Dragon Raja: Oath of the Black Swan

I think it could have two female leads, Iori and Zero, and it could be one of the few Louise/Iori fanfics ever made ❤️

Author, please write a story with two female leads! As it stands, the secretary seems quite suitable for Xiao Lu. He actually needs someone like the secretary to love him and make his life less miserable. 😢

Looking at the current plot development, Lu Mingfei's romantic storyline mainly focuses on Zero and Isabel, which is quite novel. There are very few fanfics featuring a romance between Lu Mingfei and Isabel; this is the first one I've read. However, since this is a single-female-lead story, Zero is definitely the main heroine. Isabel could have a side story, or if the author wants, they could try writing a Lu-Isabel fanfic in the future. [Top Post]

It's well-written, but I think it's best to avoid writing stories with two female leads.

The psychological descriptions I've read from the first chapter to now are quite detailed, which is decent for a Dragon Raja fanfiction by Tomato. However, there's a minor flaw: why does Lu Mingfei always seem to speak with ellipses, giving off an air of insecurity, as if he can't stand up straight in front of Zero or Isabel? Otherwise, there aren't any major shortcomings.

I knew it would end in zero, but it kept slipping away, and the bittersweet writing style was very similar to Jiangnan's; the long narrative was quite moving. The author is already a master of slipping away, making for a bittersweet reading experience. I recommend reading it in one go, as the author updates infrequently and slowly. It's very similar to Jiangnan! 👍 Not just in the writing style, but also in the plot handling; it's very similar to Jiangnan.

It's very well written, with exquisite prose that perfectly captures Lu Mingfei's "loser" personality—cowardly and incompetent yet yearning for warmth. This aligns with the original novel's portrayal of the "loser," making me strongly suspect it's written by Jiang Nan (a pseudonym for Lu Mingfei).

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful Isn't Lu Mingfei portrayed as too cowardly? He wasn't this cowardly after returning from Japan.

I couldn't stop laughing while reading it late at night. My mom even got up to ask me what I was laughing at. It's definitely in the top three of all the fanfiction I've ever read. It's so good!

Compared to other Dragon Raja fanfiction, this one almost entirely uses the original setting, with everything else being original. The plot is also vastly different from Dragon Raja 4 and 5, and the characters' personalities differ significantly from the original work. It's readable as a new book, and as a Dragon Raja fanfiction, it's alright.