Paradise: The Immortal Girl's Infinite Journey

Not bad, at least it's readable. Seeing the part where the character just finished the trial and enters the space to meet the black-haired older sister gave me a slightly unsettling feeling of yuri (lesbian) undertones. (Stacked Armor) I'm not against yuri (lesbian romance) stories, it's just that, like some crossover anime stories have a strong otaku vibe, urban stories are extremely cheesy, and…

"A school idol who dropped out of school due to debt died young and ended up in a virtual paradise. Having just become a magical girl and before she could even reveal her true form, she's about to be forced into an endless life of studying." Remember that, it's another title for this book 🤭

Well, the subject matter is good, and the setting is great, but the excessive detail in other descriptions slows down the plot. There are too many daily life elements and trivial matters, preventing the main theme from being showcased. I hope the author will establish the amusement park element as the main focus and reduce interference from other elements. 5 stars for encouragement.

Having read up to chapter 104, the protagonist hasn't used the undead ability [petrification] much. So what's the point of this ability? It's an extremely rare, cost-free, and growth-oriented skill.

Team-based strategy? Or will you quit after the first world ends? It seems the resurrection strategy is more suitable for solo play, since teams need to consider overall benefits and the survival probability of team members; it's impossible for the entire team to gamble with you in an extremely low-probability situation.

How many words are you planning to write in this book? I personally prefer magical girl stories.

A true, objective, and multi-dimensional description with a clear structure and rich content.

A decent infinite flow

It's beautiful, I love watching it, and I can't get enough of it.

It looks alright so far.