
NARUMI
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi & Apocalypse
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 4mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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There Are No More Masterpieces in the Mechanical Flow and Science Fiction Series!
Flesh and flesh are weak, and mechanical ascension is not a slogan, but a real machine should not have emotions! Most of all the mechanical science fiction novels at this stage are about people being reincarnated, or accidentally becoming someone, and then they talk about personal drama and relationships for a long time.
Mechawen, the Insider Whose Mecha He Built Was Exposed
We need to plant large-scale mechas inside, not exoskeleton armors
Are There Any Books on Heavy Industry and High Technology Content? Don't Push the White Articles.
Don't criticize those who write about campus pretentiousness in the name of technology. Don't recommend it if there is no horizontal comparison of technological parameters (even if there are system data that are inconsistent with reality, as long as it conforms to the logic of the novel)
Mecha, Mechanic, Starship, Star Field
Looking for Mechas, Biological Mechas, and Ancient Martial Arts!
Similar to Mecha Galaxy, Mecha has self-awareness! The protagonist's genetically evolved ancient weapons can be used on mechas! Can mechas be carried around? The main fighting method is cold weapons! No machine guns or missiles!
The Male Protagonist Is a Top-Notch Mecha but Has Problems and Has Been Left in the Dust, While the Female Protagonist Passively Pilots the Man
Mechanical Armor, Large War Weapons
Mecha, mechanic, gunner, you name it, please mess with me! ! ! ! ! !
Looking for Mecha Text, Giant Mecha
I feel that except for Great Wall Watch, I haven't found any mecha stories on Tomato that can directly touch the soul. At least some mechas like Huantai or Hammer Knight mecha or God's Machine. It would be better if there are ones that beat up aliens.
I Want Serious Mecha Writing, Not Some Modern Bullshit, and a Grand Background.
Mecha, the Ultimate Fight, an Eternal Legend Forged with Blood
I would like to read a book similar to "Mech War: Full Metal Storm".
Hard Science Fiction, the Kind with Strict Scientific Logic! Harder Than Trisolaris!
I want to read a book similar to "Quantum Fossils". Science fiction, not fantasy! Reality!
There Are No More Masterpieces of Science Fiction Mechas. If You Are Not Convinced, Come and Argue.
I want to read a book similar to "Apocalyptic Mecha: Choosing the Wrong Power Bank at the Start". Don't travel through Pacific Rim or anything like that, the protagonist's IQ is online
AI Mecha + Competition + Driving + Throne + Psionic Power + Mechanic!
I want to read a book similar to "The Age of Machine Girls: My Machine Girls Are All World Class (Codename: Xinhuo)".
Mecha
Attractive mecha text
The Mecha Text Is a Bit Empty, Can Anyone Recommend Some More?
Mecha, Pacific Rim, TTF, Many Words, Completed, Updated Quickly
Looking for a Machine? the Mecha Is Preferably a Small Mecha or an Exoskeleton.
Come On, Help Me. the Mecha Is Useless.
There Are No Novels Like Gundam, Please! ! !
I just want a Gundam class one! !
Mecha, Gundam, Don't Read Slow-Burning Books
Machine Combat Type, Passionate
I want to read a book like "Machine War: Starting from Saving the Commonwealth Princess".










































































It feels like watching Gundam. The introduction of the book reminds me of what Harry Blade said when he saw the wreckage of Corsi. Although Gundams of all generations are affiliated with the Federation, the people who pilot them are all free and rebellious. This book is one of the rare real-life mecha novels in Tomato, rather than a fantasy novel about mecha skin upgrades. Since I prefer UC Gundam, World Federation Vision Titans, the protagonist's force is Mafuti, and Kanger is from Anaheim. The protagonist's personality change is also handled well. In the early stage, he was like a 79 mule who had to fight, and after the transformation, he became Kira, who only knows how to cut people with sticks. However, I still want the protagonist to become a young man who is full of energy and courageous to resist like Camus.
It has the feel of Japanese mecha novels from 20 years ago, with real humans and machines. Most of the mainstream mecha novels in China are essentially novels about cultivating immortals in mecha skin. It doesn't matter if you have mecha or not.
The author may be writing a million-word novel, so the male protagonist's growth is also written as a plot line, but the fast-paced mode of Tomato is not suitable for an innocent, weak and childish male protagonist like Shinji Ikari (I don't know if I was weak when I was 17 years old) , but it is definitely more mature than the male protagonist, and the male protagonist under those conditions should not be like this). Very few people can read EVA's novel on Tomato. This may be the fundamental reason that prevents most people from reading it. This book may be more suitable for Qidian than Tomato.
It has a strong Gundam flavor. In the latest few actual combat articles, I always felt that Ang Lee would say "Gundam goes out". Speaking of which, I specifically searched for the Japanese pronunciation of Restricted Annihilation Doctrine. It was so interesting.
The pace of growth of the protagonist is a bit out of control. Other than that, this is a novel with a novel setting, good writing, connotation and a certain depth. I should pay to see this work
The plot tends to be EVA, and there is always a sense of vision of watching Gundam, but this is understandable for later books. The plot is compact, the characterization is relatively successful, and the world view is gradually improving with the release of new chapters. Looking forward to the follow-up [asking for more explosive updates][asking for more explosive updates]
The mecha style is very good, the writing is good, the plot is intense but also has a certain warmth. Although it is a new book, it is definitely the best mecha among the many books I have read. Of course, leaving aside the author's painting and mecha design [Adoration] [Smile]
I don't usually comment on books, but this one really touched my heart. I hope the author won't make it worse [laughs]. At the beginning, it could be seen that the author wanted to write a story similar to Shinji's growth, but I felt that the pace was a bit too fast, and the changes in some places were a bit abrupt. From the end, it was pretty good.
Excellent product, most of the software on Tomato are brainless and invincible. Or just multiple girls. This one is quite innovative. Worth five stars.
According to my personal opinion, at present, at least among similar articles on Tomato, it is acceptable. I look forward to the follow-up. Also, what I said is actually more conservative.
After reading it for a long time, I thought it was quite interesting. I just hope that the author will not stop updating it or make it unfinished, and just keep updating it. [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]
The description is very detailed~(^з^)-☆Very good(´∀`) It would be better if the characters were more three-dimensional and fleshy (^_−)☆
It really gives me the real feeling of watching Gundam. The writing is really good. The author could do more, but it's not enough.
The author's description is calm and objective. He describes the protagonist from a bystander's perspective. It fits well with the war elements in the background of the story. It is very interesting to read.
Not bad, the setting is interesting
Ready for publication, this logical coherence
I'll give it four stars first, I haven't seen much yet But in terms of the author's writing and story content, it's a relatively good novel.
A very interesting mecha novel
It's a very interesting mecha war text, with familiar classic elements, but the author has his own ideas and corresponding world view settings. I look forward to the follow-up.
Awesome, one of the best domestic mecha texts
It's pretty good, it really feels like watching animation.
Good-looking, rigorous, complete description of the world frame
It's quite touching and in-depth, not a mindless mecha novel.
So awesome and good-looking, holy shit
Delicate writing and worth reading Without reading the content, I will give the author a favorable review just based on the cover.
Very potential
Not bad, it tastes like Gouda
Cool, nice mecha text
Beautiful and well written
Really deserves high marks