread-Pulling Puppet Play】, and reaches the summit!
What's more, his Fate-Playing Threads can be upgraded with points, and can even seize other people's fate weapons for his own use. He evolves from A-rank all the way to SSS-rank, playing with fate throughout the ages!
He fights his way across Blue Star, ventures into the stars, joins the Interstellar Peace Corporation, and takes command of an entire star sector!
Time, space, fate: anywhere there is a thread, Shen Yi can change things with a flick of his fingers!
I am the Fate-Playing Master!
From then on, the legend of Shen Yi manipulating threads and fate, ruling over the past, present, and future, echoes through the stars for all eternity!
A prodigy from beyond the stars: I don't even know what happened! Shen Yi just looked at me, and he evolved my martial arts to their peak!
An alien supreme being: I pledge my loyalty to Master Shen Yi! My loyalty!
Also known as 《You're Just Playing with Threads, So How Can You Be This Cool?》, 《I Created Thread-Based Martial Arts! Playing with Fate Throughout the Ages!》, 《My Former Self Had a Yandere Empress for a Girlfriend? Now She's Mine!》, and 《What? He Became a Supreme Being Right After Graduating University!》
Five stars for encouragement. The novel is good-looking, you can see the protagonist improving step by step, and the character design is also very good. . There are a few things that I find a bit uninteresting. (It's not that it's bad [thinking]) 1. Pressing the realm and slow pace. This speed of increasing vitality and blood is even surpassed by other novels. Although it is obvious that Qi and blood are not equal to combat power, it is still too slow. Especially when a young girl of the same age suddenly gained level 6 combat power, I was completely overwhelmed. 2. The scene where the protagonist uses string to kill people on the day of his awakening was originally thought to be centered around the development and application of the "string fruit". As a result, we are laying the foundation for the follow-up, Weapon Master + Sixth Naval Style. It's not that the foundation is not good, but Doflamingo is more handsome, isn't he? ! 3. It lacks exciting moments and big scenes. It can be seen that the protagonist is very good, but the girl is on fire. [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] Come on💪I will continue to pay attention. .
The male protagonist's outlook on life is very good. And he's not the kind of person who can't walk away when he sees a beautiful woman. Very talkative. It's light-hearted and fun, but not particularly naughty. Or how to put it? I don't know, but he's very old anyway. Although the plot still needs it. Modify it. Give him a little more tension, mostly. My thoughts. I didn't say the plot was bad, that's all. The plot is still there? Forget it, this book is very, very good anyway. Neither does the male protagonist in the early stage. Like that. It's like licking a pretty girl when you see her. Getting along with Bai Lingyan was very relaxed and pleasant.
Tomato 🍅 It's a very good book. I suggest you introduce the background setting more clearly. I also hope that the people around the protagonist can give them a happy ending if they can. Please [Love]
After reading the latest chapter, I feel that the content is quite good. I can continue to read it. The setting and abilities of the protagonist are quite good. [Like] The author needs to work harder. It will disappear after a while. Put it in a small dark room and update more than ten or twenty chapters a day. [Working on the draft]
Let me write my first book review~
I will try my best to write a complete story. Everyone is welcome to comment. I may not all reply, but you will definitely see [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]
The score is low. There is no obvious evil point at the moment. At most, there are a little cliché plots (for example, there is an orphanage and Qingmei is a rebirth), but not much.
The rhythm is good, and I personally don't think there's anything bad about it.
It looks good, the front is a bit tacky, but the back is quite nice.
The overall plot is pretty good, but there are some minor issues that the author didn't do much proofreading, and the ending was rushed. I suggest you proofread it next time you write it before uploading it.
To be honest, I feel good
Although I wanted to give up the book a few times along the way
But actually the writing behind it is quite good.
Come on
Five stars for encouragement. The novel is good-looking, you can see the protagonist improving step by step, and the character design is also very good. . There are a few things that I find a bit uninteresting. (It's not that it's bad [thinking]) 1. Pressing the realm and slow pace. This speed of increasing vitality and blood is even surpassed by other novels. Although it is obvious that Qi and blood are not equal to combat power, it is still too slow. Especially when a young girl of the same age suddenly gained level 6 combat power, I was completely overwhelmed. 2. The scene where the protagonist uses string to kill people on the day of his awakening was originally thought to be centered around the development and application of the "string fruit". As a result, we are laying the foundation for the follow-up, Weapon Master + Sixth Naval Style. It's not that the foundation is not good, but Doflamingo is more handsome, isn't he? ! 3. It lacks exciting moments and big scenes. It can be seen that the protagonist is very good, but the girl is on fire. [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] Come on💪I will continue to pay attention. .
The male protagonist's outlook on life is very good. And he's not the kind of person who can't walk away when he sees a beautiful woman. Very talkative. It's light-hearted and fun, but not particularly naughty. Or how to put it? I don't know, but he's very old anyway. Although the plot still needs it. Modify it. Give him a little more tension, mostly. My thoughts. I didn't say the plot was bad, that's all. The plot is still there? Forget it, this book is very, very good anyway. Neither does the male protagonist in the early stage. Like that. It's like licking a pretty girl when you see her. Getting along with Bai Lingyan was very relaxed and pleasant.
Tomato 🍅 It's a very good book. I suggest you introduce the background setting more clearly. I also hope that the people around the protagonist can give them a happy ending if they can. Please [Love]
After reading the latest chapter, I feel that the content is quite good. I can continue to read it. The setting and abilities of the protagonist are quite good. [Like] The author needs to work harder. It will disappear after a while. Put it in a small dark room and update more than ten or twenty chapters a day. [Working on the draft]
Let me write my first book review~ I will try my best to write a complete story. Everyone is welcome to comment. I may not all reply, but you will definitely see [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]
The score is low. There is no obvious evil point at the moment. At most, there are a little cliché plots (for example, there is an orphanage and Qingmei is a rebirth), but not much.
The rhythm is good, and I personally don't think there's anything bad about it.
It looks good, the front is a bit tacky, but the back is quite nice.
The overall plot is pretty good, but there are some minor issues that the author didn't do much proofreading, and the ending was rushed. I suggest you proofread it next time you write it before uploading it.
To be honest, I feel good Although I wanted to give up the book a few times along the way But actually the writing behind it is quite good. Come on