Anime Crossover: A Journey to Another World with a Star Rail Template

It's nice to watch, but the main character seems to be tempted. If you like a non-heroine, you should think about it.

So far, there are no poisonous points, and the world view is good. It's just that the number of chapters is a bit too small, so I can't tell much yet. Just past the first copy, things were just starting to unfold. Don't do it, Demon Slayer looks full of special effects, but the actual force value is not high. The original author has stated that fire, water, lightning, etc. Are all fake special effects. Regarding Goldfinger, I don't know if the author has any foreshadowing. But I don't really like overly active Goldfinger, it's better to be a 'dead thing' without self-awareness. Because I don't really like things that are beyond my control, especially something I rely on like Goldfinger. Secondly, I started reading novels in 12 or 13 years. I have read a lot of books like Golden Finger Backstabbing, which made me feel a little bit psychological.

First couplet: Honkai Impact II can't save the world, and can't stop the protagonist group from dying. Zhonglian: Genshen cannot save everyone and cannot prevent others from dying. Neck Link: Honkai Impact III can't save Himeko, and can't help Kiana Mei Second line: In Ompharos, you can't save the Golden One, you can only kill your companions one after another. Hengpi: Captain, travelers, pioneers, we, can't do anything, oh no, you finally have some growth in Ompharos, after all - they were killed by you yourself! ! !

Chapter 24, not bad, both single women and harems are acceptable, but don't fall in love with someone you meet. Chapter 76, the Demon Slayer chapter doesn't have my highlights.

The novel is good, with sufficient settings and relatively detailed psychological descriptions of the characters. However, the ratio between the plot and the psychological portrayal of the characters needs to be slightly adjusted. It is best to consider the use of language again. Beautiful enough language will look good anywhere. A little improvement in writing style will make the novel look and feel much better. In addition, the author may also use some AI for assistance. It is best not to use the AI's own language, because the AI's expressions will lack a lot of emotional sincerity. But you generally don't make much money writing novels on Tomato. Writing in the way you like is the most important. Finally, I hope you can be happy every day!

Demon Slayer... Your previous content saved you and blocked the negative comments I was about to spout.

I think it's okay. I hope it will get a rating close to that of Playing Robin. The shortcoming is that there are a little few updates and few chapters. It doesn't look good from the front, but it looks better as you go to the back.

I read Chapter 5, poisoned for the second time, and talked about the problems that have been exposed so far. The talent is beyond the standard, and there is no need to give templates. Fortunately, the person who is not dead is a Rakshasa, who is easy to be stabbed in the back. As we all know, even ordinary people in Star Iron are supermen in real life. No matter how bad Rakshasa is, he is still a high-level fertility walker. What will happen next There are several possibilities: not to suppress the combat power, to directly sweep invincibly, or to go to a powerful world and be beaten to the side of the road. The combat power to be suppressed is 50-50 equal to that of the lower world. I read the review of the book to suppress the combat power. I may not be able to beat Shiangshen in Demon Slayer. In summary, it is too big to suppress the combat power. I won't read the rest. If you can read it, you can go in.

The second world is not very good, mainly because I am tired of seeing worlds like Demon Slayer and Naruto, so let's try another different world. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] Deducting one star for Demon Slayer is really because I'm tired of watching it. I will change it back after I finish writing it. Of course, if the next world is a world that has been written badly like Naruto and Pirates, I will continue to deduct stars⭐

Why do birds fly? Because they must fly into the sky. When the final meteorite falls in the Cretaceous period, only free birds can escape from their destined demise. In order to prevent the sun from setting, I fly into the sky and take away your light. I will melt because of it and fall to the sea. But in order to take it back, you must fly to a higher place than me. This is the logic of adulthood after transcending childhood. Ghost Face Kado heroine, author, are you filled with yellow? At first I thought there was no female protagonist, then I thought there was only one female protagonist, but it turned out to be multiple female protagonists and a young female author. You are awesome. Then I will see if I can get a long review? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Women are like giving it away for free. How have you changed some things? At first it was said that the protagonist has no feelings for girls, then he likes girls, and then he has multiple female protagonists. I thought you had no female protagonists at first, but it turns out you have multiple female protagonists, so forget it. You have to write at least a little bit of emotion. But you don't even write about emotions and there is still a young girl. Why do you like this so much? It's okay if you write many female protagonists but can't express emotions. You also write about a young girl. Fortunately, you didn't write about a young girl. How about that? If you write it, I will be the first to report it to you. I saw that it became more and more popular later on, using other people's faces to fall in love with others, and there were so many relationships.