Dragon Raja: Oath of the Black Swan

I think we can have two female protagonists, Yi and Zero, and we can make one of the few Lu Yiwen [Love] films.

The author should probably write a double heroine. From the current point of view, Miss Secretary is still very suitable for Xiaolu. Xiaolu actually needs someone like Miss Secretary to love him and make him less miserable [crying]

After looking at the current plot development, Lu Mingfei's love story mainly focuses on Zero and Isabel, which is quite new. There are very few love scenes between Xiao Luzi and Isabel in the fanfiction. This is the first one I read. However, this book is a single female protagonist after all, and the main palace can only be Zero. Secretary Yi can write a side story or the author can try to write a Lu Yiwen in the future if he wants [top post]

It's well written, but I think it's better not to write about two female protagonists.

From the first chapter to the present, the psychological descriptions are quite delicate, which is considered acceptable among Tomato's Dragon Clan fandom, but there is one small flaw. Why does Lu Mingfei always sound timid when speaking with ellipses, as if he can't straighten up in front of Zero or Isabel? There are no other shortcomings.

I know it must be zero in the end, but it has always been slightly zero. The sweet and sour writing style in the middle is very similar to Jiangnan, and it feels very good to write a long narrative. The author is already slightly experienced, and it was both sad and secretly satisfying to read. It is recommended to read Yang Yang's book in one sitting, after all, the author's updates are few and slow. It's very similar to Jiangnan [Like] Not only the writing style, but also the plot processing, it's very similar to Jiangnan

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking Was Lu Mingfei written too cowardly? Wasn't Lu Mingfei not so cowardly after returning from Japan?

Compared with other Dragon Clan fanfics, this one almost only uses the setting, and the rest are all private settings. The plot is also very different from the fourth and fifth novels, and the characters are also very different from the original works. It can be read as a new book, and it is okay as a Dragon Clan fanfic.

It looks good, but can I add a zero on the label?

The writing is very good, and the writing style is very delicate. It reveals Lu Mingfei's "bad boy" character at all times. He is cowardly and incompetent but full of desire for warmth. It fits the image of the bad boy in the original work. I seriously suspect that he is a Jiangnan trumpet.