[Level-Up Progression] [Stat-Boosting Panel] [Thread-Based Martial Arts]
After transmigrating to a martial world where everyone forges astral fate weapons, Shen Yi awakens an A-rank fate weapon made of threads: [Origin · End · Fate-Playing Thread].
People say threads are only good for sewing clothes or putting on puppet shows?
Shen Yi just smiles, binds himself to the Heavenly Mandate System, and earns Heavenly Mandate Points by activating skills.
Talent [Mastery Through Practice]: The more you learn and the higher your level, the greater your comprehension.
Talent [Good Health]: Automatically expels harmful substances that affect your health.
Shen Yi takes the path of martial arts to attain the Dao. In one semester, he drains his teachers of everything they know and masters the eighteen kinds of weapons.
He keeps adding points, evolving until he is invincible. He proves the Dao through martial arts, creates [Thread-Pulling Puppet Play], and reaches the summit!
What's more, his Fate-Playing Threads can be upgraded with points, and can even seize other people's fate weapons for his own use. He evolves from A-rank all the way to SSS-rank, playing with fate throughout the ages!
He fights his way across Blue Star, ventures into the stars, joins the Interstellar Peace Corporation, and takes command of an entire star sector!
Time, space, fate: anywhere there is a thread, Shen Yi can change things with a flick of his fingers!
I am the Fate-Playing Master!
From then on, the legend of Shen Yi manipulating threads and fate, ruling over the past, present, and future, echoes through the stars for all eternity!
A prodigy from beyond the stars: I don't even know what happened! Shen Yi just looked at me, and he evolved my martial arts to their peak!
An alien supreme being: I pledge my loyalty to Master Shen Yi! My loyalty!
Also known as "You're Just Playing with Threads, So How Can You Be This Cool?", "I Created Thread-Based Martial Arts! Playing with Fate Throughout the Ages!", "My Former Self Had a Yandere Empress for a Girlfriend? Now She's Mine!", and "What? He Became a Supreme Being Right After Graduating University!"
Five stars for encouragement. The novel is enjoyable; you can see the protagonist improving step by step, and the character design is excellent. However, there are a few things I felt were lacking. (Not that it's bad, haha 🤔) 1. The pacing is slow due to the suppressed power levels.
The male protagonist has excellent values. He's not the type to be unable to walk past beautiful women. He speaks very casually and pleasantly, without being overly mischievous. Or how should I put it? I don't know, but he's very mature. Although the plot needs some revision to make it more compelling, mainly, in my opinion. I'm not saying the plot is bad, it's just that... The plot...
Tomato🍅 is an excellent book, right? I suggest you explain the background setting more clearly, and I also hope that the people around the protagonist can have a happy ending if possible. Please!🥰
I've seen the latest chapter, and the content seems pretty good. I'll continue reading. The protagonist's character and abilities are quite good. 👍 Author, keep up the good work! It'll be over in a bit; I'll put it in the "blacklist" (for now) and update ten or twenty chapters a day. [Currently rushing to finish]
I'm writing the first book review! I'm trying my best to write a complete story. Comments are welcome; I may not reply to everyone, but I'll definitely see them. 💕💕💕
The rating is low. There aren't any major flaws so far; at most, there are a few clichéd plot points (like a childhood sweetheart from an orphanage who is also reincarnated), but not many.
The pacing is good, and personally I don't think there are any major flaws.
It's good. The beginning was a bit toxic, but the later parts are quite good.
The overall plot was pretty good, but the author didn't proofread it much, so there were some minor issues, and the ending felt rushed. I suggest proofreading it before uploading next time.
To be honest, I think it's good. Although I wanted to give up on the book a few times along the way. But actually, the later parts are quite well written. Come on